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Next Part of Michelle's Meteor Memento now on!
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Good stuff. Thank you.
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There's a continuing undercurrent of hints that Michelle's superpowers may not be the free lunch that she might wish. I'm interested to see how Michelle and Amanda take different approaches to their transformations.
There is a catch, of course. How much of a bad thing this is depends on who you ask.
I hope Amanda doesn't get hoodwinked by that jerk Fred again.
Amanda knows that Fred hides something and she wants to find out what that is. Right now she has the advantage that Fred considers her two different people. Who can blame her for not trusting him enough to tell him that she is 'Devil'.
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Keep up the good work!
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The Highlander wrote: ...and the possibility that the kidnapping at the end was some sort of setup.
How did you come to that conclusion?
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Maybe someone else found some seeds as well, planted them, got some juice from the plant, and the drug addict got some, then after changing back took a hit of her usual dosage not realizing that it would kill her.
It's a bit more complicated, but close enough I already know how this particular plotline ends, but it will take a while to get there.
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I look forward to more.
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JKIJ wrote: I liked the new chapter every bit as much as the previous ones. I find it interesting that when someone takes the super-potion they get an extra bunch of chromosomes. That will probably make it more difficult for Michelle and Amanda to maintain a secret identity. I wonder what effect the extra bits of DNA will have on their ability to have children and any children they do have.
I look forward to more.
They won't be happy to learn that they can't have children with normal men. Luckily neither of them wants to become a mother asap.
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The dead drug addict raises a question I asked in connection with a previous chapter -- namely, whether the plant is sentient and has some purpose in conferring super-powers on Michelle and others. Hopefully time will tell. I'm a little surprised that Michelle hasn't looked for more of the plants at the meteor site.
I like the fact that the girls' super-powers don't come with an instruction manual. It's been interesting to see them experiment with their powers, discover new ones, and make mistakes using them. That's a big part of your story's appeal.
It looks as if the existence of one or more super-women will soon be public knowledge. I wonder if James will start to connect the dots. (I hope we see him in the next chapter.) And there are hints that Fred may have a secret or two of his own, or am I reading too much into the scene in his hospital room? So many questions!
This story continues to be a fun ride. Looking forward to Chapter 6!
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argonaut wrote: The dead drug addict raises a question I asked in connection with a previous chapter -- namely, whether the plant is sentient and has some purpose in conferring super-powers on Michelle and others. Hopefully time will tell. I'm a little surprised that Michelle hasn't looked for more of the plants at the meteor site.
Interesting. Didn't expect that the dead drug addict might raise this particular question. As for Michelle not searching the meteor site, it's been thoroughly searched and if there was a seed it's somewhere in a lab right now... Michelle herself found her seed somewhere on a sidewalk, so she can only guess that it's related to the meteor.
argonaut wrote: I like the fact that the girls' super-powers don't come with an instruction manual. It's been interesting to see them experiment with their powers, discover new ones, and make mistakes using them. That's a big part of your story's appeal.
Thanks, I'm trying to walk the thin line between instinctively knowing how to use their powers and having no actual experience with them. Speaking of experimentation: Did anybody figure out what Michelle's 'Plan B' was?
argonaut wrote: It looks as if the existence of one or more super-women will soon be public knowledge. I wonder if James will start to connect the dots. (I hope we see him in the next chapter.) And there are hints that Fred may have a secret or two of his own, or am I reading too much into the scene in his hospital room? So many questions!
Of course James will appear in the next chapter. And no, you're not reading too much into the scene in the hospital room - Amanda became aware of that as well. I can only say stay tuned!
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Caylane wrote: We can only hope the next chapter will be finished soon! I haven't had this much fun reading a series since the Serena stories.
You're praising me way too much here.
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njae wrote:
Caylane wrote: We can only hope the next chapter will be finished soon! I haven't had this much fun reading a series since the Serena stories.
You're praising me way too much here.
writers can never be praised enough!!!
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Anyway Part 7 is now in the banks and as always I'd like to hear your opinion since that's where my motivation comes from.
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njae wrote: Opening a new thread for each new instalment gets a bit boring, so I think it's better to continue using this one.
Anyway Part 7 is now in the banks and as always I'd like to hear your opinion since that's where my motivation comes from.
Excellent news! Thanks again and always for this awesome story.
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goobers wrote: whoa, didn't know you decided to publish
I mentioned it several times in the chat before I published it
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(maybe this is why nobody comes)
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I will be interested to see where the autopsy on the prostitute goes and what it is about Professor Harland's methods that James dislikes.
Bring on part 8 whenever it's ready.
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