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14 Sep 2007 05:04 #10289 by oldHarmonyMotion
Lines not wrapping, bad spacing, as well as strange characters

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14 Sep 2007 11:11 #10291 by conceptfan

as well as strange characters

Those are just the authors.

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14 Sep 2007 12:36 #10292 by brantley

Birthright Part 1 by Lfan and Conceptfan:

The Popcorn War by B.T. Elkins and J. Taylor

Well done writing. I thought I was reading Ring World style writing. Now, some Larry Niven books I struggle with as a result of the crazy character names, but the writing in this was of that caliber and had that feel too. Fantastic stuff. Very descriptive without going over the top.


Anybody want to collaborate on a continuation? Would help to have, like Jordan, a sense for things military -- and, naturally, a knowledge and/or willingness to acqure some, of the Aurora Universe.

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15 Sep 2007 07:04 #10301 by oldHarmonyMotion

as well as strange characters

Those are just the authors.


Okay, I deserved that.

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