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Fiona of Fail
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I really loved Daph. Nice to see you back.
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I'm enjoying it so far, but there is a lot of exposition
Same problem on Ch6
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I got the color fixed but noticed formatting/spacing problems all over the place which will take me a bit more time to clean up.
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Daphne wrote: Chapter 21 is up and we're getting closer to earning a mature rating.
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Meaning, going to a single mattress as opposed to the mattresses?
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Honestly, having her on the road is already seriously cramping my writing about her sex life (which is probably a good thing though).
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Daphne wrote: Now where would Fiona find a mattress suitable for her seven foot frame?
I can see that, I'm 6'1" in real life and I have troubles finding a bed my size.
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Anyway, in addition to paving the way for quasi-ubergirl types with pheromones and everything, I'm also going to work at a much slower pace to let me plot things out a bit better and hopefully put up more readable stuff.
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