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21 Jan 2022 02:22 #73132 by conceptfan

EnviroGirl was created by conceptfan

The first two chapters of a brand new saga are now available on my website. "Enviro Girl" stars Emily, probably the most evil character I've written. Warning: tons of violence, not suitable for anyone. Enjoy (or ignore if it's not your kind of trip) !

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21 Jan 2022 02:44 #73133 by lfan

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Instant classic! <happy dance>

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21 Jan 2022 04:54 - 21 Jan 2022 09:00 #73135 by Monty

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The new page layouts on your site from the link are brilliant!
(Especially the layouts for The Super Models and also Teuser's Formula)

I love it CF! Really, Truly Well Done!

(E.T.A. .... the image layout for Randolph and KIM is also outstanding...just because, well, she is Awesome.)

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21 Jan 2022 05:46 #73137 by 1525

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Thanks for your update, I haven't seen your new chapter for a long time.

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21 Jan 2022 09:15 #73138 by jumperprime

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Wow. Superbrat is quite the eco-terrorist. Doesn't care how many innocent people she slaughters to murder a few alleged polluters, I think Dan also needs to bring out the stick to convince her to be more alacritous with gathering the needed materials. All carrot has obviously been of limited effectiveness and after this tungsten heist it'll probably be weeks before she's willing to get another set of materials. Next time she refuses, Dan should remind her that what he gives he can take away. Maybe give her a deadline after which he'll start deactivating abilities she doesn't strictly need for the task.

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21 Jan 2022 13:53 #73139 by conceptfan

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Hi jp.

Thanks for your thoughts.

I do wonder sometimes if Emily is really acting purely out of love for Nature, or whether her motives are not so straight forward....

As for Dan, he seems to be a pretty weak personality, especially compared with Emily. He does appear to get bullied by her a lot. But how sure are we that Dan actually could "undo" any of the changes he's made?

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21 Jan 2022 14:01 - 21 Jan 2022 14:03 #73140 by Monty

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The new page layouts on your site from the link are brilliant!
(Especially the layouts for The Super Models and also Teuser's Formula)

I love it CF! Really, Truly Well Done!

(E.T.A. .... the image layout for Randolph and KIM is also outstanding...just because, well, she is Awesome.)

I was wondering and thinking if her name Kim had a special meaning for her short name... does she Know It Most?
It could be Knowledge In Muscles, or (K)orrupt In Magnificence...
Brilliant work Conceptfan!

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21 Jan 2022 17:02 #73142 by AlbertC

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good to see you coming back!

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22 Jan 2022 14:42 #73145 by papayoya1

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Brilliant story from a brilliant author! The world was missing Conceptfan's writing! It is great to get new stuff from you. Now, you only need to continue Enviro Girl and every other awesome story in your site

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22 Jan 2022 16:48 #73146 by slim36

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EnviroGirl is correct - the Earth is on the verge of ecological collapse. Will she realize the impact of her actions before she accidentally destroys the planet herself?? (oops)

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22 Jan 2022 18:38 #73147 by Gincognifo

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The name reminds me of the episode of Community where the Dean renames the college to "EnviroDale" for Green Week.

"We're already called Greendale!"

Which is a long-winded way of saying that a young Alison Brie could play EnviroGirl in the movie/Disney+ series. Assuming she can do an English accent...

Good to have you back behind the wheel, ConceptFan.

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23 Jan 2022 01:06 #73148 by Kamelmann

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Absolutely incredible

your way of writing always inspires and puts me in awe. Cracking work

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23 Jan 2022 02:08 #73149 by Monty

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Absolutely incredible your way of writing always inspires and puts me in awe. Cracking work

We all agree! Welcome back Conceptfan!

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24 Feb 2022 03:26 #73351 by dx

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More absolutely brilliant writing, can't wait for the next chapters!!

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24 Feb 2022 06:50 - 24 Feb 2022 07:37 #73352 by Monty

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More absolutely brilliant writing, can't wait for the next chapters!!

I absolutely agree! Brilliant writing Conceptfan! When you go back and re-read a paragraph with the thought 'Did I just read that?' That is Stunning Writing! Thank you Conceptfan.

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24 Feb 2022 13:19 - 25 Feb 2022 16:04 #73354 by Monty

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I have just finished reading the end of the second chapter, where Emily asks "What's this new ability then?"
Awesome Work! Can't wait for more!

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25 Feb 2022 16:03 - 26 Feb 2022 07:46 #73362 by Monty

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I really liked the portrayal of Emily being given three times the amount of her original strength by her alien co-habitor, but she then ended up asking her alien friend for thousands and thousands times the amount of her strength as a bargaining tool.
I can imagine the internal conversation as Emily would say "Three times improvement?...How about THIRTY Three THOUSAND times improvement on top of that to my new strength? and make it happen NOW!"
...A ninety nine thousand times increase from her original strength - lifting and carrying her oil tanker would be nice and easy for Emily!

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26 Feb 2022 15:50 - 26 Feb 2022 18:06 #73373 by Monty

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I have just finished reading the end of the second chapter, where Emily asks "What's this new ability then?"
Awesome Work! Can't wait for more!

I've just re-read chapter 2 where her new ability to be presented to Emily is mentioned by her alien co-habitor.
I was thinking 'What new ability could be possibly given to a girl who has everything she wants, needs and can do is at her fingertips?'
I have a strong feeling (Nowhere near as Strong as Emily)..this may be linked to her GPS powers that were one of her first requests in chapter 1.
Looking forward to finding out!

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