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Fall of Superior Girl

12 Jun 2017 06:38 #54684 by willow
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Thanks for all the great comments! Chapter 17 has been posted.

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12 Jun 2017 08:33 #54689 by Woodclaw
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willow wrote: Thanks for all the great comments! Chapter 17 has been posted.


The story is now published. For the record we are now under official workshop embargo so no new story will be published for the following two weeks to give people time to read and make up their mind about the new workshop entries.

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12 Jun 2017 23:01 #54708 by jumperprime
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Huh? since when does Superior Girl have brown hair? I thought Jessie was always a blonde?

Also, Ollie's gonna be pissed that Superior Girl scuffed his building.

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13 Jun 2017 08:03 #54721 by Woodclaw
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jumperprime wrote: Huh? since when does Superior Girl have brown hair? I thought Jessie was always a blonde?

Also, Ollie's gonna be pissed that Superior Girl scuffed his building.


As Willow already told before when I pointed out that Michelle was supposed to be african-american, she's taking some liberties with the characters' appearence.

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14 Jun 2017 05:14 #54755 by willow
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LOL. That may have been a typo on my part. I actually have several pages of notes on main characters detailing appearance, motivation, etc. I should probably reference it more than trying to rely on memory all the time.

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28 Jun 2017 01:05 #55044 by willow
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Just wanted to give everyone a quick update. I am probably going to wait another week or two before publishing the next chapter to Fall of Superior Girl. As you can guess, it is the fight between Superior Girl and Power Girl so I want to make sure it is sufficiently epic for what has been 17 chapters of build-up.
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28 Jun 2017 01:31 #55045 by LustMonster
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willow wrote: Just wanted to give everyone a quick update. I am probably going to wait another week or two before publishing the next chapter to Fall of Superior Girl. As you can guess, it is the fight between Superior Girl and Power Girl so I want to make sure it is sufficiently epic for what has been 17 chapters of build-up.


Epic is good! :)

Take your time...

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28 Jun 2017 08:20 #55049 by Woodclaw
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willow wrote: Just wanted to give everyone a quick update. I am probably going to wait another week or two before publishing the next chapter to Fall of Superior Girl. As you can guess, it is the fight between Superior Girl and Power Girl so I want to make sure it is sufficiently epic for what has been 17 chapters of build-up.


No problem Willow, we are still under workshop embargo ;) :P

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28 Jun 2017 14:02 #55055 by anaheim
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Sad news, but I look forward to the next part.

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09 Jul 2017 01:01 #55190 by willow
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Alright, the big showdown in Chapter 18 has been posted and ready for publication as soon as the embargo is lifted.
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09 Jul 2017 03:23 #55191 by anaheim
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great news

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09 Jul 2017 07:32 #55192 by Woodclaw
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willow wrote: Alright, the big showdown in Chapter 18 has been posted and ready for publication as soon as the embargo is lifted.


The embargo is already off, so the chapter is now online for all to enjoy.
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10 Jul 2017 12:25 #55202 by anaheim
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Is Monica Braun the last Ambrosia Amazon left?

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11 Jul 2017 06:58 #55208 by willow
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The last one free at least, although she probably isn't doing so well considering she is minus an arm.

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11 Jul 2017 09:30 #55210 by Woodclaw
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willow wrote: The last one free at least, although she probably isn't doing so well considering she is minus an arm.


This might lead to some interesting speculations about the regenerative abilities of the Ambrosia Amazons.

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11 Jul 2017 17:14 #55217 by smoki07
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It's quiet funny or ironic that it was mention of her (ex)boyfriend which throw her into rage made considering how many time she cheated on him lol

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12 Jul 2017 09:05 #55221 by Woodclaw
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smoki07 wrote: It's quiet funny or ironic that it was mention of her (ex)boyfriend which throw her into rage made considering how many time she cheated on him lol


I think this might be a bad case of guilty conscience.

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12 Jul 2017 12:22 #55223 by smoki07
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smoki07 wrote: It's quiet funny or ironic that it was mention of her (ex)boyfriend which throw her into rage made considering how many time she cheated on him lol


I think this might be a bad case of guilty conscience.


probably.I wonder if she gonna meet Mike in next chapter(s) and how will they react.

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18 Jul 2017 03:32 #55303 by willow
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Just a quick heads up. Next chapter is likely going to be delayed another week. Windows is giving me trouble so a complete wipe and reinstall are in order (actually overdue). Don't worry, multiple backups of the story are safe online already so nothing will be lost.
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23 Jul 2017 22:09 #55433 by Thoth
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Chapter 19 coming this weekend?

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03 Aug 2017 02:13 #55653 by Thoth
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Do we have any idea when Chapter 19 is coming?

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03 Aug 2017 13:04 #55673 by Woodclaw
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Thoth wrote: Do we have any idea when Chapter 19 is coming?


I guess that Willow is working on it, but the summer heat can slow a writer down ... a lot.

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04 Aug 2017 23:01 #55695 by willow
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What? Oh, yeah....ah....yeah. That's right. (insert random George R.R. Martin meme) In all seriousness, life just got a bit in the way as it does on occasion. Should have the next chapter out this weekend.
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12 Aug 2017 10:04 #55792 by TheOne25
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Really enjoying this story Willow! I'm really excited to see what happens in the next chapter

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22 Aug 2017 05:13 #55925 by willow
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Ok, Finally posted Chapter 19. Can't George R.R. Martin this any further. Just a few final touches on Chapter 20 and that is the end of this story.
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