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My first story ever part 2

03 Jul 2015 03:32 #42978 by littlematt
My first story ever part 2 was created by littlematt
Here is part 2. Thank you to everyone who read my first story ever.

So we left the bar and continued our walk back to the hotel. Both of us were quiet.

“Ok” I said “what was all that about?”

“I don’t know what came over me. At first I just wanted to humiliate the guy a little then something changed in me. I felt this hot rush of energy come over me. Then I wanted to hurt him.

We had stopped under a street light. I could see her glowing with excitement.

“Go on. I know there is more.” I said.

“I felt like I wanted to destroy him. I could give him more pain just by wiggling my toes.”

“That is a far cry for the woman who helps adults learn to read.” I said

“I know, this sort of sadistic feeling just came over me. He was on the floor in so much pain, pain that I was causing and hearing him beg for my mercy. Do you know what the scary part was” she asked?

“No, what was that” I could feel my heart beating faster.

“I did not want to give to give him my mercy. I loved hearing him begging and yelling at the pain I was causing him. It was such a turn on. The power I had over him. He was nothing more then a toy for me to play with.”

“WOW” was all I could think to say. Trying to cool down the conversation I remarked “I wonder what other powers you have?”

“I don’t know but I want to find out, like right now” her enthusiasm was contagious.

“We need to find an warehouse or and empty building somewhere we can try out these new powers of yours.” I was looking up and down the street.

Smiling her biggest smile “three blocks over there is a building that will be perfect.”

“How do you know that?” I was looking confused

“I can see right through all these buildings. It’s a big four story warehouse.” Taking my hand. “come on let’s go!”

We made it to the the door of a very abandoned warehouse. The brick structure had all its windows bored up and there was a very old and very big padlock on the door.

“All we have to do is figure a way in and we’ll be in business.” I said

My wife reached out grabbing the lock that was almost as big as her hand. With what looked to be very little effort on her part she began to squeeze the lock. I could hear the metal begin to give way and soon she was kneading the lock like it was a ball of dough.

“Be careful, don’t break a nail” I joked

“hmhmhm” was here only response.

She reached over and ran her fingers down the brick wall cutting four perfect grooves in the bricks. She examined her hands turning them back and forth.
“I didn’t even chip the nail polish” she reached out and stroked my face “so soft yet so powerful.” she said.

She pulled the lock off and continued to work the metal.

“This feels like play dough”

She worked the now soft metal into a ball. I pushed on the door, it was solid and it was very stuck. I put my shoulder into “ouch” Looking at my wife “you want to take care of this?”

Approaching the door she pulled back a fist and slammed it in to the door. The door did not move but there was now a hole in the door.

“Nice work SuperWife.” I smiled at her

“I’ll show you nice work.”

She walk over to a trash dumpster, grabbing the back half she picked it up as easily as a football. She fired the dumpster right at the door with an explosive crash she took out the door and most of the building around the door.

I told her “I don’t know what is more impressive you throwing a 1500 pound trash can or throwing a 1500 pound trash can in heels.”

She asked “how did you know it was 1500 pounds?”

I replied “because that is what it said on the side as it was whizzing past my head.”

“Oh sorry” she said biting her lower lip. “come on let’s go”
The ground floor was cover with bricks from around the door and stuff you would expect to find in a abandoned warehouse.

“So what should we try first? she asked

“Well so far you are kind of like Superman” I said

With her hands on her hips she asked “Do I look anything like Superman?”

Smiling at her “What I meant there sassy britches, is that you seem to have the same kind of powers as him.”

Hands still on hips “I know what you meant. I want to try to fly. How do you think I do that?”

“Try yelling up up and away as you leap off the ground.” I joked

She did leap off the ground and straight through 4 floors and the roof. I was left covered in dust and coughing. About 5 minutes latter Nancy came busting back through the ceiling.

“That was amazing” she exclaimed “I don’t know how far up I went but I was higher then the buildings and I could see forever and I could look down and zoom in on people and I even read the newspaper over a man’s shoulder.”

She sounded so excited that I could not help but get excited myself.

“Could you do me a favor?” she asked

Sure sweetheart what ever you want” I answered

“I want you to rip this dress off of me.”

Her hands back on her hips I could tell she was feeling good about herself. I thought to myself “oh yea I get to test out that super body.” I walked over to her and grabbed the front of her dress with both hands, I was going to rip it off right down the middle. I tried with everything I had and the dress would not rip or tear.

“I think what ever clothes I wear become super like me.”

“Great” I said “fantastic”

“Come fly with me.” she said holding out her hand.

“No way. I saw how fast you are. My brains would be in my feet before we made it out of this building.” I was shaking my head no.

“I’ll go slow. How about if I just give you a ride to the second floor?”

Without giving me time to react she she grabbed me under the arms and we were floating off the floor. I have to say even though it was a short ride it was still an amazing feeling.

“Thanks for not going faster then a speeding bullet” I told her

She started flexing her calf muscles. “It seems like the more I flex the faster I go.”“What next?” she asked.

“mmmm”rubbing my chin “how about shooting lasers out of your eyes”

“Ok I am not sure how that works either.”

I could see her looking intently at some old pallets. After a few seconds I could see the red beams coming from her eyes. The pallets burst into flames.

“Oh my god. I don’t want to burn the place down”

“Try the super breath thing and see if you can blow the fire out like a candle.”

She put her lips together and as if she was going to blow out a birthday candle. She gave a quick strong puff. The fire went out and the pallets broke up on the back wall.

“I can’t believe this” she said

Putting here red lips together as if she was going to blow me a kiss she turned and aimed at the floor. The rush of wind started small and then grew. All the debris on the floor started to move. As the wind grew in speed bigger items were flying into the corner of the room. I could tell that she was trying to sweep everything into the corner. Soon the floor in front of Nancy was perfectly clean.

“This will come in handy when I clean out your garage."

“Or take care of the neighbors leaves this fall” I joked

“mmmmmm what else?” she pondered.

She pointed a finger at a hydraulic pipe bender. She had a look of concentration. The pipe bender started to shake and I could hear the metal straining. First one bolt popped lose then another and another it tore loose from the floor and started to float upwards. She whipped her hand. The huge machine was flung into the wall. I was thinking how amazing she is. She put her hand over her mouth.

“Oh gosh” she said stunned

What? I was confused again

With a shocked “I can totally read your thoughts”

“No way” shaking my head. I was thinking I was in trouble if Nancy can read my thoughts.

“Yes you are in trouble” giving me her I know it all smiles. “I wonder if I can also control your mind?” She hit her power pose with hands on hips and stared at me with a very sexy look on her face. “What should I make you do?” her look became serious “Hop up and down on one foot for me.”

I could feel her taking control of me and there was nothing I could do about it. I started hoping on one foot.

“Now the other one”

I had no control and I changed legs I was hoping on.

“Stop”she said. She walked towards me. “I have a question for you. What is your favorite part of my body?”

I was trying with all my might to resist. My face was turning red and sweat was forming on my forehead. My eyes were closed and I was fighting her for control of my brain.

She was smiling at me watching me struggle and enjoying every minute of it.

“Fight me hard baby, I am enjoying this”

Her head was tilted and she was smiling at me.

“You know you can’t resist me much longer.”

All I could think was “don’t say boobs, don’t say boobs, don’t say boobs”

“Ahhhh, my boobs. See that was not so bad was it now.”

What she did next shocked me. Nancy reached down and grabbing her chest and she just popped out one of her breast.

“Come here and show me how much you like my “boobs”

This was one time she did not need mind control for me to obey. I grabbed the breast hard and started to suck on the nipple. I was sucking and bitting as hard as I could. She only moaned with pleasure. It did not take long for her nipple to become very hard. She pulled me off her.

“I want to see something” she said

My wife walked over to a concert pillar and started to rub her nipple across it. I could see and here the nipple cutting through the concert. She was carving a trench in the pillar.

“There is nothing on you that isn’t super” I said stunned

“Nope, I am oh so super”
“I want to try something back down on the first floor.” she said

Taking me by the hand she lead me over to the hole she made earlier. Grabbing me, she gently lowered us the the ground floor. Once there she started to look around the large room. She left me when she found what she was looking for. Nancy walked over and pulled out a three foot peace of rebar. As she walked back she paused at a brick on the floor. Placing her high heel on the brick.

“I bet you like my beautiful legs” she smiled at me.

I could see her powerful leg starting to flex. With a crunching sound the brick was turned to dust. Again walking towards me and she paused over another brick.

“I bet you liked me fucking with that guy in the bar”

Her foot crushed another brick. Still looking right at me her foot found a third brick.

“With the sexiest voice ever “I bet you are so turned on right now”

Crunch goes the third brick. She closed the gap between her and me in a blink of an eye. She grabbed my arms and tied the rebar around my wrists. Looping it around many times. I pulled and pulled with all my might and could not brake loose.

“Ok I let me out.” You’ve proven yourself to me.

“Nope” she said

“Well when are you going to untie me” I was getting a little worried.
Taking hold of the bottom of her dress and putting one hand on my shoulder she pushed me down and lifted her dress at the same time.

“I will untie you after my third orgasm” She gentle force my head between her legs.

I could feel her thighs, they felt like steel wrapped in the softest smoothest skin ever. I went at her like a man possessed. It did not take long at all for Nancy to reach her first orgasm. I pulled away from Nancy to reposition myself when I heard the unmistakable sound of a gun being cocked.

I heard a male voice say “it’s my turn now.”

To be continued
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03 Jul 2015 06:03 - 03 Jul 2015 06:09 #42979 by AuGoose
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Well that's good fun. The exploration of powers is always a treat. Nancy is lucky to have a guide. ;)

A few typos~
Warning: Spoiler!
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03 Jul 2015 06:14 #42980 by littlematt
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Thanks for the feed back

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03 Jul 2015 06:21 #42981 by littlematt
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Not bad for a guy with dyslexia and never written stories before to have only 9 errors in a a 2000 word story.

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03 Jul 2015 08:29 #42982 by AuGoose
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littlematt wrote: Not bad for a guy with dyslexia and never written stories before to have only 9 errors in a 2000 word story.

I agree. Its solid work in general and a damn fine display for just starting out. I point them out so you can edit your manuscript and tighten it up, not to discourage you. We all miss things when checking our own work - our brains naturally fill in missing words, ignore double words, and overlook misspelled words because we know what we meant when we were writing it. Its what makes editors and proofreaders such a wonderful resource when you can get them. :)

Looking forward to seeing more.
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03 Jul 2015 13:01 #42985 by littlematt
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I thank you for your kind words. I have come to realize that my stories are only going to be so tight and there will be spelling mistakes. I would definitely keep a proofreader busy.. Thank you again for your words of encouragement. By the way your stories are great.

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03 Jul 2015 15:31 #42988 by Woodclaw
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As I said before this is and remains a pretty impressive first try. The display scene is very typical, but also very well executed.
I think that you might want to add a little of non-verbal communication here and there to make the scene pop a little more.

PS: on the subject of editing and proofreading, believe me, I can name quite a few people, including some professionally published authors that are way worse than you.
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03 Jul 2015 17:34 #42991 by Grayface
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Again, great job. My one burning question is what does Nancy look like? I know she's got great boobs and legs, but you haven't give any real description of her face yet.
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04 Jul 2015 01:21 #42997 by littlematt
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I feel like I need to go back and start at the beginning

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04 Jul 2015 01:23 #42998 by littlematt
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Thank you Woodclaw for your kind words and encouragement

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