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Interesting New Original Superheroine Story

06 Dec 2013 03:14 #34595 by sg2ww
I thought this was interesting: simonlmoore.deviantart.com/art/Code-Name...-Chapter-1-416515599

Very good start.
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06 Dec 2013 05:20 #34596 by castor
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This is pretty clever.


it does a good job of making a realistic world out of an intresting setting- the little details of the maps the hunger-it all works. The idea of the characters seem pretty neat to with a kind of intresting sence of how superheros kind of meet earthly authority(though the particulars of it do ring a tad false-saving anyones life in war seems not something you would get chewed out for). The one real problem i had it felt a little bit like setup- would have a liked a touch more of plot in it. But then agian its a good almost comic story. Hope to see more.

and theres no rule that says I can't be posted on deviant art and here to.

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06 Dec 2013 10:01 #34597 by Woodclaw
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castor wrote: and theres no rule that says I can't be posted on deviant art and here to.


Except that we need the explicit permission of the original author.

Posting another author stories without his/hers explicit consent is a violation of the general principle that an author maintain full control over his/hers work, including publication.

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