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28 Sep 2016 23:43 #50474
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Heh. I am entertained 
. And the model is ridiculously hot. Win-win-win.
. And the model is ridiculously hot. Win-win-win.
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29 Sep 2016 00:34 #50475
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Means a lot to me that you are enjoying since I am a big fan of your stories
And I do have a knack for finding hot models for my characters, it seems
And I do have a knack for finding hot models for my characters, it seems
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29 Sep 2016 23:58 #50497
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I'm always happy to see updates on your DA page. And your latest entry adds a whole new dynamic so good addition!
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04 Oct 2016 16:29 #50550
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erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/The-Goddes...ew=10%253A1475594860 new chapter up on my DA. Last bit of the Dominatrix story for now. This one is extremely NSFW so be careful. Hope you have a good time reading it!
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08 Oct 2016 20:00 #50591
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Had some time so was finally able to sit down and read more of these (I jumped on at The Witch). Good fun all the way around and some tasty sexy sequences. Left me thinking about possible future encounters and other fun twists and turns even hours later, so the setting definitely clicked for me. There's one or two places where you get some duplication/reuse of phrases or descriptions that seem accidental and are a little distracting ("cocktail" "juices evaporated") but otherwise seems quite sound from the technical/construction aspect. Easy to read. If you like, I can send you a more detailed critique/proofread privately.
Definitely looking forward to more.
Definitely looking forward to more.
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09 Oct 2016 01:32 #50593
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I would love to have a more detailed critique. Whenever you can, please do!
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09 Oct 2016 22:22 #50608
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erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/Lust-desire-and-greed-638408051 new chapter up! Please give me some feedback. Do you prefer short or longer stories? Been writing a lot shorter lately
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02 Dec 2016 18:53 #51501
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erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/Worship-648877091 new chapter is up on my DA! Also it would really help if you guys answer the question in my profile page
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02 Dec 2016 20:25 #51505
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Repeated applications of Mike enhance the core power set. One has to wonder if repeated applications of Henry enhance whatever he gave them or start triggering additional abilities. Depth vs. breadth.
Fun stuff. Looking forward to more. I might prefer slightly longer, but I know that itch to publish something good instead of drag it out hoping for something perfect...
Fun stuff. Looking forward to more. I might prefer slightly longer, but I know that itch to publish something good instead of drag it out hoping for something perfect...
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02 Dec 2016 22:08 #51507
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This one was supposed to be a way longer story, but since I haven't plublished anything in a while, I decided to publish it as soon as I got a good ending. But since all my stories have three or four sequences, in the end it's only one big story with several chapters
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AuGoose wrote: Repeated applications of Mike enhance the core power set. One has to wonder if repeated applications of Henry enhance whatever he gave them or start triggering additional abilities. Depth vs. breadth.
Fun stuff. Looking forward to more. I might prefer slightly longer, but I know that itch to publish something good instead of drag it out hoping for something perfect...
This one was supposed to be a way longer story, but since I haven't plublished anything in a while, I decided to publish it as soon as I got a good ending. But since all my stories have three or four sequences, in the end it's only one big story with several chapters
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02 Dec 2016 22:53 #51509
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I think this might be a pretty good frame of reference for future installments and to create an interesting level of asymmetry between the characters, allowing for a more varied interplay.
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AuGoose wrote: Repeated applications of Mike enhance the core power set. One has to wonder if repeated applications of Henry enhance whatever he gave them or start triggering additional abilities. Depth vs. breadth.
I think this might be a pretty good frame of reference for future installments and to create an interesting level of asymmetry between the characters, allowing for a more varied interplay.
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27 Jan 2017 19:50 #52297
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New chapter out. Sorry for the delay, and I hope you enjoy it!
New chapter out. Sorry for the delay, and I hope you enjoy it!
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16 Feb 2017 18:00 - 16 Feb 2017 18:46 #52582
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Well, I for one welcome our new Lauren Overlord .
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16 Feb 2017 18:06 #52583
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Oh shit now this is so awesome <3 Thanks a lot AuGoose I really appreciate it
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17 Feb 2017 01:49 #52589
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Wow! Great series! Be waiting for more!
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17 Feb 2017 19:40 #52615
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Now let's hope Goose's creation inspired you to write a new chapter as soon as you possibly can manage 
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05 Mar 2017 21:44 #52995
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New chapter is up erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/Absolution-608766448
If you want to see the full extent of Lauren's powers, this is the chapter. Hope you guys enjoy it!
If you want to see the full extent of Lauren's powers, this is the chapter. Hope you guys enjoy it!
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12 Apr 2017 22:06 #53609
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New chapter up at erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/High-School-Drama-633931800
Expect a really different pace on the story, but it's only on this one. I'm planning lot's of superheroine fighting on the next one
Expect a really different pace on the story, but it's only on this one. I'm planning lot's of superheroine fighting on the next one
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25 Apr 2017 11:34 #53789
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Just got a chance to read this one. Good fun!
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25 Apr 2017 23:55 #53796
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excellent, but I guess this means Brexit is still on?
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26 Apr 2017 01:52 #53797
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I have no idea what you're talking about but yeah Theresa May seems pretty hellbent on Brexit tbqh
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26 Apr 2017 09:41 #53799
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Great update! Hope to read more! Please do continue writing. ☺
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27 Apr 2017 11:37 #53810
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I think he means the events in the previous chapter are still going on in in the background while we cut to a different part of the world.
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erikphandel wrote: I have no idea what you're talking about but yeah Theresa May seems pretty hellbent on Brexit tbqh
I think he means the events in the previous chapter are still going on in in the background while we cut to a different part of the world.
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27 Apr 2017 14:55 #53812
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Oh right
dude did I just forgot what I had written what the fuck
dude did I just forgot what I had written what the fuck
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17 Jun 2017 19:46 #54852
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New chapter up! Getting back to the main story on the next one. Please tell me what you think of this one
New chapter up! Getting back to the main story on the next one. Please tell me what you think of this one
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