Transformatrix 4000 -- Comments and Suggestions

I've always wanted to see a super powered Hooters girl, so I really enjoyed the latest addition. Great stuff as always from you Argonaut!

Thanks for the props, Berkhart -- and back at you! I'm hoping for more Ayami, more Ultra Gail, and more Mary Sue in 2008.

The third and final installment of the Caitlin chapter is for you, big guy! I hope you find it "delightfully tacky, yet unrefined."

Happy New Year!!!

That was a pretty awesome addition. It should go without saying that you're one of the best at this.

Now if only Caitlin was...evil (sorry, couldn't help myself!)

That was a pretty awesome addition. It should go without saying that you're one of the best at this.

Well, it often does go without saying -- so I appreciate the feedback!

Now if only Caitlin was...evil (sorry, couldn't help myself!)

She may be a sweetheart, but she slaps two scumbags around and trashes an office!

Once again, I've posted 2/3 of a three-part chapter. Look for part 3 later tonight or tomorrow.

Not much ubergirl action in this one, but I hope my readers find it amusing.

Super-Lana:

www.superwomenmania.com/imagebank/bank/sginc/lana[2].jpg

And if you'd like to see more of her in that costume, check out the Silver Age ubergirl classic "The Battle Between Super-Lois and Super-Lana" at Ace's Comics Place (in our ImageBank).

Now that was funny.

Thank you, sgfan05! It's nice to be getting some feedback for my recent additions to the story. The third and final part of the Super-Lana story is
for you. Enjoy!

It was funny and refreshing, they had super-lana there

Hey anyone have thoughts as to how the ubergirl showdown should go?

Hey anyone have thoughts as to how the ubergirl showdown should go?

If you do, turn them into a chapter for the story!

Looking forward to it, Anon! I'm glad to see someone inject some ethnic diversity into our cast of transformees. (I don't feel knowledgable enough to do that credibly myself.) Thanks for helping to make our story interactive!

Don't really wanna spoil everyone's fun and be a dictator or anything, but...can I be honest?

Can I? Please? Really don't mean anything evil by it, it's just a thought...

Okay...we've got two T4000 story threads going. The main one, and a 'Tales from' one, for all the little one-off stories and scenes...and at the moment it seems like a lot of things that should be in the Tales one are going in the main one.

Really really don't want to spoil the flow, but...that's just the way it feels to me at the mo... :oops:

Don't really wanna spoil everyone's fun and be a dictator or anything, but...can I be honest?

Can I? Please? Really don't mean anything evil by it, it's just a thought...

Okay...we've got two T4000 story threads going. The main one, and a 'Tales from' one, for all the little one-off stories and scenes...and at the moment it seems like a lot of things that should be in the Tales one are going in the main one.

Really really don't want to spoil the flow, but...that's just the way it feels to me at the mo... :oops:

I think since they've been done to rally the troops for the fight, they're okay. Borderline but still within the story.

Don't really wanna spoil everyone's fun and be a dictator or anything, but...can I be honest?

Can I? Please? Really don't mean anything evil by it, it's just a thought...

Okay...we've got two T4000 story threads going. The main one, and a 'Tales from' one, for all the little one-off stories and scenes...and at the moment it seems like a lot of things that should be in the Tales one are going in the main one.

Really really don't want to spoil the flow, but...that's just the way it feels to me at the mo... :oops:

Since I'm the main culprit ...

1. No need to apologize for expressing an opinion on a FORUM. That's what it's for.

2. Point taken. In retrospect, I think I let the Regina sub-plot take up too much of the story. Once I wrapped that up -- finally! -- I planned to write five or six BRIEF vignettes, each showing a transformee responding to the "call to arms." But the Caitlin and Super-Lana stories grew beyond that. Yeah, the "Tales" thread -- which I myself launched -- might have been a better venue for them. Hindsight's 20-20, as they say.

3. As sgfan points out, each of my stories ends with its main character flying off to "join the posse." I presume that's what Anon has in mind for the story he's adding. So they're not entirely independent of the main story-line.

4. Bottom line, for me -- people are showing an interest in the story and contributing to it. Props to them!

5. Maybe it's time for someone to get the showdown under way ...

Has it been established where the big showdown will be taking place?

Has it been established where the big showdown will be taking place?

I had Kara and her gals heading towards the Northeast since that's where we last saw Tiff, but otherwise no one has put a location yet.

Well, anyone who thinks things have gottrn too tangled up here could try his hand at the long-abandoned WHEN WE DEAD AWAKEN....

Hey, Brad:

I was happy to see the beginning of a new Mindy Marvel story over at "Tales of the Transformatrix." That thread had been gathering cobwebs for a long time. Plus, I'm a big fan of your Mindy Marvel stories. Not many of us are writing stories with your light touch.

Of course, not many of us seem to be writing stories lately, period ... [he said guiltily].

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Argonaut

Love the new picture. I was excited to see an update to this old story thread. My wish for the new year would be to see more continuation of the stories and even more images like this one.

That really is a pretty awesome picture! You nailed her hottness, and portrayed her super strength nicely. Thanks for sharing it!