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Transformatrix 4000 -- Comments and Suggestions

05 Jun 2006 15:42 #5698 by brantley
You guys are doing a terrific job here. Maybe Spulo could also come to the rescue of "When We Dead Awaken" and thrn Argo could join in again.

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05 Jun 2006 19:47 #5700 by Spulo
I'll give it a go...

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06 Jun 2006 05:31 #5703 by jumperprime
Replied by jumperprime on topic Re: Transformatrix 4000 -- Comments and Suggestions
Spulo, Argo, you guys seem to have misread my earlier post. I posted 3 SEPERATE ideas for the beings behind the Transformatrix 4000. The aliens turning the superwomen into slave soldiers in the final phase was onyl part of the third scenario. Scenario 2 was much like that PlanetX/Planet Y bit Argo mentioned, except not quite as detailed.

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06 Jun 2006 05:50 #5704 by argonaut
Point taken, JP. Sorry.

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06 Jun 2006 05:54 #5705 by argonaut
P.S. I should be posting the next chapter tomorrow ...

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07 Jun 2006 19:24 #5724 by argonaut

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07 Jun 2006 19:51 #5725 by Spulo
Oh my yes.

Will she end up in that costume before the 'end' of the story.

Oh my I hope I so.

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07 Jun 2006 23:14 #5730 by argonaut
Well, Spulo, you've established that Kara has a trunk full of spare outfits (including variant designs) stashed under her bed ...

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07 Jun 2006 23:24 #5731 by Spulo
I must have known they'd be needed... :)

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08 Jun 2006 03:11 #5733 by argonaut
Between us, Spulo and I have added seven chapters in seven days.

I can't speak for Spulo, of course, but I'm going to be taking a break from the interactive story for a while, in the hope that some other writer (or writers!) might pick up the slack.

Maybe a chapter following up on those super-cheerleaders?

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09 Jun 2006 02:50 #5742 by argonaut
Okay, I lied.

I thought I could just quit the story cold-turkey ... but I was wong.

"Hello, my name is Argonaut ... and I'm a superwoman addict."

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09 Jun 2006 03:49 #5743 by argonaut
Oh, and I know my geography is wrong -- a southward course from any point in Texas would take you over the Pacific Ocean, missing South America by hundreds of miles. I just wanted to make the story more picturesque.

(Besides, I'm the writer who had a late-afternoon sun cast westward shadows -- see the final paragraph of "How Atalanta Kept the Bridge." :oops: )

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09 Jun 2006 20:50 #5750 by jumperprime
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Oh, and I know my geography is wrong -- a southward course from any point in Texas would take you over the Pacific Ocean, missing South America by hundreds of miles. I just wanted to make the story more picturesque.

(Besides, I'm the writer who had a late-afternoon sun cast westward shadows -- see the final paragraph of "How Atalanta Kept the Bridge." :oops: )


You mean the ATLANTIC Ocean, right? In order to get from Texas to the Pacific Ocean, you have to go in a westerly direction.

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09 Jun 2006 21:10 #5751 by argonaut
Nope. Straight south from Texas takes you over the Pacific Ocean. Check any globe or world map. (This is a great bar bet.)

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10 Jun 2006 01:30 #5752 by ace191
Right along with which is further West, Reno NV or Los Angeles CA?

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12 Jun 2006 10:57 #5767 by conceptfan
...and what DID Della wear?

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13 Jun 2006 00:11 #5775 by Hughster
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Idaho, Alaska!!! :lol:

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13 Jun 2006 04:11 #5779 by ace191
As any former YMCA leader can tell you, she wore a "New Jersey"!

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14 Jun 2006 12:01 #5801 by ultragirl
Maybe a little "softer" looking, though?

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15 Jun 2006 15:14 #5820 by Spulo
Maybe, but she's a good choice. That logo/photo of her at the top of the page is a bit creepy though...

Any ideas for Jill Henderson?

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21 Jun 2006 03:10 #5866 by ultragirl
Oh! I hope I didn't kill it! I think I followed the story correctly, right?

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21 Jun 2006 17:09 #5878 by jumperprime
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Oh! I hope I didn't kill it! I think I followed the story correctly, right?


Don't worry, Ultra. Your installment was fine. the beauty of a story like this is that there is no one 'right' way to do things. Everyone's got their own take on the storyline and a pretty interesting storyline can be created, as a result

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21 Jun 2006 18:55 #5884 by ultragirl
Yeah, but you don't want to completely alter the storyline so that it no longer makes sense. Example: It was mentioned that Denise's house was surrounded. If someone hadn't written in that it was taken care of and I wrote Denise as showing up without a soul in sight the audience would scratch their head. ?????

I just hadn't heard anything from anyone, so I was worried.

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21 Jun 2006 19:09 #5885 by Spulo
I was worried that I'd killed it (and WWDA), seeing as how mine was the last episode so far. But no, yours was great.

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