Looking for Feedback

Greetings,

For the last couple of months i have been working on a feature film Superheroine project. I have managed to raise about half the budget(its about a 100k) so things are going alone. While i don't want to give to much info on it the title is currently 'Duo'.

My casting director has suggested that i get more feedback on the script before sending it out to cast-so to you my Superwomenmaniacs friends i go.

I am looking for people to take a read of it and tell me what they think of it. Its flow its structure, its pacing its grammar-what ever. It could use more feedback i think at this point to help certainly.

I will warn you that it is 100 pages long and i am looking for feedback in like a week or two weeks at most. Also Conisder this under NDA. But well I'll think its good and i will be happy to give you a special thanks credit as it goes forward if you want.
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So private message me if you want to take a look at it.

Castor

I wouldn't mind giving you input on your proposed script.

Thanks Maniacs for the response so far:)

i means a lot

A couple more people would be super....Woman Maniacal.

Castor

A pleasure to read it. SHTL.

Thanks for all the responses so far.

Ended up Working on Superherone short film over the weekend(which i may share when its done) and it reminded me of the importance of getting a good tight script with good structure and narrative before i start shooting. Want to keep it tight.