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Not the One - Return to Earth

28 Aug 2014 12:38 #37909 by Dru1076
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The story continues, with a glimpse into the life of a superpowered border guard, another hitman and more mob bosses for Liz, Sun Hee gives her brother the cold shoulder...and then some, while Susan makes another TV appearance.

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29 Aug 2014 03:17 #37919 by Dru1076
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With only two chapters to go before the end of Return to Earth, I find myself wondering what to write next. Should I rewrite Sandra? Perhaps a few new MobGirl stories? Or maybe I should take a break...I know I feel like one. I've been working pretty hard and there's been much less interest in my latest stories. Perhaps I'm writing too much?

What do you guys think? A reimagining of Sandra, more Mobgirl, something completely new, or should I just bugger off for a while and go surfing? It'll be Spring here soon and the weather is starting to warm up...

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29 Aug 2014 03:28 #37920 by Raa
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Some down time is always a good thing. Do a recharge. But if you really feel the need to write stuff, I have always enjoyed your mobgirl stories.
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29 Aug 2014 03:48 #37921 by steelknight3000
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Take some time off then do another Sandra story, that was a great character.
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29 Aug 2014 04:20 #37922 by castor
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Come up with something new- your a creative guy Dru, and i think your best stuff is often your first stuff

that or go back to your western story-i liked that one a lot.
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29 Aug 2014 10:54 #37923 by SCOTT R
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Take a break Dru; you deserve it man.
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29 Aug 2014 13:17 #37924 by pithlit
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Take a break so your next stories will be as amazing as your current ones.

I check this board every day hoping that you have posted a new story. I think the interests is there. We are mostly just quiet about it.
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30 Aug 2014 03:29 #37931 by pithlit
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But a continuation of Sandra would be great after your break.
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01 Sep 2014 03:44 #37964 by Dru1076
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Thanks for the responses guys, it's much appreciated. I think I will take a break for while once NTO: RTE is done, and use that time to think about the next project. I will probably stick with my original plan and write a new version of Sandra...only time will tell!
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01 Sep 2014 09:11 #37965 by Woodclaw
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Well Dru ever since you came back, you've been on a creative rollercoaster, putting out stories faster and faster. While I hope tht you can keep up, I see that you are probably burned out by now. I would suggest slowing down and maybe try to write some self contained stuff, just to break the tension of serial production.
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01 Sep 2014 17:58 #37970 by circes_cup
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After your two long serial stories, yes, a break is definitely in order! If you're anything like me, you probably came up with a number of story ideas during your writing of the last two. My suggestion: write it all down, mull it all over and take your time. Rather than charge into the next project now, use the downtime to refine your thinking on the next story. Whatever you wind up doing next should be worthy of the amount of time it's going to consume.
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19 Sep 2014 12:13 #38166 by Dru1076
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One step closer to the end...Not the One: Return to Earth 16 sees Susan cash in once more on what her girls have gathered for her, and she unleashes the might of new recruit upon a new conquest.

Seeing that the next on will definitely be the end of Return to Earth, I'm going to wait until the last chapter is done before I post it here...rather than have one little chapter hanging on it's ownsome. Until then...find it here:

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19 Sep 2014 18:19 #38171 by Woodclaw
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Dru1076 wrote: One step closer to the end...Not the One: Return to Earth 16 sees Susan cash in once more on what her girls have gathered for her, and she unleashes the might of new recruit upon a new conquest.

Seeing that the next on will definitely be the end of Return to Earth, I'm going to wait until the last chapter is done before I post it here...rather than have one little chapter hanging on it's ownsome. Until then...find it here:

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Well, Dru the final chapter of From Strength to Strength was a stand alone, so publishing Return to Earth in the same format won't be that strange, but it's your call.

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20 Sep 2014 14:13 #38203 by smoki07
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what nxt, the Darkness vs Susan !!!!!!!!!???
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23 Nov 2014 05:33 #39095 by Dru1076
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After what has been a rather interesting two months in my little bubble of reality I have finally managed to throw part 17 together. I hope you find it worth the wait. I have put it up on DA, and it should make an appearance in the library here. Enjoy!

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23 Nov 2014 09:48 #39098 by Woodclaw
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Dru1076 wrote: After what has been a rather interesting two months in my little bubble of reality I have finally managed to throw part 17 together. I hope you find it worth the wait. I have put it up on DA, and it should make an appearance in the library here. Enjoy!

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Work is in progress ;)
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23 Nov 2014 10:16 #39099 by Woodclaw
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The final 5 chapters of "Return to Earth" are now in the Library. Acording to Dru's request chapter 17 has been bundled together with 13-16, opposite to what was done with the final chapter of "From Strength to Strength".
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23 Nov 2014 22:00 - 23 Nov 2014 22:12 #39108 by Dru1076
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It's all over now, or is that for now? Susan has found out there is a purpose to the rings, and those who monitor them have seen their worst fears realised. I'll start the next book in Not the One once I get a few other projects out of the way, which should be early in the new year.

Thanks to everyone who offered feedback! And thanks to Woodclaw for getting the last chapter into the library so fast.
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