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Gloria
26 Mar 2014 02:13 #35914
by shadar
Gloria was created by shadar
I've submitted the story Gloria to the library ... not sure how long it takes to be reviewed and posted, but keep an eye out for it. Might be kinda long (about 9k words), but hopefully it will keep your interest.
Gloria is a character who will soon show up in the ongoing Kiraling story, but given she makes a very unusual appearance in that story, Anonyz asked me to write her backstory and publish it first.
Gloria's story is told through her eyes, and she's the story protagonist. She's on a battlecruiser in deep space when it comes under violent attack. She kills many injured and helpless Terrans with her bare hands... yet she's a hero.
Trust me.
Shadar
Gloria is a character who will soon show up in the ongoing Kiraling story, but given she makes a very unusual appearance in that story, Anonyz asked me to write her backstory and publish it first.
Gloria's story is told through her eyes, and she's the story protagonist. She's on a battlecruiser in deep space when it comes under violent attack. She kills many injured and helpless Terrans with her bare hands... yet she's a hero.
Trust me.
Shadar
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26 Mar 2014 05:52 #35916
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Actually, Shadar, as a fellow, and almost certainly more worthy, member of the Legend club, all your stories go up instantly when you submit them, so your story went up before this thread did! Good to see you back at again, and I look forward to reading your latest.
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26 Mar 2014 18:09 #35931
by shadar
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I hadn't realized. How wonderful. Hopefully the sequel to Gloria I'm scribbling now will be worthy. She needs to get into some serious ubergirl stuff with the other Arions in order to get away. The grizzled Marines who were hazing her with their racist jokes and dissing on her in the Mess will be singing a very different tune soon.
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Dru1076 wrote: Actually, Shadar, as a fellow, and almost certainly more worthy, member of the Legend club, all your stories go up instantly when you submit them, so your story went up before this thread did! Good to see you back at again, and I look forward to reading your latest.
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26 Mar 2014 19:37 - 26 Mar 2014 19:39 #35936
by shadar
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Here's the photo I used to depict how Gloria looks while I was writing the powering-up scene. She's briefly drunk on the arrogance and privilege of becoming a hundred times stronger than even the superhuman Betans, her body vibrating with nearly irresistible desire, a hair's breadth away from losing it completely, her breasts swelling with Orgone power as she prepares to face down the Terrans and their powerful weapons.
Thankfully, she mostly comes back to herself after her hormones settle down a bit.
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28 Mar 2014 02:37 #35950
by shadar
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There is something odd going on with the Gloria story. When I read the latest comment (Brantley's), the link takes me to a copy of Gloria that has only this one comment.
When I klick on the other comments, it takes me to a copy of Gloria that has all the other comments attached.
I made a couple of minor edits in the story after I first posted it, and now I'm wondering if there are multiple copies in different states of edit, or if there is something weird with the commenting machinery.
Anyone got any ideas?
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When I klick on the other comments, it takes me to a copy of Gloria that has all the other comments attached.
I made a couple of minor edits in the story after I first posted it, and now I'm wondering if there are multiple copies in different states of edit, or if there is something weird with the commenting machinery.
Anyone got any ideas?
Shadar
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28 Mar 2014 08:33 #35952
by Woodclaw
Okay, I've checked the backend and I can see only a single copy of the story so no double posting or anything similar, still I have the same problem as Shadar from the front-end. Considering Brantley's previous post I guess there's something weird going on, I'll pass the ball to Fats.
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shadar wrote: There is something odd going on with the Gloria story. When I read the latest comment (Brantley's), the link takes me to a copy of Gloria that has only this one comment.
When I klick on the other comments, it takes me to a copy of Gloria that has all the other comments attached.
I made a couple of minor edits in the story after I first posted it, and now I'm wondering if there are multiple copies in different states of edit, or if there is something weird with the commenting machinery.
Anyone got any ideas?
Shadar
Okay, I've checked the backend and I can see only a single copy of the story so no double posting or anything similar, still I have the same problem as Shadar from the front-end. Considering Brantley's previous post I guess there's something weird going on, I'll pass the ball to Fats.
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28 Mar 2014 09:57 #35955
by brantley
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I didn't see any previous comments on the story (as opposed to the picture) when I posted mine. That seemed strange.
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28 Mar 2014 11:10 #35956
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Even stranger is the fact that the header section (posting date etc) of the story you commented on is different from all the others, but the ID number in the Library is the same as the other one.
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brantley wrote: I didn't see any previous comments on the story (as opposed to the picture) when I posted mine. That seemed strange.
--Brantley
Even stranger is the fact that the header section (posting date etc) of the story you commented on is different from all the others, but the ID number in the Library is the same as the other one.
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28 Mar 2014 11:28 #35957
by fats
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ok, the issue reported has been looked into and there are a few errors in the DB that need fixed, i'll be looking in this today and it should be sorted later on.
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28 Mar 2014 16:13 #35958
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Tks, Fats. Hate it when the DB screws up.
fats wrote: ok, the issue reported has been looked into and there are a few errors in the DB that need fixed, i'll be looking in this today and it should be sorted later on.
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28 Mar 2014 22:11 #35963
by brantley
By any chance do you come from Minnesota?
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shadar wrote: Tks, Fats. Hate it when the DB screws up.
fats wrote: ok, the issue reported has been looked into and there are a few errors in the DB that need fixed, i'll be looking in this today and it should be sorted later on.
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By any chance do you come from Minnesota?
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31 Mar 2014 00:32 #35976
by shadar
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Just posted Gloria, Part Two. It's not easy to escape an Arion warship and its Primal Captain.
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05 Apr 2014 18:07 #36072
by shadar
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By the way, that weird bug is back... whenever Brantley comments on either of the Gloria stories, all the other comments disappear at the bottom of the story, leaving only his. As far as I know, it only affects Brantley's comments on the Gloria story.
But... if I go back to earlier comments and click on them, that takes me to a 'version' of the story where I see all the previous comments but not his.
It's like the story forks into two separate comment paths after he comments.
How weird.
Shadar
But... if I go back to earlier comments and click on them, that takes me to a 'version' of the story where I see all the previous comments but not his.
It's like the story forks into two separate comment paths after he comments.
How weird.
Shadar
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05 Apr 2014 19:26 #36073
by fats
This is very weird, i'm going to do more investigations into this and will report back when i have a solution.
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shadar wrote: By the way, that weird bug is back... whenever Brantley comments on either of the Gloria stories, all the other comments disappear at the bottom of the story, leaving only his. As far as I know, it only affects Brantley's comments on the Gloria story.
But... if I go back to earlier comments and click on them, that takes me to a 'version' of the story where I see all the previous comments but not his.
It's like the story forks into two separate comment paths after he comments.
How weird.
Shadar
This is very weird, i'm going to do more investigations into this and will report back when i have a solution.
Fats
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