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And I do have a knack for finding hot models for my characters, it seems
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Definitely looking forward to more.
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Fun stuff. Looking forward to more. I might prefer slightly longer, but I know that itch to publish something good instead of drag it out hoping for something perfect...
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AuGoose wrote: Repeated applications of Mike enhance the core power set. One has to wonder if repeated applications of Henry enhance whatever he gave them or start triggering additional abilities. Depth vs. breadth.
Fun stuff. Looking forward to more. I might prefer slightly longer, but I know that itch to publish something good instead of drag it out hoping for something perfect...
This one was supposed to be a way longer story, but since I haven't plublished anything in a while, I decided to publish it as soon as I got a good ending. But since all my stories have three or four sequences, in the end it's only one big story with several chapters
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AuGoose wrote: Repeated applications of Mike enhance the core power set. One has to wonder if repeated applications of Henry enhance whatever he gave them or start triggering additional abilities. Depth vs. breadth.
I think this might be a pretty good frame of reference for future installments and to create an interesting level of asymmetry between the characters, allowing for a more varied interplay.
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New chapter out. Sorry for the delay, and I hope you enjoy it!
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If you want to see the full extent of Lauren's powers, this is the chapter. Hope you guys enjoy it!
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Expect a really different pace on the story, but it's only on this one. I'm planning lot's of superheroine fighting on the next one
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erikphandel wrote: I have no idea what you're talking about but yeah Theresa May seems pretty hellbent on Brexit tbqh
I think he means the events in the previous chapter are still going on in in the background while we cut to a different part of the world.
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dude did I just forgot what I had written what the fuck
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New chapter up! Getting back to the main story on the next one. Please tell me what you think of this one
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