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Randolph and Kim

05 Sep 2005 22:14 #2331 by conceptfan
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If you're enjoying this story (the next part is in the works) then you can find a little background information about Kim (and pics!!!) as part of my latest update.

www.conceptfan.com/whatsnew.html

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05 Nov 2005 00:10 #3336 by YAGS
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I just got caught up on reading chapters 5-8 of this story, and I just wanted to say that I'm enjoying it as much as your other work.

Thanks for writing such consistantly good stories, even if they are a little gorier than I'd prefer.

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05 Nov 2005 06:16 #3344 by dr lazarus
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Great story. I love the idea of a teenage girl with super-powers, especially a selfish, vain, bitchy one like Kim. :twisted:

Ursa. Her time has come.
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05 Nov 2005 09:31 #3346 by conceptfan
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Yags and Dr. Lazarus - thanks for the comments guys.

I have to agree with you both; Kim is a selfish, gory bitch. She's SO much fun to write! I think I'm in love with her...

There'll be plenty more from her (and Randolph too, of course) in the months to come.

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20 Jan 2006 04:39 #4202 by arionprime
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I wanna see more of this story bro...it has been months


sorry about the whining I just like this story

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04 Jul 2006 07:42 #6093 by dr lazarus
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Just thought I'd post a link to a huge Keeley Hazell (the model for Kim ) picture post: forums.superiorpics.com/ubbthreads/showf...Cat/0/Number/703680/

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04 Jul 2006 10:53 #6095 by conceptfan
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Just thought I'd post a link to a huge Keeley Hazell (the model for Kim ) picture post

Just what the doctor lazarus ordered! Top work.

Mmmmm. Keeeeeeeley....

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09 Oct 2006 06:37 #6982 by Berkhart
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I guess I'm really late in reading this story, but I still wanted to say...WOW! Amazing in every way! Kim is the perfect super girl, and the story itself is excellent.

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10 Oct 2006 21:06 #6992 by conceptfan
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Thanks, Berkhart. I'm glad you're enjoying the story - NEVER too late!

Having read your debut offering, I can see we like similar traits in our ubergirls. Can't wait to read Chapter 2 of Ayami.

There's a lot of folks who would say that Kim is anything BUT the "perfect supergirl", so it's great to hear that she suits some people's tastes. As for the story, well, it's a lot of fun. There's no good guys (well, none that last more than a couple of paragraphs :lol:) so it's never dull to write and trying to see the world through Kim's superhuman, spoilt, selfish and murderous eyes is quite an entertaining way to pass the time...

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11 Mar 2015 17:45 #40914 by conceptfan
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Chapters 9, 10 and 11 of Randolph and Kim are now available on my site.
evilsupergirls.com

Enjoy!
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22 Mar 2015 08:57 - 17 Aug 2017 17:55 #41107 by Monty
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OH, MY DEAR LORD!

Hasn't the lovely Kim GROWN since Randolph's super ray smashed into her now Fabulous, Swollen SUPER CHEST....

All that Super Strength captured by Kim's almost "normal" (at that time) cleavage.

She pauses below; taking a llittle intake of cool air into her Super Powerful, Newly Enhanced Lungs before unleashing a super stream of her warm, crystal optimized; powerful breath onto tons of damaged station waggon, sending it effortlessly tumbling away from her across the highway... :ohmy:





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28 Mar 2015 09:50 #41170 by Monty
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Bump!

Well two BIG BUMPS actually.... ;)

Hard to believe the thread was started nine and a half years ago!

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30 Mar 2015 09:12 #41193 by DarkNinja
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This is the Kim I remember. After nearly a decade, Keeley Hazell still looks stunning :)

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03 Apr 2015 11:57 - 03 Apr 2015 12:38 #41304 by Monty
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Here are more pics of Kim during that fateful day in San Francisco.

Kim always loved to show her nubile body in her little bikini, enjoying the attention from men wherever she strolled...apart from old perv next door who seemed to have some sort of crush on her.




Then, Randolph accidentally misfired his super-ray into Kim's chest. That split-second of carelessness would change Kim and her world forever...

The word "crush" would now take on an entirely new meaning for her...was there nothing she couldn't crush between her wonderful supercharged bosoms?



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04 Apr 2015 21:13 - 02 Jul 2016 14:46 #41324 by AuGoose
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Just playing with the Kim "before" image a bit :).

(I will eventually figure out how to display attachments in line ;))
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02 Jul 2016 13:46 - 02 Jul 2016 13:50 #48941 by Monty
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A blast from the past. I was stuck in a hospital bed last week and started reading Conceptfan's Kim on the phone. Wow! By far my favourite and what I think is his best work. It has all the ingredients with his background openings into Randolph's historical experiments, right through to the innocent accident and Kim's far-reaching powers beyond. Absolutely awesome CF!

ETA Compared with reading it for the first time over 10 years ago, it somehow reads differently now to when I was a 'noob' to the genre. Awe-inspiring!
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02 Jul 2016 14:51 #48943 by AuGoose
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A number of Concept Fan's girls are in that interesting category where they're already drop-dead gorgeous before getting empowered. I think it makes them a little easier to find promising illustrations for :).

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22 May 2018 12:55 - 22 May 2018 12:57 #59579 by Monty
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Kim was now 18 years old and the authorities had given up hope of controlling the super teen powerhouse. Then a strange thing happened...Kim agreed to not just help fight crime, but wipe out ALL crime in the city in exchange for a Super costume and forgiveness for all the trouble.she had caused the authorities over two years. It was the only way they could reign in the Super Teen and a deal was brokered with Kim....

 "Yeah, right!" said Kim at the meeting with the city officials, "I can still do WHAT I want, WHEN I want. Do you really think you can stop me?" The officers looked on as one, agape as the teenage girl wrapped the solid steel bar around her super breasts over her new costume...

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11 Jul 2018 05:47 #60121 by oldHarmonyMotion
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I miss CF again!
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18 Sep 2018 14:08 #61230 by conceptfan
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Still here.  Been sorting out some paperwork, and it's taking longer than expected as I couldn't find the pencil sharpener.
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02 Mar 2019 13:50 #63040 by Monty
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Having read Conceptfan's post about good descriptive story building and how to connect well with the reader through life-like narrative, I was looking for a suitable place to post this;

Every time I see a gasoline fuel tanker passing on the road or supplying fuel in a garage forecourt, I automatically think of Kim. I even look at the size of the wheels, the steel supports of the undercarriage, the size of the cylindrical gasoline tank, and think WOW! Even after all the years since I first read that scene. Does anyone else have the same fuel tanker-studying thoughts, even obsession, or is it just me?

A great example of CF's brilliant descriptive work.
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02 Mar 2019 18:44 #63041 by derekh48
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we really need an update to this story line

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03 Mar 2019 04:20 #63042 by ace191
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If you like Supergirls and tankers, check out D_K_C’s Ifinity Crisis Part Five on this site.

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03 Mar 2019 05:01 #63044 by lfan
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Or Part 8 of Circes Cup's Deep Down Inside!

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04 Mar 2019 20:21 #63048 by hdmk2
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I think you mean part 9, but yes good point!

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