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The Magic Girls

23 Nov 2011 23:24 #25500 by thaman157
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Came across this site recently. Stories about girls that are goddesses. Also has some other pretty cool content. Thought this would be of interest to this group. Site is tmgsaga.com .

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24 Nov 2011 02:22 #25503 by supian
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www.tmgsaga.com/tokens/tokens2.html

hmmm...you have to buy tokens? ($50 for 20 tokens) - think I'll give it a miss

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24 Nov 2011 05:26 #25504 by Jabbrwock
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supian wrote: www.tmgsaga.com/tokens/tokens2.html

hmmm...you have to buy tokens? ($50 for 20 tokens) - think I'll give it a miss


Yeah, it's a pay site. There's a guest section with some free stuff so people can check whether they think they'll like the paid stuff, just like most pay sites.

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24 Nov 2011 05:51 #25505 by SophiePortmane
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Just... awesome! The first time I really think about paying (but I know I'll don't)

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24 Nov 2011 05:52 #25506 by SophiePortmane
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I won't (sorry)

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24 Nov 2011 13:59 #25507 by revolution
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its 50 Tokens for $20 dollars

seems interesting...

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26 Nov 2011 03:14 - 26 Nov 2011 03:14 #25522 by enchantederotica
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Wow! Thanks for sharing our site here!

I'm finding a bit of inspiration for new stories and content for our own site from this one. I can respect that not everyone wants to pay for content, and that's fine. We where unsure if we wanted to charge when we started the website... but after writing over 400,000 words for our main series... we thought we needed it labeled 'premium content'. We will continue to add both new free content and new premium content as we write more stories.

I hope everyone enjoys our work... wether you wish to unlock more content or not! :D

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30 Nov 2011 13:06 #25563 by Sarge395
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I paid. Have not gotten to the point in the chapters where I will need to pay yet however. A LOT of content. Wish you could download the stories on pdf for offline reading. Maybe pay a token for the ability to download each 'free' story. Bandwidth is not free. I want to support the site but I am not always connected to the internet. Especially when deployed overseas. Like what I am reading so far. Girls could be a little meaner to the common idiots among them.

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30 Nov 2011 20:26 - 01 Dec 2011 09:31 #25569 by enchantederotica
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We are working to make the free stories into eBooks, but we are not sure about the paid stories. You can download Chapter 1 in our downloads section right now for free. We would like to make them all downloadable, but are wary about that because we don't want them showing up on other sites. Also, not all girls are as nice and angelic and pure as Hannah. If you like wicked girls... keep an eye out for Nika. ;) Thanks for your support

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01 Dec 2011 02:00 #25574 by steelknight3000
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Don't see any examples of super strength, speed, etc from what I've seen of this site. Is there any of that in these stories?
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01 Dec 2011 06:12 #25581 by enchantederotica
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Not much... yet. Our stories are admittedly about sex and 'powers' we simply call magic. They are not super-hero stories, but stories about hot babes with powers who use them in day-to-day life and not fighting crime. They commonly use powers of flight, teleportation, morphing, invisibility (from those without magic) and the ability to create things from thought like sex toys and even other people to please them. But ...

SPOILERS AHEAD.


It is mentioned fairly early on that our main girl Hannah is now so powerful and has so many different powers that she is "omnipotent". She isn't actually all-powerful, but she claims to be. In Chapter 6, Hannah kills a girl with her mind and laughs about it. In the few paragraphs that follow, her friend Cindy thinks about the reality that Hannah cannot be stopped or convicted of her crime. and she imagines what would happen if the police tried to arrest her...

Hannah could (1) watch as bullets bounce of her chest (2) throw the police cars into outer space (3) melt tanks with her eyes or even (4) turn an atomic bomb that was about to fall on her from above into bubbles with a point of her finger. Of course... she would do all this while wearing lingerie (much like Emma Frost would wear).

Later, in Chapter 12, two immortal babes have a "fight", even though they can't kill each other. This does involve throwing cars at each other and such.


END SPOILERS.

Chapters 1 - 7 are free and we encourage you to give them a shot. We ARE working on a super-hero themed spin off series starring the pink girl pictured above and her green-haired friend Jade. It will have a lot of more accepted super-powers that you might find in comics (strength, lazer eyes, speed, and sexy costumes). You can sign up for free and get notified when we release those stories early next year.

Please keep in mind that we are TOTALLY OPEN TO REQUESTS for stories. We have some things figured out, but if there are ideas you would like to see done, please let us know!

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01 Dec 2011 13:12 #25584 by thaman157
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I agree with Sarge. Stories could have more characters that gain powers, and abuse the powers. My favorite story is teachers pet which is exactly that. Like most of the stories though.

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01 Dec 2011 20:57 #25586 by enchantederotica
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I don't wanna spoil too much, but that is something we have in the works, both short term and long term. If you have read all the way to Teacher's Pet, I'm sure you have noticed there is more to our stories than just powers and sex. We do have a master plan and know where this saga is going, as well as how it ends.

In the short term, we will bump up some of our 'darker' stories, includingtwo concepts we have about our girls Nika and Celeste.

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02 Dec 2011 17:43 #25597 by Sarge395
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Certainly understand the desire to keep your content under your control. Very happy for the content.

Looking very forward to your future work. You certainly started out with a bang.

Is there anyway to maybe sell encrypted PDF files of your stories that are tagged to a certain sale (person)? That way you could maybe track who leaked your content out to the world? Fortunately I am currently at home and have relatively cheap and easy access to the internet. But when I am back in Afghanistan that is a whole different planet. Still begging to be able to download and save content that I purchase for personal use.

Who does your artwork on your site? Love it, especially the art with motion.

Things I'd like to see:
  • Some of the girls fighting and the carnage that ensues.
  • Some Halloween specials with costumes whipped up for the holiday
  • Witch costumes, riding brooms..
  • Love the developing magic use stories and practice
  • A newscaster trying to explain one of the girls antics and cut off in mid broadcast by her. Controlled to say that he was just kidding and then taught a lesson on camera by his crew. The crew is mind wiped but he is forced to watch the tape once a year as a reminder
  • Stories with more art embedded to assist telling the tale
  • Males with magic powers that are dominated and put in their place
  • Female genie freed by a male who frees her and has her gratitude as she becomes his girlfriend. Slowly over time he treats her like more of a toy only to have her turn the tables. They stay bf/gf but he learns his place.

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02 Dec 2011 21:50 - 02 Dec 2011 21:51 #25603 by enchantederotica
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Thanks for your feed back! We're glad you're enjoying our stories. Again, we are trying to make PDFs of all our free stories, but we'd like to make sure that they are all 100% proofread first... which we don't always do totally accurately, unfortunately. Also, in regard to our "for sale" stories... we have tried some encryption methods, but they are not foolproof. We'd rather try releasing hard copies of our stories with discounts for those who bought them online.

We do all of our artwork, but as you can imagine it takes a lot of time. We are hoping to have at least 10 drawings per "longer" story. When we started the site, we did a lot more art. Yet, every time we released a survey to our fans, they asked for more stories, not art.

We love your ideas, but there are a few rules that are within our "Magic Girls World". Here is some feedback for you.

- We do have a little fighting. Not so much carnage, but it is kinda fun to have two omnipotent, immortals girls fight, murdering each other over and over again and then each just giving up... and having sex instead.
- Can do, but Halloween is a ways away. We just released a short Christmas Story.
- Can do. Nika is our "witch" character. She has some stories on the way.
- Thanks!
- Interesting idea... We have a concept like that down the pipeline, but unfortunately it is a ways away.
- We're trying to get some more art. Again, it takes a lot of time... time away from writing.
- No magical men. Men cannot get magic, and our girls don't know why this is. It just is.
- Another great idea that we kinda have down the pipeline...

Again, thanks for your feedback!

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04 Dec 2011 02:40 #25614 by enchantederotica
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We added a gallery to this website and we'll be putting some of our models in super hero outfits. Keep an eye out for our Magic Girls!

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04 Dec 2011 03:44 #25615 by Super Belinda
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How about a girl who is really omnipotent? all powerful?

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04 Dec 2011 08:38 #25618 by enchantederotica
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The quest for one our girls to reach actual omnipotence is the backbone for our main storyline. The question is "why" the girls in pursuit of that want to become omnipotent, for they all have different reasons. We toss around the word "omnipotent" to simply say that a girl "can basically do anything she wants"... basically. Two things no girl can do is time travel and the ability to create permanent life. A fair number of girls can create people... but they must stay near them and usually don't have very complex personalities.

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05 Dec 2011 01:50 #25622 by thaman157
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I think the stories of how the girls went from girls nobody paid attention to to virtual goddesses would also be interesting. Seeing them discover the power, practice it, and go stronger with it is always interesting.

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05 Dec 2011 04:13 #25623 by enchantederotica
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We will be doing a Nika origin story for sure, and some other "in the past" stories.

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05 Dec 2011 04:32 #25625 by fats
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in case no one know TMGSAGA also has a tumblr page

Very NSFW

tmgsaga.tumblr.com/

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07 Dec 2011 08:10 #25657 by enchantederotica
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We have just started work on a novel version of Hannah's origins that are exactly this- a dorky nobody to "omnipotent" god. It will be tricky to write because Hannah started learning her powers when she was 14... but we will NOT write about underage sex. Yet, this story will still be full of sexual moments (between adults).

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25 Dec 2011 08:19 #25778 by Sarge395
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tumblr page does not seem to be working

I am currently reading the story with Mrs Fleming and Alexis and am really knocked out over it.

Minor issues with the site:

1. Site login does not remember you. I have a login and wish I could just click through it without typing my username and password in every time.
2. No bookmarks in the purchased content. Or at least the one so far that I have purchased.
3. Long stories (POSITIVE) but a fair amount of grammar and spelling issues
4. And my previous issue with not being able to download and save content offline. Sorry about beating a dead horse.
5. Wish the story pages were twice as long. I read quickly and some of the stories are 41 clicks to get through. Maybe double the words per page. Minor quibble

Keep up the great work. Well worth purchasing some credits and supporting tmgsaga
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25 Dec 2011 21:52 #25783 by enchantederotica
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Yes, we had to take down our tumblr page for legal reasons.Also, we're not exactly web designers or programmers, but we can look into a way that the site will log you in automatically. Bookmarks are only on our longer stories. The "typo" issue and "no download issue" link back to the high demand for content. We are writing so much so fast that we hardly have time for anything else. We are in a "go back and fix errors so we can release a hardback novel of chapters 1-7" phase right now: hence the "vacation". Also, we really cant make the pages bigger due to the size of the website. We used to have a scroll option, but people wanted "pages" instead. Fun fact: the arrow keys on the keyboard turn pages too. Hope that helps. Look for a major update in late january. Thanks for your feedback!

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26 Dec 2011 00:29 #25787 by fats
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if you need coding help let me know and i'll see what i can do to help.

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