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Oh-No Sally
I hope you all enjoy it...except for vindictive little bugger who gave me a one-star rating on it. It's really not that bad. If you do like it, help a brother out of low ratings by giving me some more stars! On the other hand, if you think it's crap you should let me know that as well...
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A big thanks also to whoever took the time to adjust the formatting. It makes a big difference, and means a lot to me. Cheers!
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I wonder if they were just someone like me who is not into muscle bound women? If so they should not leave a rating in my opinion. I didn't rate it because it just wouldn't be right. Why would you go see one of the various teen centric vampire movies/series and give it a thumbs down afterwards if you had to hold your nose to walk into the theater?
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Sarge395 wrote: except for vindictive little bugger who gave me a one-star rating on it. It's really not that bad. If you do like it, help a brother out of low ratings by giving me some more stars! On the other hand, if you think it's crap you should let me know that as well..
I wonder if they were just someone like me who is not into muscle bound women? If so they should not left a rating in my opinion. I didn't rate it because it just wouldn't be right. Why would you go see one of the various teen centric vampire movies/series and give it a thumbs down afterwards if you had to hold your nose to walk into the theater?
There are a lot of people who cannot tell the difference between "I didn't like it," and "It sucks." Just one of the sad realities of art.
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Find Sally's next misadventure here: dru1076.deviantart.com/art/Oh-No-Sally-2...llery%3ADru1076&qo=0
I want to thank everybody who left a comment...I was not expecting such a strong response! Thank you!
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Jabbrwock wrote:
Sarge395 wrote: except for vindictive little bugger who gave me a one-star rating on it. It's really not that bad. If you do like it, help a brother out of low ratings by giving me some more stars! On the other hand, if you think it's crap you should let me know that as well..
I wonder if they were just someone like me who is not into muscle bound women? If so they should not left a rating in my opinion. I didn't rate it because it just wouldn't be right. Why would you go see one of the various teen centric vampire movies/series and give it a thumbs down afterwards if you had to hold your nose to walk into the theater?
There are a lot of people who cannot tell the difference between "I didn't like it," and "It sucks." Just one of the sad realities of art.
One or two negative votes can be ignored if there are sveral more positive ones on the other side. I think the more disturbing thing would be if there are only few votes/hits/comments because that would mean the story gets ignored altogether.
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But seriously, we've got to be honest, in the way that Sarge has been by saying he doesn't find Sally attractive. I got pretty broad taste in broads...which has gotten me in a lot of trouble over the years...and I know that if I want to get guys like him more interested in what I write I should tone down the muscles. This is constructive, helpful, and the way Sarge raised the point, rather classily done. That's how it's done if you want to influence someone like me.
If you ever feel the need to drop a single star rating on someone, it's probably better not to say why unless you think your input would be helpful. If you just want to tell an author they suck then that's not doing anybody any good, is it? This ain't a rant btw...I'm perfectly happy, I assure you. Responses to O Girl's first adventure filled the entire comments section of the front page, and there's no way I'm going to be unhappy about that!
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Dru1076 wrote: I gotta agree with Njae...but I'd still like to take that little muthafu...hang on...I'm gettings all emotional...
But seriously, we've got to be honest, in the way that Sarge has been by saying he doesn't find Sally attractive. I got pretty broad taste in broads...which has gotten me in a lot of trouble over the years...and I know that if I want to get guys like him more interested in what I write I should tone down the muscles. This is constructive, helpful, and the way Sarge raised the point, rather classily done. That's how it's done if you want to influence someone like me.
If you ever feel the need to drop a single star rating on someone, it's probably better not to say why unless you think your input would be helpful. If you just want to tell an author they suck then that's not doing anybody any good, is it? This ain't a rant btw...I'm perfectly happy, I assure you. Responses to O Girl's first adventure filled the entire comments section of the front page, and there's no way I'm going to be unhappy about that!
Lol and here I thought I would be the kind to get very emotional very quickly when the feedback doesn't turn out to be the way I imagined. At least you got some constructive feedback (and I have to admit that Sally was a bit too big for my tastes as well).
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Okay....maybe not B Girl.
I'll work on that. In the meantime, don't forget to check out Sally solving her traffic issues in Pt 2:
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Find it here: dru1076.deviantart.com/art/Oh-No-Sally-3...llery%3ADru1076&qo=0
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Here ya go:
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Enjoy!
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Dru1076 wrote: I just put the next misadventure of O Girl up on DA. When I get to part 10, I'll stick em in the library as I did with 2-5.
Here ya go:
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Thanks for posting.....
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Idea number 2.......Fukushima! ...... By the time she's done they'll be saying FukuOGirl!
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The ecological damage to the fiery area would be incredible as chunks of ice rain, frozen fish, and mud rain down obliterating (more or less) what ever was on fire, and probably cause floods and mudslides as the ice melted.
Or O Girl could use her heat vision on the frozen lake causing boiling hot water to rain down, not to mention all the cooked creatures that were in the lake etc.
AND thats not even taking into consideration the ecological disaster of the now empty lake. what about the local wildlife that depended on the lake and what if it was a reservoir for a local community.
Oh the possibilities for blundering are endless.
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Grayface wrote: Ooh I have an idea. It's been in my brain for years and years. In Superman III Superman freezes the top of the lake and drops it over the fire. For years I thought he froze the whole lake. What if in an attempt to put out a fire O Girl freezes a lake and drops it on a fire, only she freezes the whole lake, fish, plants, and even some of the muddy bottom ans then drops it over a fire.
The ecological damage to the fiery area would be incredible as chunks of ice rain, frozen fish, and mud rain down obliterating (more or less) what ever was on fire, and probably cause floods and mudslides as the ice melted.
Or O Girl could use her heat vision on the frozen lake causing boiling hot water to rain down, not to mention all the cooked creatures that were in the lake etc.
AND thats not even taking into consideration the ecological disaster of the now empty lake. what about the local wildlife that depended on the lake and what if it was a reservoir for a local community.
Oh the possibilities for blundering are endless.
And yes the old joke
"hey hun i got some scuba gear for my birthday"
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Mmmm...I'm thinking that O Girl might take offence to the way the Japanese are getting around international whaling bans with "scientific research" vessels, too....
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