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Workshop 1.12: Villainess Month

12 May 2009 08:56 #15685 by Woodclaw
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It's not a complete story, and it may not even be on-topic. but an excerpt from my Ubermadchen story is up at julievelor.tripod.com/UM/um1.html .


Good, probably not appropriate for this works shop but very good nonetheless. I hoper to see some more of this storyline in the future.

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12 May 2009 18:26 #15687 by julievelor
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Yeah, I realize the excerpts don't do a good job of showing her bad side as she rises to world domination. While I do have quite a bit more written, I just don't have anything coherent and appropriate just yet.

I do hope to start posting this story. The biggest stumbling block is the beginning; I'm finding it easier to write the action scenes than the early background stuff.

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12 May 2009 18:42 #15688 by lfan
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Hey AK....liked the excerpts! What ever happened to Batgirl Forever? :)

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Yeah, I realize the excerpts don't do a good job of showing her bad side as she rises to world domination. While I do have quite a bit more written, I just don't have anything coherent and appropriate just yet.

I do hope to start posting this story. The biggest stumbling block is the beginning; I'm finding it easier to write the action scenes than the early background stuff.

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13 May 2009 02:04 #15691 by inactive
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AK, I enjoyed the excerpt from 'Das Übermädchen'; it was right up my alley.

More thoughts .

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14 May 2009 11:44 #15701 by argonaut
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I sent my story in late last night -- I hope in time to be included with the others. If Lfan came through, that brings the total up to seven -- not a bad turnout. I look forward to reading them! :D

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15 May 2009 15:34 #15702 by admin
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I have seven stories received so far and have not found time to update and edit them for posting yet (big deadline at work this week). If I do not get them up tonight, I apologize! I will try my best to post them as soon as my schedule allows. I have not read them yet, but am encouraged by the totals. SO, if anyone has last minute edits, feel free to send/re-send, they'll most like get included. Also, any other stragglers who missed the 'deadline', take this as an opportunity to get them in now!

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I sent my story in late last night -- I hope in time to be included with the others. If Lfan came through, that brings the total up to seven -- not a bad turnout. I look forward to reading them! :D

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15 May 2009 17:54 #15706 by inactive
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I have seven stories received so far and have not found time to update and edit them for posting yet (big deadline at work this week). If I do not get them up tonight, I apologize! I will try my best to post them as soon as my schedule allows. I have not read them yet, but am encouraged by the totals. SO, if anyone has last minute edits, feel free to send/re-send, they'll most like get included. Also, any other stragglers who missed the 'deadline', take this as an opportunity to get them in now!

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Thank you for all your hard work, admin. We sure do appreciate it!

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16 May 2009 18:06 #15720 by ace191
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OK, so turn in whatever I have by Sunday night. Got it!

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17 May 2009 00:06 #15722 by YAGS
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OK, so turn in whatever I have by Sunday night. Got it!

LOL. You might be a little late by then... barely.

I turned mine in Monday before the deadline, intending to do some edits during the week, but I just haven't looked at it since then. I was in such a rush to finish this thing for weeks before hand that I completely burned myself out on writing from trying too hard. I suspect a lot of what I wrote is probably complete garbage, since I haven't read or edited it, and I wasn't even paying that much attention to what I wrote the first time. I was just trying to get to certain sections of the plot, without doing a good job of making every part interesting. I'm sure this is probably my worst story ever, and I'll probably go back and re-write large chunks of it from scratch if I ever do continue this story.

I seriously thought about asking admin to just pull mine from the workshop and not share it, but I figure I'll go ahead and leave it, just to see what kind of feedback I get. I'm still curious as to what you all think of the concept, even if the execution is truly awful.

YAGS

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22 May 2009 05:43 #15739 by admin
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It is very late here, and I'm still in the midst of finishing the update pages, but for those that would like to read the submissions, you can read them here: www.superwomenmania.com/storybank/index-d.html on the Date Deposited sort page. The other pages will be updated and the poll created tomorrow sometime when I can spare time. Thanks to everyone who submitted their stories.

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