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Linda part 3 work in progress

04 Feb 2014 09:28 - 04 Feb 2014 09:34 #35426 by oldHarmonyMotion
Linda part 3 work in progress was created by oldHarmonyMotion
Somehow I ended at 500 words flat, so I figure I'd post it, as a throwback to how this whole thing got started, 3 or 4 years ago.

Oh yeah, here are parts 1 and 2, if you're actually interested. I had to reread it to remember what happened.
www.superwomenmania.com/index.php?option...on-part-i&Itemid=368
www.superwomenmania.com/index.php?option...n-part-ii&Itemid=368


Monday at school was going to be interesting. Linda had spent the rest of her weekend holed up in her room, not answering any calls or texts. Jenny called a few times and eventually left a text, figuring that Linda was out exploring her powers. Chris had, of course, spent the weekend obsessing about her, but managed to keep his cool and send only one text. And then checked his phone nonstop for the rest of the day. It gave Linda a chuckle as she spied on him from her room halfway across town. Still, she couldn't get the image of what she had done to those men out of her mind...

The image of blood gushing from his shattered nose haunted her. No doubt, they were going to do terrible things, probably worse than what she did. Still, the threat had been prevented already. She had already won. Did she really need to do that? Was her story of it being a cover, making it seem like the two rapists had fought each other, just an excuse to exercise her new strength? And to counterbalance all that, what if she didn't violently injure him? Would he be out a week later, doing the same? Arrrrgh! It seemed for all Linda's power, she couldn't get any answers.

Monday rolled around before she knew it. She took her usual seat by Jenny, who looked at her expectantly, awaiting grand stories. She mentioned that she had saved Katie, but didn't mention all of the gory details. Jenny muttered something about Katie being a cold bitch, but Linda gave her a cold stare, and Jenny didn't pursue it any further.

At least first period gym removed all of the tension of waiting. The girls snickered in the locker room, but Katie quickly silenced her cohorts. Linda overheard some objections with her superhearing, but to Katie's credit, she was unrelenting in her defense. Her friends brushed it off, saying that Janie from art class was a much better target anyway, with her ridiculous clothes. Katie ignored them and exchanged a meaningful glance with Linda.

PE was a haze for Linda too. In fact, she forgot to keep her powers in check and began running laps at olympic speeds. Luckily, Jenny caught Linda's arm as she was lapping everyone for the 3rd time and felt herself yanked forward at incredible speed. Linda snapped out of it a second later, pretended to have trouble breathing, and excused herself.

After repeated requests from the teacher to join the track team with Linda furiously turning them down, gym finally ended. Much to her friends' objections, Katie sent her friends off, leaving her and Linda alone in the locker room.

"Hey...," Linda started, before Katie burst into tears and threw her arms around Linda.

"I was so scared! And when I ran away, I was scared that I was leaving you behind! Thank you thank you thank you! I'm so glad you're okay!" Katie sobbed as she squeezed Linda.
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04 Feb 2014 12:24 #35427 by Woodclaw
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I'm very happy to see this Oog, I always thought that it was a shame leaving Linda hanging like that (althought I understand that often authors runs out of steam).

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04 Feb 2014 14:36 #35429 by Caylane
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Glad to see you writing again! Actually, I was just searching for the blog you had of her and was sad to see it gone.

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04 Feb 2014 17:21 #35430 by deathgeonous
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And let me be just another who will say it's great to see you back and writing about Linda again. I always liked her. Hehe.

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04 Feb 2014 17:33 #35431 by castor
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fun story series from a talented writer-hope this gets you back on the ball.

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04 Feb 2014 19:32 #35434 by Woodclaw
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Caylane wrote: Glad to see you writing again! Actually, I was just searching for the blog you had of her and was sad to see it gone.


Actually the Blog is still here .

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04 Feb 2014 23:56 #35436 by sg2ww
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Linda is one of the best characters here. She is exuberant, but still connected to her humanity. She enjoys herself, but thinks about the ramifications too. :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:

GREAT WORK!

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05 Feb 2014 03:50 #35437 by Caylane
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Strange! Anytime I searched for it nothing came up.

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06 Feb 2014 09:52 - 06 Feb 2014 09:52 #35445 by oldHarmonyMotion
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Gratuitous... fondling I guess. But I promise it's kind of sort of leading somewhere.


"Hey...," Linda started, before Katie burst into tears and threw her arms around Linda.

"I was so scared! And when I ran away, I was scared that I was leaving you behind! Thank you thank you thank you! I'm so glad you're okay!" Katie sobbed as she squeezed Linda.

Linda faltered for a second, and then gently returned the hug. "It's okay. Shh."

"How _did_ you get away?" Katie shuddered at the thought.

Oh god, think fast Linda. "Well, you saw me today out there on the track. And I guess with the adrenaline I was really going fast. Plus, I think they tripped over themselves as they were chasing me." Linda decided not to mention how brutally they had been beaten up.

"Yeah, you were zooming out there! I actually wanted to talk to you out there, but I couldn't keep up!"

Linda gulped. Was she going to stick on that topic? Katie was fidgeting, as though she had more to say. Finally, she mustered the determination to speak what was on her mind.

"Are... are they real?"

Linda's jaw dropped. "Seriously!?"

"No, I don't mean anything by it! You saved my life. I'm really sorry how incredibly mean we were. I think we were just jealous. But no offense, but you weren't exactly big before summer, and now you come back with these perfect boobs." Katie paused. "Can... can I touch them?"

Linda's jaw re-dropped. Katie seemed sincere. She was fidgeting with her t-shirt and avoiding eye contact.

"Never mind, sorry I asked. Can we just forget this?"

Linda made up her mind. She grabbed Katie firmly by the hand and placed it on her breast. Katie looked surprised, then gave Linda a bright smile before she started groping properly.

"They're so big, I can't fit them in my hands!" Katie exclaimed as she squeezed them. "They look so amazing. It must be hard to shop for bras to support this kind of weight?"

Linda started to answer, but studying Katie's reactions, she realized that Katie wasn't listening. She was completely focused on Linda's chest. The thought made her nipples erect. Katie noticed.

"They're so soft, but firm after a certain point. They don't feel fake. Sorry! I mean, if they are fake, that's okay too. I won't make fun of them. I just...," Katie's breathing became heavier and heavier. She brused her palms and fingers over Linda's nipples. Under her breath, she muttered, "...wish mine were like this." She continued her fondling.

Linda fought back a groan. "Katie! You done?"

"Uh huh." Katie didn't stop. Linda grabbed both her wrists and tore them off of her. Finally broken out of the beautiful sensation of touching Linda's chest, Katie returned back to reality. "Oh god! Um, thanks." Her forehead had a slight sheen of sweat, and it wasn't from gym class.

"Look, I'll see you around, okay? I gotta go."

Katie nodded, afraid that her voice would tremble if she spoke. She stared at Linda's backside as she exited the locker room.
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06 Feb 2014 11:05 #35446 by Caylane
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Great job! Can't wait to see the completed version. If you ever need it I'll volunteer as a beta reader!

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07 Feb 2014 01:22 #35453 by oldHarmonyMotion
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Caylane wrote: If you ever need it I'll volunteer as a beta reader!


What do you think you're doing right now :P

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07 Feb 2014 09:36 - 07 Feb 2014 09:40 #35454 by oldHarmonyMotion
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I'm planning on writing a scene in between the previous one and this one. I wanted to get the key plot elements out of the way first. If you followed my blog, this will be slightly familiar.

"How was your day, dear?" Linda's mom asked.

"It was fine, mom. The usual." Linda took another forkful of green beans, careful not to bite the metal teeth right off.

"And your date last weekend?"

"Oh, you know."

Her dad shifted his focus from the evening news for a moment. "Remember what we talked about Linda. Boys only want one thing."

"Dad! We didn't do anything! It was my first date like... ever!"

"Now honey, you know our daughter is responsible. And we already had that talk about protection, right Linda?" Her mom shot her a glance. Dad sighed.

"MOM!"

"Still, I think you have quite the crush on him, don't you? They say we grow more beautiful when we're in love. And you sure look it, sweetie."

Linda blushed, but said nothing. And she hated to admit it, but she really did want to fuck Chris's brains out. She enjoyed teasing him to nearly the point of no return, watching him try to hang onto sanity, and with nothing but the simplest of caresses. She knew that he was always thinking of her, and yet he never forced himself onto her. Linda felt the overwhelming heat of her passion rising, only to realize that it wasn't contained to her inner thoughts. Her parents seemed to be afflicted by her sexual aura as they looked at each other needfully, their dinner unfinished.

Her dad cleared his throat and stood up from the dinner table. "Well, I'm done eating," he said right to Mom.

"Yes, yes, we'll clear the table later." Mom got up and the both of them quickly vanished up the stairs to their bedroom.

Gross. Linda knew from her time with Jenny that she could control the effect she had on people, but clearly she lacked the control to control that. Or something. What a buzzkill. Knowing that her parents would be occupied for a while, she walked into their backyard, did a 360 scan at superspeed to check for potential eyewitnesses, and took off high into the air.

Sighing, she lay with her back flat on top of a cloud, arms crossed behind her head like a pillow. She thought back to Katie in the locker room. Was Katie that naturally aroused? Or did Linda mean to affect her like that too? It wasn't Linda's fault that Katie was caressing her extremely sensitive breasts and nipples. Still, it was quite enjoyable seeing Katie show up late to their next class, legs unsteady from such mild contact. Linda could feel Katie's eyeballs glued to the back of her head, and she found excuses to flip her hair, turn sideways, and give Katie a view of her profile. She'd be surprised if Katie weren't at home masturbating to thoughts of her teasing right now. Lord knows Linda had wound her up enough.

Well, why not check? She wasn't sure where Katie lived, but it only took a few seconds to scan the city. She found Katie at her computer, checking Facebook, looking for pictures of Linda in frustration. All of them were pre-transformation. Despite not being irresistible yet, she saw Katie's fingers slowly massaging her clit as she continued to browse.

Linda would've laughed, but she realized that her own labia were swollen and pulsing. God, it was such a turn on to know that she could tease people like this! She licked the palm of her hand, only to find that she was already moist enough down there. One swipe against her hard, throbbing clit was enough to trigger her orgasm. She still lay midair on the cloud, her hips bucking toward outer space.

She recovered from her orgasm in an instant to find that she was still wet. Linda wondered what the sight of her orgasming would do to other people; her long, slender legs jerking from the throes of passion, her beautiful butt rhythmically thrusting up and down, and the bouncing of her gravity defying breasts driving men, and women, to uncontrollable lust. They would probably lose it right then and there if they saw her. Oh god, it was too much. Her fingers still expertly massaged her nether region, and she let herself go, letting another orgasm wrack her body.

Again, moments later, slightly wobbly this time and not so in control of her flight, she opened her eyes. Her fingers still worked at her pussy as she peeked into Chris's house. He was staring at the picture they had taken together today, in front of their lockers, and he was masturbating too. Lying face down toward the earth this time, she grabbed one of her breasts and squeezed hard, triggering a third orgasm. Saliva dripped from her beautiful, full, cherry lips, down toward earth.

She recovered slowly this time, finding herself in freefall. Basking in the afterglow of her ministrations, she willed herself to stop falling.

It didn't work.

Linda eyes opened wide in fear as she saw the earth rising to meet her.
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17 Jul 2014 07:42 #37362 by oldHarmonyMotion
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I have no idea what I wanted to write in between those two segments. Serves me right.

The previous post seems like a good ending to part 3 though.
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17 Jul 2014 10:18 #37367 by Woodclaw
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oogber wrote: I have no idea what I wanted to write in between those two segments. Serves me right.

The previous post seems like a good ending to part 3 though.


That seem reasonable, as long as a Part 4 follows short-ish :p

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