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Not the One: Susan's army

02 Mar 2018 14:13 #58725 by conceptfan
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Three very enjoyable scenes there, Dru, My fave bits were:
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Keep it coming! I'm really enjoying this series.
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02 Mar 2018 15:22 - 02 Mar 2018 15:36 #58728 by Dru1076
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conceptfan wrote: Three very enjoyable scenes there, Dru, My fave bits were:

Warning: Spoiler!
Keep it coming! I'm really enjoying this series.


I'm really glad you liked the bullets. That's AUGoose earning a credit right there, because I went back and edited those descriptions in after watching this video he showed me:



Everyone writing about bullets hitting stuff should watch that footage. Around 6:30 are the some particularly relevant examples, but it is worth watching the whole thing.

I hope you enjoy the rest of what's Susan and her army are going to get up to...

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Dru1076 wrote: I've been off preparing my workshop entry...but I've got my draft done and thought I might take a little timeout to check up on Susan's soldiers...

dru1076.deviantart.com/art/Not-the-One-P...gin-Part-V-733352380


I really enjoyed it! I love the differences between the girls and the way they use their newfound and practically unlimited power.


It sure is fun to play with such different characters. Glad you're enjoying it mate. I'm certainly very much enjoying your own stories.
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06 May 2018 08:03 - 06 May 2018 08:04 #59388 by Dru1076
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I neglected to mention I uploaded two new chapters. Tammy shows Normie the new house, Liz has a chat with Itsumu, and Susan prepares for her journey to visit the Lords of Light.

Find the new chapters here:

dru1076.deviantart.com/art/Not-the-One-P...-Origin-VI-741555932

dru1076.deviantart.com/art/Not-the-One-P...Origin-VII-742601132
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06 May 2018 09:36 #59389 by Woodclaw
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Dru1076 wrote: I neglected to mention I uploaded two new chapters. Tammy shows Normie the new house, Liz has a chat with Itsumu, and Susan prepares for her journey to visit the Lords of Light.

Find the new chapters here:

dru1076.deviantart.com/art/Not-the-One-P...-Origin-VI-741555932

dru1076.deviantart.com/art/Not-the-One-P...Origin-VII-742601132


Hopefully soon in our library as well.

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