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04 Aug 2013 14:15 #32557
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hope the delay of the post is nothing seriuos...
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04 Aug 2013 14:24 #32558
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The posting is indeed delayed (relative to when I thought it would be done) but, no, it's nothing serious. Just had to deal with several things in real life, and also am working on a second project on the side. Hang tight, and thanks for the continued interest!!
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04 Aug 2013 14:33 #32559
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thanks yu for your quick reply ! Hope the delivery will be soon anyway..cheers from Italy
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05 Oct 2013 18:21 #33333
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I just uploaded Parts 27-30 of Deep Down Inside. They'll post to the story ticker after an administrator reviews them. Thanks as always to LFan for the beta review, and also apologies to him for ignoring half of his advice.
The story sometimes seems to take on a mind of its own. It took a number of re-writes to corral these sections, and to get them moving in the direction I wanted.
When they were finally complete, the four sections totaled about 20,000 words. Hope you enjoy!
The story sometimes seems to take on a mind of its own. It took a number of re-writes to corral these sections, and to get them moving in the direction I wanted.
When they were finally complete, the four sections totaled about 20,000 words. Hope you enjoy!
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05 Oct 2013 19:27 #33335
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Tank yu ! and now I definitely can't wait to read....so administrator we all count in you 
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05 Oct 2013 20:16 - 05 Oct 2013 21:55 #33338
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It's posted....come and get it!
ElF
P.S. No apologies needed, Cup! It's another fantastic continuation!
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P.S. No apologies needed, Cup! It's another fantastic continuation!
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05 Oct 2013 21:48 #33341
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I read superfem writings from 1994 and i definitely Have to Say that DDI is, with some from Happiest in Shadows, Dru and Concepfan, the closest to my ideal....
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06 Oct 2013 13:24 #33346
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Readin the last chapter it is possibile a prosecution, from part 31...the girls want very much to take off the entire planet at this point...and the same developing of the story semestre to be' not complete..so Circes will be other parts ?
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06 Oct 2013 14:43 #33349
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An excellent continuation indeed. I think Circes has kept the pace of his epic, and more than lived up to expectation...which is pretty high considering what he's done so far.
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06 Oct 2013 22:03 #33353
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I believe you're asking about the increasinly tyrranical urges the girls are experiencing, as a result of the machinations of their inner devices. Yes, the girls are certainly beginning to struggle with the fact that the machines are driving them to be more and more tyrannical. But the last few paragraphs of Part 30 also try to suggest that the girls, or at least Tammy, recongize peril of listening to their inner urges. As we leave off Part 30, this issue is unresolved. But rest assured we have not seen the last of this dilemna....
Thanks for reading!
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superhumanteenlover wrote: Readin the last chapter it is possibile a prosecution, from part 31...the girls want very much to take off the entire planet at this point...and the same developing of the story semestre to be' not complete..so Circes will be other parts ?
I believe you're asking about the increasinly tyrranical urges the girls are experiencing, as a result of the machinations of their inner devices. Yes, the girls are certainly beginning to struggle with the fact that the machines are driving them to be more and more tyrannical. But the last few paragraphs of Part 30 also try to suggest that the girls, or at least Tammy, recongize peril of listening to their inner urges. As we leave off Part 30, this issue is unresolved. But rest assured we have not seen the last of this dilemna....
Thanks for reading!
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06 Oct 2013 22:09 #33354
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Thank you to everone who has taken a moment to say a word of support on this, well, marathon of a project.
Several housekeeping notes:
1) As usual, Part 27 contains a synopsis of the plot to this point. The intention here was to give newly arrived readers a chance to jump in at the current stories, wihtout having to read half a novel to understand the context of Parts 27-30. I want this story to be as accessible as poosible to newly arrived readers.
2) I am working on 31-33 now, and expect to post them after the October workshop's exclusivity period ends. I imagine that new postings will be permitted on or near the end of the month.
Several housekeeping notes:
1) As usual, Part 27 contains a synopsis of the plot to this point. The intention here was to give newly arrived readers a chance to jump in at the current stories, wihtout having to read half a novel to understand the context of Parts 27-30. I want this story to be as accessible as poosible to newly arrived readers.
2) I am working on 31-33 now, and expect to post them after the October workshop's exclusivity period ends. I imagine that new postings will be permitted on or near the end of the month.
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07 Oct 2013 07:09 #33361
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I so love this story. I had almost forgotten about it even though it is one of my all time favourite ones.
Thanx for bringing it back alive.
Thanx for bringing it back alive.
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29 Oct 2013 12:06 #33867
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Just uploaded a little something for Halloween. Read it with the lights off.
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29 Oct 2013 17:42 #33877
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I want to not lie and I have to tell you I prefer the parts of the novel where there's moore action, heavy action I mean thinkng about what the girls can (and want) to do to dominate the world...but thanks yu anyway for this Halloween-gift !
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30 Oct 2013 03:46 #33889
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Thank you for sharing.
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circes_cup wrote: Just uploaded a little something for Halloween. Read it with the lights off.
Thank you for sharing.
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30 Oct 2013 12:27 #33893
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Thank you Circes. The scariest thing about this halloween special is how bloody good it is.
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08 Nov 2013 01:57 #34130
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You'd think that superspeed would make me more punctual, huh?
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Just read the new chapters. I think Jared is my favorite character out of everyone.
You'd think that superspeed would make me more punctual, huh?
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08 Nov 2013 04:30 #34133
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Its good-
it seems to be building to something, which the lack of i felt was a little bit of the weakness of the story so far- but the stories always have a sence "This is amoral universe, but it knows what morality is" which works really well for it, and you have a great sence of description.
Beyond any kind of super feats or anything i really do want to see how it ends-which is a mark for any story. hope it gets there.
it seems to be building to something, which the lack of i felt was a little bit of the weakness of the story so far- but the stories always have a sence "This is amoral universe, but it knows what morality is" which works really well for it, and you have a great sence of description.
Beyond any kind of super feats or anything i really do want to see how it ends-which is a mark for any story. hope it gets there.
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08 Nov 2013 13:08 #34147
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I must disagree with my good mate Castor on one thing. I DON'T want to this end. More...(Dru rubs his greedy hands together...)
But seriously...how could such an epic come to a satisfying conclusion? I have a feeling that Circes has enough talent to show us...one day. But let's not rush into anything.........
But seriously...how could such an epic come to a satisfying conclusion? I have a feeling that Circes has enough talent to show us...one day. But let's not rush into anything.........
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08 Nov 2013 14:27 #34149
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Echoes my sentiments perfectly.....I realize all good things must come to an end, but we can hope they don't....
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Dru1076 wrote: I must disagree with my good mate Castor on one thing. I DON'T want to this end. More...(Dru rubs his greedy hands together...)
But seriously...how could such an epic come to a satisfying conclusion? I have a feeling that Circes has enough talent to show us...one day. But let's not rush into anything.........
Echoes my sentiments perfectly.....I realize all good things must come to an end, but we can hope they don't....
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08 Nov 2013 15:56 #34155
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A heartfelt thank-you to everyone who has posted positive comments, both in this forum and at the bottom of the stories. You all need to know that, after 34 chapters, the encouragement means even more to me now than it did in the beginning. This project requires endurance.
Also, nothing is more flattering than hearing a few of you say "don't let it end!" But, in my view, it's the endings -- or our awareness of them -- that give every moment its force and meaning. We roll out of bed in the morning not because the sun has risen, but because we are aware that the day is limited.
You can feel the plot gaining momentum. An end is coming.
Also, nothing is more flattering than hearing a few of you say "don't let it end!" But, in my view, it's the endings -- or our awareness of them -- that give every moment its force and meaning. We roll out of bed in the morning not because the sun has risen, but because we are aware that the day is limited.
You can feel the plot gaining momentum. An end is coming.
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08 Nov 2013 18:14 #34161
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I hope the end will be as late as possible because the developing possibilities of this great saga are too much...especially the mental fight inside the girls between the good and the evil is very stimulating; the absurdity of their power in front of their mental weakeness sometimes can bring them to do things that descripted as yu do is awesome.
We all hope (me surely) that before the end and before all girls maybe will stop forever to follow the urge of dominate tyranically they will do some (many !) other even more titanic feats of strengt and invulnerability then in the previous chapters,....
and the question about when part 34-35 is ready
We all hope (me surely) that before the end and before all girls maybe will stop forever to follow the urge of dominate tyranically they will do some (many !) other even more titanic feats of strengt and invulnerability then in the previous chapters,....
and the question about when part 34-35 is ready
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14 Nov 2013 15:56 #34268
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could yu tell us when next insallment?
I think the girls want to try as much as they can to find a limit to their power and it open incredible possibilities to what they can do....after maybe they can change mind , donno, if evil or good but beofre my dream is that they must try bigger anf bigger things...
I think the girls want to try as much as they can to find a limit to their power and it open incredible possibilities to what they can do....after maybe they can change mind , donno, if evil or good but beofre my dream is that they must try bigger anf bigger things...
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14 Nov 2013 15:58 #34269
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of course just my little 2 cents...very little
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16 Nov 2013 00:09 #34297
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Thanks for the comments. I think you've very accurtately identified some of the key themes -- the good versus the evil, the increasingly titanic nature of their power, the superness of their bodies versus the frailty (or at least normalcy) of their minds. I've tried my best to weave that stuff into the story, and hope that it is visible there.
I may be able to get 35 posted shortly. But I haven't even started on 36. And even if I had, I need to priortize some real life matters over the next few weeks and won't have much time for this. Therefore, 36 is a ways off.
Nonetheless, the continued disucssion does a great deal for keeping my motivation up and keeping this project going. So, again, thanks for the comments!
I may be able to get 35 posted shortly. But I haven't even started on 36. And even if I had, I need to priortize some real life matters over the next few weeks and won't have much time for this. Therefore, 36 is a ways off.
Nonetheless, the continued disucssion does a great deal for keeping my motivation up and keeping this project going. So, again, thanks for the comments!
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