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Need help with a writing correctly

09 Jul 2017 14:43 #55194 by luchodemeyer
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Hello,

It's a long times since I tried to write somes stories but I always give out because of my poor English level (I think quality of writing is too much important to be set aside).
I started recently a new try with a first chapter of a story (chapter is about 1300 words) and I plan to write at least 3 or 4 more chapters on this plot. To not be discouraged too quickly, I've decided to write this chapter as fast as possible while using Google Translate (I know, it's kinf of sh**t) and not caring that much with phrasing.

I just ask by chance if someone would be interesting to re write these chapters with a more fluent writing and, if necessary, to add his own touch ?
It's more than just correcting grammar errors in my sense but turning a story which looked written by a child into a more mature style...

I know it can be a hard work so I would understant if no answers :)

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09 Jul 2017 22:12 #55196 by circes_cup
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Not sure if I have time to do what you require, but happy to take a quick look. Willl you be posting the chapters somewhere (google drive, for instance?) where I can take a look?

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10 Jul 2017 11:54 #55201 by Monty
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Hi Luchodemeyer. I'm freed up this week from work so I could maybe take a look at it if you want? You could maybe pm me the chapter in sections on SWM if that works. Cheers, Monty.

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10 Jul 2017 12:28 #55203 by Caylane
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I'm free till I can find a job so feel free to message me :)

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10 Jul 2017 21:58 #55206 by luchodemeyer
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Thanks all for your help but Argonaut finally proposed me to give me a help yesterday!
Hope this will force me to write to the end!

Thanks again,

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11 Jul 2017 09:30 #55209 by Woodclaw
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luchodemeyer wrote: Thanks all for your help but Argonaut finally proposed me to give me a help yesterday!
Hope this will force me to write to the end!

Thanks again,


Until the end of August I'll be on only once every few days, but I really hope you will be able to put it together ;)

(formerly Anon, still Librarian)

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