Meteoroids

Before starting let me say that I'm really happy to see a new piece from AuGoose after all this months. I was really afraid we had lost him

Okay, on with the story.
Meteoroids is a pretty nice short, single scene story. I like the fact that the main character is decently fleshed out -- within the limits of such a short piece -- and while the whole 'Armageddon' scenario pushed me a bit off, I really appreciated the fact that the main character is portrayed as competent and not adversarial to her superhuman girlfriend.
One thing makes the story kind of imbalanced for me: the whole 'space makes me woobly' thing. I understand it's needed for the story and I'm very willingly to write it off under the suspension of disbelief, but it feels a bit weak of an excuse to jumpstart the events, considering the cost of a single space mission, bringing along a specialist without full zero-G training. I think that this particular detail could have benefited from a bit more tweaking and exploring.

Overall it's still an enjoyable story, not a memorable one. It fills the bill of my "comfort food" stories: those who might not be ground-breaking and memorable, but give the reader some fun and some kinky without asking much in return.

Welcome back, Au

So great to see Au Goose back in action! A fun ubergirl romp with more like it hopefully to come!

ElF

Sadly, Meteoroids isn't new - I wrote it in a single sitting back when I first de-lurked on the boards, but put it into a forum post that's since been sinking down to the bottom of the fish tank. I thought it would be good to get it into the Library before it vanished forever into the stygian depths. I've actually be really struggling to write lately and hoped it would give me a little more motivation. Its certainly on my mind to do more stuff for SWM, but I'm just not there yet.

Koopa, I can maybe find the aforementioned stories (that's about 6 computers ago now) but some are not exactly topical for this site. As to my female characters, yeah, I do tend to prefer a certain amount of enthusiasm or semi-willing participation. Just one of my quirks. I think it's funny how well Zoe was received, as doing a "bad girl" story is completely out of character for me. I was trying to wrap my head around the style. Lioness is a lot more my native speed.