Sonofjack's Angel stories

Hey! It's me, Sonofjack. Thanks for the mention. Of course, I would love to know what others think of my stories . . . .

sonofjack wrote: Hey! It's me, Sonofjack. Thanks for the mention. Of course, I would love to know what others think of my stories . . . .

Well since there not formally posted I'll give em some quick feedback here.

Both stories do a good job of creating a character and a world. Theres a fantasy element to it obviously, but i like it seems set-theres a fixedness to the stories in a kind of reality that i like, yet the stories are both very casual. shes a very causual and almost relaxed supergirl- and even as she turns into a sex crezed face sitter theres a strong sence of innoccence.

Its something i often try to get across in my own stories-that if one is really verypowerful-that doesn't make you into a quippy badass-but probabbly kind of relaxed.

There are stuff there that isn't my cup of tea, but keep at it and keep writing. Theres a talent for turning ideas into stories that you have a good eye for. Good job.

I guess I didn't really think of the sexual domination as "punishment" since the boys involved were all smiling at the end.

Having looked at sonofjack's other stories on Valkyrie, I can see that he has a very specific focus in his writing -- exceptionally strong women that use their power to completely dominate their relationships, particularly with their husbands. The husbands comply partly out of desire and partly out of fear. There's lots of dominant / submissive play in the bedroom.

That is a very different focus than what we usually see on this site. But personally, I like it. His story Caught (www.thevalkyrie.com/stories/1misc32/caught.txt) is particularly good.

Sonofjack, one potential new direction in your writing would be to have the male characters experience a more complete, 180-degree transformation in their desires, and to have that transformation be the focus and arc of the story. In many of your stories, the men recognize the dominance of their partner from the get-go. They are turned on by female muscle almost from the start. It would be interesting to see a story where the man starts out completely unwilling to be the lesser partner, completely turned off by female strength, but finds his desires changing the longer he knows her.

Hey all, good to see this topic here, I haven't really talked much on the forum, but I have to put my two cents in here. First of all, I'm Jeremy Wilson, the DtV author who requested that SonofJack did these stories, and they were written pretty much to my specifications, I love seeing girls dominate boys in sports, especially if the odds are well against her. Angel is incredibly fast, agile, smart, strong, determined, and her stamina is probably without equal as well. I love that in stories and I am glad that SonofJack was able to really bring that out with his awesome descriptions. Thanks a lot SoJ, and thanks everyone who liked it.