Not the One - Return to Earth

Only elaborated to make sure people don't think I meant DA, really. I could see a possibility of that happening. As I said...and by God I meant it...last I will say one the matter.

Now...go read Not the One...I think it's progressing nicely! Oh...and check out Lfan's SENsational here in the library. It's good!

njae wrote:

Dru1076 wrote: ...
Now...go read Not the One...I think it's progressing nicely! Oh...and check out Lfan's SENsational here in the library. It's good!

You shameless self-promoter

Oh no!! They're on to me!!

Susan's actions begin to gain attention from further afield, and her girls continue to enjoy themselves and their indomitable power levels, in the newest chapter of Not the One. Find it here:

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Dru1076 wrote: Susan's actions begin to gain attention from further afield, and her girls continue to enjoy themselves and their indomitable power levels, in the newest chapter of Not the One. Find it here:

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And it's already in the bundle, waiting.

When pt 8 is ready I'll send it to you by email, Woody.

Not the One continues, with the North Korean's trying nuclear bombs, and Kethlen rallying his fellow captives for a desperate bid at freedom. Unfortunately for them, they're in a story written by yours truly...and I can't see them getting the better of the girls, to be honest! Check it out...Wooclaw has bundled the last four chapters, including the latest one, into the library here:

www.superwomenmania.com/index.php?option...ter-05-08&Itemid=212

Was a little sad to see a group of votes pop into my last update that made the overall rating drop from 5 to 2 stars. I rather strongly suspect this a rating on me rather than the story. Someone sure don't like the old Dru, Huh? I can live with that. Give me all the half or one star ratings you like, I'm not going to stop writing this one!

Dru1076 wrote: Was a little sad to see a group of votes pop into my last update that made the overall rating drop from 5 to 2 stars. I rather strongly suspect this a rating on me rather than the story. Someone sure don't like the old Dru, Huh? I can live with that. Give me all the half or one star ratings you like, I'm not going to stop writing this one!

Unfortunatly, I noticed this habit too.
I hope to be wrong, but something I can't help but think that some votes are more votes for or against the author, instead of the story itself (especially during some very one-sided pools).
I'm glad to see that you're taking it with ease though. In my mind an author should write what he thinks works best, not just what satisfy the "needs" of the public. There are already too many professional authors that does that, lets just save the net from it.

Big thanks to everyone who helped lift my average back up. To see so many votes come in so quickly turned my small frown into a big smile. I was so happy I went ahead and wrote another chapter. Part 9 sees Liz play around a bit, and Susan deal with Kim Yong-Un once and for all.

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The terrible tale of Susan's selfish quest for domination of the multiverse continues, as she gives the world another demonstration and gives her girls new powers with which to enforce her will on her first conquest, all while her two demigods harvest her next haul of power-rings for her. Read all about on my DA page...

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I just uploaded the next part of Return to Earth. Part 11 sees Liz start a new game, and we learn more about Sun Hee's plans for her brother's future...

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Part 12 is ready to go. It will be bundled up and deposited in the library here soon...in the meantime, if you want to know how many rings the Harem Girls gather first time out and you really can't wait, then you can check out the latest part at DA.

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Dru1076 wrote: Part 12 is ready to go. It will be bundled up and deposited in the library here soon...in the meantime, if you want to know how many rings the Harem Girls gather first time out and you really can't wait, then you can check out the latest part at DA.

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And there they are all bundled and ready

Pt 13 is now up and ready for reading. This time out, Susan makes a very important announcment, and the Harem Girls make a very important decision while enjoying their day off. Read all about it here:

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I know I didn't have her actually say it, but I don't think any men will be successful in their application. She is not above offering false hope.

Well, I've been at it again and there's another chapter of Not the One now ready. Susan amps up her little army and gives them a new ability, and Liz play with her first hitmen.

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I think I can easily answer your questions, mate.

1. Susan's home will be the largest single building on Earth when completed. It's actual size is, and I'm using the technical term here, bloody big.

2. The iron ore is needed to make munitions...they need other stuff too, but I don't really know much about weapons manufacturing to be honest. Having playtime with armies every afternoon chews a lot of resources.

3. Susan can alter her physical appearance dramatically, so her height varies depending on how tall she desires to be.

I hope this helps!