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Oh-No Sally

21 Dec 2013 03:35 - 21 Dec 2013 05:40 #34785 by Dru1076
Oh-No Sally was created by Dru1076
I've just put up the first in what will be a series about a supergirl who doesn't always get it quite right. Well, in fact she never gets it right. If anybody has any ideas or things they'd like to see Sally screw up, either drop me a line or send me a pm...I'd like to hear from you!

I hope you all enjoy it...except for vindictive little bugger who gave me a one-star rating on it. It's really not that bad. If you do like it, help a brother out of low ratings by giving me some more stars! On the other hand, if you think it's crap you should let me know that as well...
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22 Dec 2013 00:17 #34792 by SCOTT R
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Haha ...Just finished reading about O Girl, she's a real treat!! 5 stars from me; great job as always Dru!
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22 Dec 2013 00:35 #34795 by Dru1076
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Thanks Scott! I'm glad you liked it, and I have a few more misadventures in mind already for the mighty O Girl.

A big thanks also to whoever took the time to adjust the formatting. It makes a big difference, and means a lot to me. Cheers!
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22 Dec 2013 14:49 - 23 Dec 2013 14:15 #34798 by Sarge395
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except for vindictive little bugger who gave me a one-star rating on it. It's really not that bad. If you do like it, help a brother out of low ratings by giving me some more stars! On the other hand, if you think it's crap you should let me know that as well..

I wonder if they were just someone like me who is not into muscle bound women? If so they should not leave a rating in my opinion. I didn't rate it because it just wouldn't be right. Why would you go see one of the various teen centric vampire movies/series and give it a thumbs down afterwards if you had to hold your nose to walk into the theater?
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22 Dec 2013 22:42 #34802 by Jabbrwock
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Sarge395 wrote: except for vindictive little bugger who gave me a one-star rating on it. It's really not that bad. If you do like it, help a brother out of low ratings by giving me some more stars! On the other hand, if you think it's crap you should let me know that as well..

I wonder if they were just someone like me who is not into muscle bound women? If so they should not left a rating in my opinion. I didn't rate it because it just wouldn't be right. Why would you go see one of the various teen centric vampire movies/series and give it a thumbs down afterwards if you had to hold your nose to walk into the theater?


There are a lot of people who cannot tell the difference between "I didn't like it," and "It sucks." Just one of the sad realities of art.
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23 Dec 2013 07:26 - 23 Dec 2013 09:32 #34806 by Dru1076
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I've put up the next short instalment up on my DeviantArt page. I'll do this with the next three or four so I don't clog the library menu with such tiny chapters. Once I string enough together to make it worthwhile, I'll post it in the library here. I ticked the 'no mature content' tab, so anyone who isn't a member of DA can still read it, but I might not be able to that in future. I was wondering if maybe there should be an 'immature content' button...

Find Sally's next misadventure here: dru1076.deviantart.com/art/Oh-No-Sally-2...llery%3ADru1076&qo=0

I want to thank everybody who left a comment...I was not expecting such a strong response! Thank you!
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23 Dec 2013 08:08 #34807 by njae
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Jabbrwock wrote:

Sarge395 wrote: except for vindictive little bugger who gave me a one-star rating on it. It's really not that bad. If you do like it, help a brother out of low ratings by giving me some more stars! On the other hand, if you think it's crap you should let me know that as well..

I wonder if they were just someone like me who is not into muscle bound women? If so they should not left a rating in my opinion. I didn't rate it because it just wouldn't be right. Why would you go see one of the various teen centric vampire movies/series and give it a thumbs down afterwards if you had to hold your nose to walk into the theater?


There are a lot of people who cannot tell the difference between "I didn't like it," and "It sucks." Just one of the sad realities of art.


One or two negative votes can be ignored if there are sveral more positive ones on the other side. I think the more disturbing thing would be if there are only few votes/hits/comments because that would mean the story gets ignored altogether.

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23 Dec 2013 09:31 #34808 by Dru1076
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I gotta agree with Njae...but I'd still like to take that little muthafu...hang on...I'm gettings all emotional...

But seriously, we've got to be honest, in the way that Sarge has been by saying he doesn't find Sally attractive. I got pretty broad taste in broads...which has gotten me in a lot of trouble over the years...and I know that if I want to get guys like him more interested in what I write I should tone down the muscles. This is constructive, helpful, and the way Sarge raised the point, rather classily done. That's how it's done if you want to influence someone like me.

If you ever feel the need to drop a single star rating on someone, it's probably better not to say why unless you think your input would be helpful. If you just want to tell an author they suck then that's not doing anybody any good, is it? This ain't a rant btw...I'm perfectly happy, I assure you. Responses to O Girl's first adventure filled the entire comments section of the front page, and there's no way I'm going to be unhappy about that!

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23 Dec 2013 11:05 #34809 by njae
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Dru1076 wrote: I gotta agree with Njae...but I'd still like to take that little muthafu...hang on...I'm gettings all emotional...

But seriously, we've got to be honest, in the way that Sarge has been by saying he doesn't find Sally attractive. I got pretty broad taste in broads...which has gotten me in a lot of trouble over the years...and I know that if I want to get guys like him more interested in what I write I should tone down the muscles. This is constructive, helpful, and the way Sarge raised the point, rather classily done. That's how it's done if you want to influence someone like me.

If you ever feel the need to drop a single star rating on someone, it's probably better not to say why unless you think your input would be helpful. If you just want to tell an author they suck then that's not doing anybody any good, is it? This ain't a rant btw...I'm perfectly happy, I assure you. Responses to O Girl's first adventure filled the entire comments section of the front page, and there's no way I'm going to be unhappy about that!


Lol and here I thought I would be the kind to get very emotional very quickly when the feedback doesn't turn out to be the way I imagined. At least you got some constructive feedback (and I have to admit that Sally was a bit too big for my tastes as well).

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23 Dec 2013 12:12 #34810 by Dru1076
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Its all part of the character: the physique is important to convey how over the top O Girl is. This is not a graceful woman. But keep your eyes out for O Girl's nemesis...B Girl.....?



Okay....maybe not B Girl.



I'll work on that. In the meantime, don't forget to check out Sally solving her traffic issues in Pt 2:

dru1076.deviantart.com/art/Oh-No-Sally-2...llery%3ADru1076&qo=0
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31 Dec 2013 02:29 - 31 Dec 2013 02:30 #34915 by Dru1076
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I've uploaded another install of Oh No Sally to my DA page. This time she's facing a hostage crisis, but once again she doesn't handle things quite how the authorities would have liked...

Find it here: dru1076.deviantart.com/art/Oh-No-Sally-3...llery%3ADru1076&qo=0
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31 Dec 2013 05:27 #34917 by SCOTT R
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I'm loving this series Dru!
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04 Jan 2014 07:37 #34961 by Dru1076
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As promised, now that I've put a few together, I've uploaded all the short chapters of Oh No Sally into the library as one big chunk. Included is the very latest, which hasn't appeared on my DA page yet. Enjoy...
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05 Jan 2014 07:14 #34971 by SCOTT R
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Can't wait to see O Girl visiting North Korea Dru!
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12 Jan 2014 02:32 #35056 by Dru1076
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I just put the next misadventure of O Girl up on DA. When I get to part 10, I'll stick em in the library as I did with 2-5.

Here ya go:

dru1076.deviantart.com/art/Oh-No-Sally-6-by-Dru-426333499

Enjoy! :)
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12 Jan 2014 04:52 #35060 by ong76win2
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Dru1076 wrote: I just put the next misadventure of O Girl up on DA. When I get to part 10, I'll stick em in the library as I did with 2-5.

Here ya go:

dru1076.deviantart.com/art/Oh-No-Sally-6-by-Dru-426333499

Enjoy! :)


Thanks for posting.....

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17 Jan 2014 08:19 #35132 by SCOTT R
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The best O Girl adventure so far; thanks a ton Dru! Nice superbreath action and you even got her showing off her supermind power now! Awesome!
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17 Jan 2014 08:45 #35133 by Dru1076
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You're most welcome Scott! And thank you. Just for those kind words, you can expect to see pt 7 in the next 24hrs...
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18 Jan 2014 03:30 #35145 by Dru1076
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O Girl sallies forth in yet another quest for justice as she awaits word that North Korea is now a democracy. Well, justice as she sees it, anyway!

Find it here: dru1076.deviantart.com/art/Oh-No-Sally-7...llery%3ADru1076&qo=0
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19 Jan 2014 18:54 - 20 Jan 2014 02:02 #35168 by SCOTT R
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Yay... the IRS feels O Girl's power! Nice one Dru! You were wanting some ideas for an O Girl story so I have two. I have this vision of her arriving to put a fire out that's been started by accident at a military ammo dump. With thousands of tons of high explosives in danger of going off and the mighty O Girl's past record of saving the day, what could possibly go wrong?


Idea number 2.......Fukushima! ...... By the time she's done they'll be saying FukuOGirl!
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19 Jan 2014 20:32 #35171 by Dru1076
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Thanks for the ideas Scott! Both are very good, and I may indeed use both at some point. I especially like the Fukashima idea...I could have some fun with that....

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19 Jan 2014 20:58 #35172 by Grayface
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Ooh I have an idea. It's been in my brain for years and years. In Superman III Superman freezes the top of the lake and drops it over the fire. For years I thought he froze the whole lake. What if in an attempt to put out a fire O Girl freezes a lake and drops it on a fire, only she freezes the whole lake, fish, plants, and even some of the muddy bottom ans then drops it over a fire.

The ecological damage to the fiery area would be incredible as chunks of ice rain, frozen fish, and mud rain down obliterating (more or less) what ever was on fire, and probably cause floods and mudslides as the ice melted.

Or O Girl could use her heat vision on the frozen lake causing boiling hot water to rain down, not to mention all the cooked creatures that were in the lake etc.

AND thats not even taking into consideration the ecological disaster of the now empty lake. what about the local wildlife that depended on the lake and what if it was a reservoir for a local community.

Oh the possibilities for blundering are endless.
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19 Jan 2014 21:31 #35173 by castor
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Grayface wrote: Ooh I have an idea. It's been in my brain for years and years. In Superman III Superman freezes the top of the lake and drops it over the fire. For years I thought he froze the whole lake. What if in an attempt to put out a fire O Girl freezes a lake and drops it on a fire, only she freezes the whole lake, fish, plants, and even some of the muddy bottom ans then drops it over a fire.

The ecological damage to the fiery area would be incredible as chunks of ice rain, frozen fish, and mud rain down obliterating (more or less) what ever was on fire, and probably cause floods and mudslides as the ice melted.

Or O Girl could use her heat vision on the frozen lake causing boiling hot water to rain down, not to mention all the cooked creatures that were in the lake etc.

AND thats not even taking into consideration the ecological disaster of the now empty lake. what about the local wildlife that depended on the lake and what if it was a reservoir for a local community.

Oh the possibilities for blundering are endless.


And yes the old joke

"hey hun i got some scuba gear for my birthday"
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20 Jan 2014 01:41 #35176 by Dru1076
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That's an interesting idea Greyface...I remember that scene. But why settle for a little lake? With big bushfires burning in Australia right now as write this, I think it's time O Girl comes visiting Down Under.

Mmmm...I'm thinking that O Girl might take offence to the way the Japanese are getting around international whaling bans with "scientific research" vessels, too....
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20 Jan 2014 02:10 - 20 Jan 2014 02:13 #35178 by SCOTT R
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Hehe....watching the SeaHawks vs. 49ers right now gives me another idea. The mighty O Girl plays against a pro football team in a charity event and gets just a wee bit to rough.
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