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Here is my new Superwoman : STRONG GIRL !

22 Jul 2011 20:46 - 22 Jul 2011 20:48 #24055 by Artnico
Hello everyone !

After a year of work and imagination, I am proud to present a new superheroine of my own creation: STRONG GIRL. She's for me the perfect Superheroine : Super strong, invulnerable, tall and very sexy.

I just finished her background in which we learn her origins from her birth until she gains her powers. I've made her character card too where you'll find all the information on her morphology, her powers levels, her psychology etc...

The only problem is that my stories are written in french because I do not speak english very well. So I am looking for translators.

For now, I did a brief summary of her biography in English.
I also wanted to share with you a drawing commission that I had asked a few month ago to Gianluca Cerritelli (hoppers13) for those who know him on DeviantArt. This drawing featuring STRONG GIRL in feat of strength action.

I will reveal progressively more about her life and adventures. In the meantime here's a summary of her background.

Kim is a tall and very attractive blonde who works as a showgril. She's 22 years old.
Her parents died in an fire criminal arson when she was 15. She became herself an orphan with her twin sister, Tatiana. Then, Kim and Tatiana spent their adolescence in multiple foster homes. The two sisters have taken advantage of their physical beauty but at the age of 18, they had to work in a striptease bar to survive.
At the age of 22 years, Kim and Tatiana have been selected for a program of genetic enhancement, because their DNA matched perfectly. This program could only operate on women, especially with génégtique perfect and needed twin sisters that's why GENLAB society called them. Both agreed to participate, but what they didn't know was that one of the two would be sacrificed for the experiment : it was Tatiana. On the other hand, the genetic mutation worked very well on Kim. She gained superhuman strength enabling her to lift over thousands tons and she became invulnerable. Her stature reached the 7 feet (2.13 m) and she became even more beautiful and sexy. When Kim learned of the death of her sister, she became so angry that she destroyed the laboratory by using her new discovered superhuman strength. All scientists and soldiers who protected the laboratory were killed by the Superwoman rampage.
Today, Kim is still working as a showgirl stripper, but she is also a mercenary who puts her colossal strenght for the highest bidder.
She is proud of her very sexy body and her great power so she always acts wearing only a bikini and high heels.


That's it. I hope that this first shot will make you interested and you've enjoyed.
Thanks.

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22 Jul 2011 21:53 #24056 by fats
i would love to see the story posted, post the story in what ever lanuage you want more stories the better.

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23 Jul 2011 01:25 #24057 by Grayface
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If only I could read french. the story sounds awesome and the pic look real nice.

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23 Jul 2011 01:51 #24059 by sg2ww
OK, who is our French translator?

I'm just saying.

Thanks regardless of the language. Actually, Google Translator does French fairly well now.

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23 Jul 2011 02:40 #24060 by argonaut
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Artnico:

Several years ago, I translated your character biographies of Sara Line, Agent Amazon, and Princess Zalandra for the StoryBank, and your story "Sara's Confession."

Why don't you post your new story for the benefit of members who can read French, and I can start translating it?

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23 Jul 2011 05:06 - 23 Jul 2011 05:07 #24062 by Artnico
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argonaut wrote: Artnico:

Several years ago, I translated your character biographies of Sara Line, Agent Amazon, and Princess Zalandra for the StoryBank, and your story "Sara's Confession."

Why don't you post your new story for the benefit of members who can read French, and I can start translating it?

Regards,

Argonaut


Yes, of course I remember you Argonaut !

Think we have found our french translator... :)
Argonaut is the best one for that.

Thank you very much for your proposition Argonaut ! Just tell me where can I post you the first part of the STRONG GIRL story.

I can't wait STRONG GIRL being alive for all SuperWomenMania's community !

If you like this character, please let me know by sending your feedback and Karma.
Thanks.
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23 Jul 2011 08:02 #24066 by argonaut
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Artnico, I suggest you submit your story to the StoryBank. That way, members who read French can enjoy it right away, and I can find it there easily.

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24 Jul 2011 14:19 #24079 by Artnico
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OK. But what format should I use to send a story that contains some illustrations ?

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24 Jul 2011 18:08 #24084 by Woodclaw
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Artnico wrote: OK. But what format should I use to send a story that contains some illustrations ?


None, the new storybank includes a text editor similar to Word that allows the author to directly upload the story including all the images directly.
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24 Jul 2011 18:38 #24086 by fats

Artnico wrote: OK. But what format should I use to send a story that contains some illustrations ?


either copy/paste the story from your fav word processor or if the file is a pdf, send it to me via email and i'll convert it to the storybank for you and i'll also make it available from our new download page, which will have all the stories available in PDF format.

your choice, i'll be available to help what ever your choice.

Fats

p.s my email address is fatmanmedia@yahoo.co.uk
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25 Jul 2011 04:39 #24096 by Artnico
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Thank you very much for all your help.
I'll try first with the storybank text editor. If it doesn't work, I'll send you the file fats. ;)

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25 Jul 2011 04:43 #24097 by Artnico
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Meanwhile, here are other images of STRONG GIRL in its "Champions Online" version.
I hope you'll enjoy! ;)

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26 Jul 2011 04:25 #24117 by Artnico
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Hello everyone!

Here, finally, as promised the first illustrated story of my Superwomen STRONG GIRL! :cheer:

I had some troubles to upload and include pictures in the "Story bank" so I have attached a PDF version of the first story in which contain illustrations. :unsure:

I took pictures of famous models known but all photomanipulations and collages are of my own creation.

I remind everyone that the text is in French, but I look forward to Argonaut's translation who nicely has proposed. :)

I hope you will like it. Feel free to send me comments and feedbacks. B)

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26 Jul 2011 04:34 #24118 by fats
i#ll have that int he storybank tonight.

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26 Jul 2011 04:48 #24119 by Artnico
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Thanks Fats !

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26 Jul 2011 15:18 #24125 by Artnico
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Hi everyone !

I saw that Fats has just posted my first story of STRONG GIRL in "SWM Fiction". Just look in "Stories in PDF"
Waiting for Argonaut translation (thanks to him) for those who dont't understand french, but in the meantime, you can look at the pictures! ;)

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26 Jul 2011 19:25 #24127 by argonaut
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Thank you, Artnico. I don't think I'll have much trouble translating that, although I may need to ask you about a couple of idioms. Give me a week or so.

If I send you the text of my translation, will you be able to add the pictures to it?

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27 Jul 2011 04:43 #24129 by Artnico
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argonaut wrote: Thank you, Artnico. I don't think I'll have much trouble translating that, although I may need to ask you about a couple of idioms. Give me a week or so.

If I send you the text of my translation, will you be able to add the pictures to it?


Of course Argonaut ! Thanks for your help.
Could you send me your translation before sharing ? And how did you find the story ? You didn't told me what you think. TYou can send me a private message in french. ;)

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27 Jul 2011 04:52 #24130 by Artnico
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Hi everyone !

I go on holiday after tomorrow for a week, in the meantime, here are some more pictures STRONG GIRL, but it is only the beginning! ;)
Hope you'll enjoy.

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05 Aug 2011 23:09 - 05 Aug 2011 23:11 #24227 by Artnico
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Hello everyone!

Just returned from holiday with good news: Argonaut finished translating the first chapter of STRONG GIRL. I just send it to Fats. :)
You'll be able to find it in the "SWM Fiction - Stories in PDF"

And to celebrate my return, here is a picture of the Sexy STRONG GIRL in action ! :woohoo:

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06 Aug 2011 05:08 #24238 by Artnico
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STRONG GIRL Stats and Bio translation is now up ! :)
Thanks to Fats who posted the file in "SWM Fiction - Stories in PDF"

Enjoy ! ;)

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08 Aug 2011 17:02 - 08 Aug 2011 18:53 #24293 by Artnico
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Hello to all SWM members !

It's summer and many of us are on the beach or on vacation. B)

I take this opportunity to send you a mini comic of STRONG GIRL I realized from my own Champions Online screenshots.

This will allow you to wait until the next chapter of STRONG GIRL's origins.

I hope you'll enjoy ! And please, send me your comments. ;)

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To be continued...

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12 Aug 2011 16:47 #24392 by Artnico
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And here's more of STRONG GIRL in action ! :woohoo:

Feel free to post your comments. Thank you.


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Still a lot of things to come on STRONG GIRL, if you wish...

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09 Oct 2011 02:43 #24981 by Artnico
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Hello everyone!

Here I'm finally back after 35 days without Internet connection. I had big problems with my internet service provider, but hopefully all goes well today. :cheer:

I just send Fats the next issue of my Superwoman's character STRONG GIRL : this is the Part 2, written in French. I'm waiting to see if Argonaut could make an English translation, if he's not too busy. :unsure:

Meanwhile, there will be always plenty of sexy illustrations of my own creation based on photo-manipulations. B)

Part 2 will be available in "SWM-Fiction Stories in PDF" section.

Thank you all for your patience ! ;)

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09 Oct 2011 03:09 #24984 by fats
the file has been uploaded and it's called 2.le_tournant_du_destinfrench.pdf

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