Interesting New Original Superheroine Story

I thought this was interesting: simonlmoore.deviantart.com/art/Code-Name...-Chapter-1-416515599

Very good start.

This is pretty clever.


it does a good job of making a realistic world out of an intresting setting- the little details of the maps the hunger-it all works. The idea of the characters seem pretty neat to with a kind of intresting sence of how superheros kind of meet earthly authority(though the particulars of it do ring a tad false-saving anyones life in war seems not something you would get chewed out for). The one real problem i had it felt a little bit like setup- would have a liked a touch more of plot in it. But then agian its a good almost comic story. Hope to see more.

and theres no rule that says I can't be posted on deviant art and here to.