A New Supergirl

Hey y'all,

So I'm putting myself out there for scrutiny.

I've wanted to write a Supergirl transformation story for a long time, and instead of being a short contained story, I have in mind the complete story of a normal girl suddenly transformed into Supergirl.

But what I didn't want to do was stifle that process by having to write chronologically. i.e. Chapter 1, then 2, then 3, etc. I wanted to write first about her inaugrual night out in her Supergirl costume and her first experience of beating a few bad guys up.

Then I felt I was ready to write about how she became Supergirl (Day 1).

And next... well... I am toying with either Day 2 or possibly another later one... maybe Day 12 or something.

But either way, I appreciate the time you may spend reading my stories... and even better I would welcome any feedback.

Oh... and about my Supergirl: She is 18, and instead of focusing on the outlandish strength (i.e. lifting cargo ships out of the water with her little finger), I wanted to focus on how she is essentially transformed into this walking goddess and how an ordinary-looking girl would handle being transformed into a Super Supermodel.

Hope you enjoy. I've published the first two chapters here:

Day 1
www.superheroines.net/blog/a-new-supergirl-day-1/

Day 2
www.superheroines.net/blog/a-new-supergirl-day-8/

It's ok - it could have done with a proof-reading as quite a few typos there. I also would have preferred to read chapter 2 with her gaining her powers and changing, rather than jumping to chapter 8.

Good story. And if this is your first attempt, its great! Not a big fan of the jump from Day 1 to Day 8, but that might be a preference others enjoy.

Awesome!

Wow! Great work! Want to read more. Please do continue this great story. Thank you for sharing them here to us.

Thanks for the feedback.

I just updated the stories, fixing the obvious typos, etc.

Regarding the different days - the Day I did was Day 8 because I really wanted to write about her first day on the job. That then gave me the idea of different Days in different orders.

Not everyone's cup of tea I know, but I hope it'll keep me motivated.

Thanks again!

Okay, now I have the bit between my teeth!

A New Supergirl - Day 60 is now live at:

www.superheroines.net/blog/a-new-supergirl-day-60

Hope you enjoy!!

Jon

Wow! Great chapter. Be waiting for the rest! Great work Jon.

I really enjoyed this! Superhuman strength, superhuman sexuality, and underneath it all, a real person-- you're hitting all the buttons I try to hit in my own writing. I'm looking forward to seeing more. Keep the bit between your teeth!

Really good work!

great story! i like all the little details