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Pepper wrote: Nothing new here in a while. Hope the story hasn't run out of steam.
More like I've run out of steam :c but I'm glad to know there are people still interested. I have a lot planned out in my head, it's just a matter of typing it
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Definitely let us know when more arrives!
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erikphandel wrote:
Pepper wrote: Nothing new here in a while. Hope the story hasn't run out of steam.
More like I've run out of steam :c but I'm glad to know there are people still interested. I have a lot planned out in my head, it's just a matter of typing it
Definitely still interested, so let's hope you'll find your second wind!
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New chapter up! Hope you guys enjoy it. Make sure to let me know what you think here or in the DA comments
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I noticed there was no picture in this one, except for the costume. Makes sense, since there's not a new female character to introduce, but it did lend something to previous chapters. You have very good taste.
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This is the second to last chapter in the Lauren storyline. After this storyline ends, we're back to usual, normal superheroics
Please tell me what you guys think here or in the DA comments. Hope you enjoy it!
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AuGoose wrote: Nice. Very interested in seeing the outcome for God- er, Holly. Seem thing, I guess .
At this point one should wonder if spelling her name with to "Ls" is correct.
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Woohoo!
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That was nice, thanks for sharing!erikphandel wrote: I have finished the last chapter of Lauren's arc erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/The-Marvel...e-Universe-720334145
Woohoo!
Still, once again there is that paradox. When I want a heroine to be utterly invincible, as soon as she is, the story is not going to be fun any more (metaphorically, it's those eons in vacuum). Any interesting twist may come only with an obstacle, but what could it be, if I want her to be invincible? Paradox
Has there been any discussion on that? Does anyone have any ideas about coming out of this? Does "utterly invincible" mean "no plot" as soon as everyone's aware she's like that?
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erikphandel wrote: I think there is a kind of story to be told with a omnipotent heroine, as Jasmine from EnchantedErotica has shown. But it's not the kind of story I, personally, want to tell, so I chose to dial it all back after the fun is done
In many ways, I think that a omnipotent character lend itself better to single episode comedy, because it's so damn difficult to build tension around her.
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rednecko wrote: Enjoyed the Lioness story. I'm wondering if Victoria is the Alter ego to the Lioness in this story. Maybe, she finds a magic power that controls her more than she controls it. It's an interesting story to read.
Nah, she isn't, but this story is going in a similar path of what you described
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I know I was supposed to finish the Lioness story but inspiration works in weird ways. I'll work on that now
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erikphandel wrote: New brand new story is up! erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/The-Magic-Costume-728877073
I know I was supposed to finish the Lioness story but inspiration works in weird ways. I'll work on that now
Very cool - you can't go wrong with a sexed up version of a classic Silver Age origin.
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This was up two days ago and I forgot to post it here :v
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This is a (late) Valentine's Day special, hope everyone enjoys it
Yes, I'm still working on the Magic Costume storyline! This was just a little detour :v
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erikphandel wrote: New chapter up! www.deviantart.com/erikhandel/art/Discoveries-755476110
This was up two days ago and I forgot to post it here :v
This is my favorite of your stories. Newly minted super heroines with a magical origin experimenting with their powers hits all my buttons,
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