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Linda part 4 making it up as I go

17 Jul 2014 09:17 #37365 by oldHarmonyMotion
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sorry guys a little bit of peril here. it's really not my thing but a story needs to have struggles. i do try to make up for it though. I am writing this on the spot and have never done anything like this really, so let me know

Linda screamed all the way down. Having been miles up in the air, she had a few minutes to try and stop her descent. She closed her eyes and tried to halt her freefall, but nothing happened. She screamed again.

As the pavement of the back alley of some foreign city rushed to meet her, she took a deep breath and held it. It didn't make any sense, but it was all she could think to do. She squeezed her eyes shut as she braced for impact, arms out in front.

Her hands made contact with the earth, not making a bit of difference as her body flopped straight down onto the pavement. She released her breath, took a deep gasp, and realized that she was still alive. With tears in her eyes, Linda just lay there, taking breath after grateful breath.

Eventually, she found the strength to stand. Her clothes were ripped and torn, partially from the crash landing, but mostly from her own midair masturbation session. What happened? Why did she lose control of everything? Linda examined her body. Her arms and breasts felt sore, having absorbed the shock of the impact, but otherwise she appeared mostly unharmed... if losing the ability to fly counted as unharmed.

How was she going to get home? She had no idea what city she was in. Having a bird's eye view didn't translate well to navigating city streets, and she really had no way to tell how far she'd jerked off course as she was pleasuring herself. Could she seduce a cabbie into her willing servant like she had the bus driver, on that very first fateful day? Certainly her lack of clothes was already a step in that direction. Linda pondered.

Her crash landing didn't go without notice though. A pair of drunks who had just been kicked out of a bar heard the loud THUMP, and came to examine.

"Wow, get a load of this chick! What's wrong baby, somebody been treating you bad?"

His buddy chimed in. "I promise I'd treat you real good."

They advanced on her. Linda wasn't in the mood, to say the least. She decided to try and solve things nonviolently. After inadvertently making people ejaculate while fully clothed, this would take half a second. She figured once they were spent and satisfied, she could just walk over their prone bodies as they recovered from the fury of a Linda induced orgasm from 10 paces away.

Linda brushed the tattered remains of her shirt off of her breasts, leaned forward and cupped them. The men wolf whistled and hollered as they continued approaching.

"I think she likes us!"

Linda didn't understand. Maybe the alcohol was suppressing what should have been an instant reaction. They really did reek of alcohol. She pursed her lips and gave them a mock kiss. That had been enough to melt Jenny into a writhing mass on the floor, shrieking as she tried to rub her crotch through her jeans.

"Fuck, she is hot! I'm goin' first!" Both men broke into a sprint. Linda couldn't believe it. How were they still walking!? One of them grabbed her by the arm and threw her face first into the wall. Linda was too stunned to react. How did he just move her against her will? She had more strength in her, well, anything than he did in his whole body!

They pinned her to the wall, pushing against her shoulders as they spread her legs with theirs. One of the men quickly undid his pants as he tried to enter her. Linda, still in complete shock, eyes wide open as she realized what was about to happen to her, found that her invulnerability was still intact. He pushed against her but could not enter. Linda took a deep gulp and thanked whatever god had given her this power that she would not have to suffer this.

Unable to enter, the rapist just wound up rubbing the head of his cock against her. Linda may have lost her ability to trigger orgasms, but she was still absolutely incredible and he blew his load all over. Linda, feeling his disgusting fluids on her body, cried out in helplessness and rage. As the first guy let go of her after the biggest release of his life, Linda seized the opportunity to try to get away.

Linda twisted as hard as she could to try and break free. Instead of a struggle, she found that her breasts crushed the wall she was being held against as the man was sent flying. His buddy, still in the aftershock of orgasm, didn't fully register what had just happened. What he did register was the sight of Linda as she turned to face him, a look of surprise on her face.

What just happened? Was she back to her goddess self? She poked her finger through the brick wall, leaving another hole next to where her nipples had gouged a deep groove.

The first rapist saw what she had done with just her finger and breasts and could only marvel at Linda's magnificence. He looked up at the perfection of her body, her long long long shapely legs, her slender body as he felt the fires of lust igniting inside of him, despite his minute old orgasm. Linda looked back down at him, recognizing the reaction that she was so used to inspiring. Her eyes blazed with fury.

"So, did you enjoy that?" Linda asked in a cold voice.

"Please... please let me...," he reached for her.

"Tell you what. I'll make you an offer. Every time you cum, I break a bone in your body. If you can look at me without cumming, you win. Got it?" Linda sneered.

The man didn't understand her offer, but he didn't need to. What he needed was to touch her. Linda stood above him, legs spread, hands on her hips, chest thrust out proudly. How did they look like that without any support? He focused on her delicious, inviting, pink nipples and suddenly realized that he was cumming.

Linda laughed. "Oh my. That's 1." She bent over at the waist, and bringing her finger an inch within his lower leg, let the suspense build. Then, with a tiny tap, she fractured it.

He howled as his orgasm was interrupted by an unbelievable force on his leg. He saw the giant bruise forming where she had tapped her with the force of a wrecking ball, her dainty finger only moving slightly. Her finger. He saw her beautiful, long digits, and traced his way back up her arm, to where her pendant breasts were hanging. Her long, shiny, straight hair was obfuscating his view of those perfect breasts, but that only served to arouse him more as he imagined what it would be like to hold her close and breathe in this unbelievable woman.

"Mmm. Was that good for you?" Linda asked seductively. She felt even better now, aware that her body had just expelled all of the dust and pavement and brick and semen from her body. She was pristine again. It was time to try her trick again. Linda made eye contact with her prey, puckered her lips, and gave him a mock kiss. The rapist couldn't deny her, even with the throbbing pain in his leg. He shuddered and shook again.

Linda's laughter was enough to bring the other would be rapist whom she had smashed against a wall around. He wasn't sure what had happened, but he felt aches all over. He opened his eyes, and saw that the beautiful woman they had assaulted was bending over his friend, reaching for his hand with two of her own. She appeared to pinch him, and he howled out like an animal. What was happening!?

Linda was really getting into it. She looked at her next toy and gave him a little wink. "Lucky you," she said to the screaming/groaning man beneath her. "I won't break you completely tonight. But let's just play one more time okay?"

He didn't have the ability to answer. She strutted over his lying body, her legs on both sides of him. He watched her approach, until she stopped with her vagina right above his face. He watched her stroke her slit, and then push a finger inside where he wasn't able to enter before. He watched her.

Linda was feeling better and better. Without looking, she knew the man was completely under her spell despite all the pain and injuries. Removing her finger, she squatted down, brushing that finger against his lips. Her broken toy licked desperately, and then orgasmed for the final time. If he had his eyes open, he'd have seen her place her foot right beneath his chin, and flick gently with her toes. His world went black.

Linda smirked as she looked at the broken man beneath her. Unconsciously, she hovered away from his broken body, toward her next victim. The second one stared at her in awe, not comprehending what had just happened.

Linda purred like a cat as she stretched, giving him a view of her hovering body. His member jumped to full attention.

"Do you understand the game?"

He shook his head no as he continued to devour her with his eyes.

"It's just as well. Let's play a different one. If I don't make you cum without touching you, you get to call an ambulance for yourself and your friend." She noticed his reaction smiled. "He needs one badly. And you will too. That's not part of the game. If you can't control yourself, then I destroy your phones and you can try to figure it out tomorrow morning. Got it?"

He nodded.

"Okay, let's start." She landed on the floor, flipping her hair back behind her head. With a smirk, she ordered, "Cum for me."

Her new toy collapsed into the floor, jizzing his pants. Linda focused her eyes, but still couldn't generate enough heat. She sighed as she waited for him to finish.

"Look at me," she commanded when he was finally in control of his spasming body. He looked at her. She seemed even more irresistible than just moments before.

"Cum again."

His eyes slammed shut, his brain unable to register the impossibility of what she was doing. As soon as he was done, he tried to keep his eyes closed to keep some semblance of control. Suddenly, he felt a hot breath tickle his ear.

"Mmm lover...," Linda whispered, letting her breath tickle him. He stiffened. "I'm going to need... one more from you... okay, baby?" She drew out the words, letting him experience the best moment of his life. "Ready...? Cum all over yourself."

His body thrust upward, his soundless scream of pleasure reaching to the heavens. Linda watched dispassionately as she felt the heat surge from her eyeballs, into his pocket and incinerating his phone. She wasn't sure if he passed out from the sexual tease or from the burns, but she didn't care. She hovered into the air, did some figure eights to test her control, and made her way home.

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17 Jul 2014 09:18 #37366 by oldHarmonyMotion
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I better leave some notes this time

discussion with Jenny, understanding her powers, testing the hypothesis by using the previously mean girl, mean girl gets addicted
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17 Jul 2014 19:26 #37379 by Caylane
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Another fantastic addition!

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18 Jul 2014 00:15 #37386 by www1969
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"and she really had no way to tell how far she'd jerked off course as she was pleasuring herself"

heh heh

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18 Jul 2014 02:47 #37392 by oldHarmonyMotion
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www1969 wrote: "and she really had no way to tell how far she'd jerked off course as she was pleasuring herself"

heh heh


i laughed as i wrote it

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18 Jul 2014 05:13 #37394 by ong76win2
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Where can I find the full version of this? Thank you.

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18 Jul 2014 07:07 #37396 by oldHarmonyMotion
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you're looking at it

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19 Jul 2014 01:54 #37401 by ong76win2
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oogber wrote: you're looking at it


Thank you but which is part 1, part 2, part 3, and part 4? Thanks

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19 Jul 2014 02:35 #37402 by Jabbrwock
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ong76win2 wrote:

oogber wrote: you're looking at it


Thank you but which is part 1, part 2, part 3, and part 4? Thanks


Part 1 and 2 are in the library, I think the links are somewhere in this thread.

What is posted in this thread is parts 3 and 4, very much works in progress. At least, I'm pretty sure that's what's going on.

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20 Jul 2014 07:00 - 20 Jul 2014 07:07 #37410 by ong76win2
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Jabbrwock wrote:

ong76win2 wrote:

oogber wrote: you're looking at it


Thank you but which is part 1, part 2, part 3, and part 4? Thanks


Part 1 and 2 are in the library, I think the links are somewhere in this thread.

What is posted in this thread is parts 3 and 4, very much works in progress. At least, I'm pretty sure that's what's going on.


Thanks. Which is part 3 and which is part 4 here? I have finally found the Part 1 and 2. I do hope the parts 3 and 4 can be posted in the story section here.

That is why I was a little confused because Oogber was Goobers before so I thought he is a new author.
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20 Jul 2014 13:10 #37412 by Jabbrwock
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I was slightly wrong earlier.

Part 3 is the other thread in this forum, and includes the links to part 1 and 2. Part 4 is everything in this thread.

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23 Jul 2014 02:41 #37418 by sg2ww
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Great story! I'm happy that Linda has issues, because too often our Ubergirls lack any challenge - internal or external. Now, I actually read those stories and like them for what they are, but this approach is more interesting.

Actually, I don't mind unlimited power unless she is totally happy and in control. That's a bit of a drag, but I must admit I still read them.

But when a supergirl faces real challenges internal or external and hopefully both it is a better story.

Great work!

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23 Jul 2014 08:39 #37425 by oldHarmonyMotion
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thanks for the feedback guys. it's the reason part 4 exists. I will write some more once I get a chance.

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26 Jul 2014 10:39 #37485 by pithlit
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Great to see this back again.

Or Linda takes mean girls bf. Is humiliated. Tries to catch them in bed together then gets addicted.

Just a though.

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29 Jul 2014 08:36 #37549 by oldHarmonyMotion
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"You lost your powers!?" Jenny looked aghast as Linda described her fall from the heavens.

"Yeah... I was really scared! But I'm okay now." Linda sat cross-legged on Jenny's bed with a pillow in her lap. Remaining completely still, she hovered a foot into the air and remained there, in the same sitting position.

Jenny craned her neck up to look at her friend. "So how did you get them back?"

"I don't know. I managed to call a cab and get back home. When I woke up in the morning, they were back. I guess I just needed some rest." Linda recited her practiced story, hoping Jenny wouldn't notice. It didn't work.

"Linda."

"What!?" Linda looked guilty as she hovered in midair.

Jenny sighed. "All those powers, and you still can't tell a lie. You know you always break eye contact and fiddle with your fingers, right?"

Resigned, Linda moved into a lying position, her face level with Jenny's, body straight as an arrow.

"Uh huh." Jenny nodded. "That means you're gonna spill the beans now. You've never done it flying before."

Linda took a deep breath. She still wasn't ready to tell everything. "The cabbie did a double take and was pretty wound up. Like I said, I crashed from the sky and my clothes were kind of ruined. It was a 30 minute ride, and I didn't have any money! After I made him, well, you know, I felt some of my power return."

Fascinated with Linda's tale, Jenny didn't notice any more of Linda's tells. "No way. THAT'S how you get your powers?!"

"I always thought I was just excited to share my secrets with you. And I am! But maybe, that's why I feel so great around you as well, when I make you cum like a freight train."

Jenny blushed. "Sheesh, you wouldn't even tell me what you did to the cab driver, but you can just say that to me?"

Linda nodded. "You're my best friend and we like doing it. I wasn't proud of what I did to him."

"Well, are you sure that's what makes you tick? Can we test this somehow?"

Linda scrunched her face and twirled her hair. "Well, I can try to depower myself again. And then see what I can do to empower myself."

"By depower, you mean..."

"Yeah, I'll have to be careful though. I've crushed metal at my peak, but I can't do it too much. I don't want to crash again."

"I could help you power up again." Jenny offered a little too quickly.

Linda chuckled as she floated above the ground into a standing position. "No, I have someone else in mind. I want to make sure it works."
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30 Jul 2014 05:26 - 30 Jul 2014 05:27 #37565 by ong76win2
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Wow! Another great update! Be waiting for more!

By the way, is this a continuation of part 4? Thanks
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30 Jul 2014 17:26 #37566 by Caylane
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It sure looks like it! And great job!

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31 Jul 2014 03:11 #37571 by circes_cup
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Nice updates! I like the games she plays with the guys outside the bar.

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31 Jul 2014 15:08 #37576 by berkshirelad2012
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Loving this story!....keep up the good work :O)

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01 Sep 2014 10:54 #37967 by oldHarmonyMotion
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"So... did you, ahem, power down?" Jenny asked Linda as they ran laps during gym period.

"Yeah. My laser vision seems to be the first thing to go," Linda replied casually, not short of breath. Jenny, on the other hand, was covered by a slight sheen of sweat and beginning to pant.

"How much does it take before you start to lose your superpowers?"

"I'm not sure. It doesn't seem to take too long though." They completed their final lap and came to a rest. Jenny bent over and sucked in gulps of air while Linda stood by casually.

"Here, gimme your hand." Linda grabbed Jenny's hand and brought it up to her eyes.

"Linda!" Jenny exclaimed in fright.

"No, don't worry. Feel this?"

Jenny watched as Linda's eyes glowed a little bit. She could feel warmth on her hand, but it was nothing more than hovering her hand over an iron stove.

"That's about as hot as I can get it now. I can't even fire beams!"

"What... are you... planning to do?" Jenny managed to ask in between breaths as she recovered from the run and the fright.

Linda's light brown eyes sparkled. "A certain someone owes me a favor. It's nothing formal, but I'm going to make sure she won't say no." Linda licked her lips. Jenny shuddered as she imagined her friend's intentions.



Katie continually stole glances at Linda in the locker room. She couldn't rationalize it, but the touch of Linda's body had left even more of an impression on her than the fact that Linda had saved her life. In the shower, her view of Linda was annoyingly blocked by other people. Maybe it was for the best. She would probably just end up openly staring at Linda if she had a direct view. Just catching a few glimpses of her would have to do. Her tight butt, which she caught glimpses of when Linda bent down to wash her long, long legs. The curve of her breast, partially covered up by her slender arms. Katie managed to tear her gaze away as she continued her own shower.

Katie stayed in the shower as long as Linda did. When finally everyone had left, Linda had her towel on. Katie sighed. She walked back to her locker and began to turn the combination lock when she felt a light touch on her shoulder.

"Hey, Katie. You know, you've been very unfair to me."

Oh god. Linda was confronting her. Unfair? Did she know about the constant ogling?

"You got to touch my boobs last time. I was wondering... can I touch yours?" Linda's voice was soft and alluring. Katie felt herself shiver, wondering what it would be like to be in bed with that body, that voice.

She responded, in a whisper, "Yes, please do."

Linda smirked like a cat playing with its prey. Katie hung her arms by her side, her towel tucked in to prevent it from falling. Linda traced a finger along the cleft of Katie's breasts before unhooking the towel. She continued tracing her finger along Katie's breast, down toward the nipple, watching it stiffen as she ran her finger lightly in circles around it.

Katie trembled and bit her lip at Linda's touch. She closed her eyes, luxuriating in the feel of Linda's finger. She gasped when Linda brought both hands up and began to massage them gently, but firmly.

"Mmm, nice. I never knew how much fun it was to play with others. Is that why you wanted to touch mine?" Linda purred.

Katie found herself unable to answer. It never felt like this when she touched herself. It never even came close when her past boyfriends would do it.

"Can I ask you a personal question?" Linda's seductive voice cooed. Katie gasped and nodded her consent. "How many fingers do you use?"

Katie was too busy writhing and moaning to protest. She began to answer, "Two -- Ahhhh!"

In the instant it took Katie to answer, Linda already had her left hand on Katie's intimacy. She was already moist. Linda traced her fingers along Katie's labia, getting her fingers wet, before resting her thumb on Katie's clit. She vibrated it gently and giggled as Katie squirmed and moaned. She lowered her head to Katie's free breast, exhaling hotly before giving the nipple a flick of her tongue. Katie stifled a scream as she panted rhythmically, grabbing Linda's vibrating arm with both hands.

Linda clucked her tongue as Katie tried orgasmed. She focused energy in her eyes, but she still couldn't form any coherent beams. "I haven't even gone inside you yet." With her thumb still vibrating on Katie's clit, she inserted two fingers into her vagina.

Katie was barely recovering from her first orgasm as Linda's assault hit her with a new wave, triggering another orgasm. She felt herself contracting around Linda's long, slim, vibrating fingers. She also felt the heat of arousal around her chest, but a strange wave of heat emanated from where Linda's mouth was still caressing her body.

Linda quickly diverted her gaze as she realized that she was beginning to power up again. She removed her hands from Katie's body, letting her slide to the floor. Seeing a mop in the corner of the room, she focused her eyes on it, burning the tip of the handle. Before she reduced it to ash though, she cut the lasers. With a cold breath, she put out the flame.

Meanwhile, Katie was on the floor, eyes closed, still twitching. Linda looked at her face, all blissed out, and decided that it would be good to have a constant source of power. She knelt next to Katie, brought her lips close to Katie's ear, and whispered her request. Katie shivered. She would masturbate to this memory for a long long time.
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01 Sep 2014 23:24 #37974 by Caylane
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Another great read as usual!
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26 Oct 2014 04:25 #38678 by pithlit
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I missed this last post. I want to be Katie.
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11 Nov 2014 06:03 #38980 by oldHarmonyMotion
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hmm

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12 Nov 2014 06:30 #38987 by pithlit
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Is there more coming?

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12 Nov 2014 07:49 #38988 by oldHarmonyMotion
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I was going to write last night but I just ended up falling asleep.
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