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Whiplash - Incomplete Story

02 Apr 2021 01:02 - 22 May 2021 01:30 #70880 by Silhouette
Whiplash - Incomplete Story was created by Silhouette
Here is an as-is incomplete story. I intend to continue it but, at the moment, need to distance myself from some Bad News before I can get back into the mood for writing. My Bad News shouldn't be your lack of reading material and I definitely intended for the first two chapters to be placed here before the Bad News occurred.Tags? All of the usual:* NUDITY: Yup. A little graphic, nothing out of the norm.* VIOLENCE: Yup. Fairly graphic.* OBSCENITIES: Yup. In this draft, I removed a lot of the racial slurs but one or two might still be in there. Some characters just don't prefer to speak the Queen's English...* MATURE THEMES: Probably. Implied. Let's just say "Yup" and be done with it.Enjoy.

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Last edit: 22 May 2021 01:30 by Silhouette. Reason: 2021-05-21 - Replaced prior PDF with updated PDF
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22 May 2021 01:40 #71241 by Silhouette
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2021-05-21 - I've written more on this storyline (available at the first post on this thread). It is now approximately 60 pages. Taking a break from the story to work on other projects (some superwoman-related).

There's only one significant revision from the prior version: The character is no longer bald. The bald characteristic was an artifact from when the character was going to have different superpowers and motivations. I kept it in during the prior version because, at the time, I was indifferent towards keeping it in. However, it's just no longer necessary and so I modified that portion of the story.

The new section doesn't have any new violence (don't worry; I'll get to those parts later) but there are mature themes, some non-explicit nudity and obscenities. Again, something that you don't want to read out loud to a bunch of school children.

Comments and critiques are always welcome. Enjoy.

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