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NEW Marknew story found on TheValkyrie site!

11 Aug 2007 14:22 #10051 by Sarge395
Have not read it yet. First I need to grab a bowl of Wheaties and a beer. :twisted:


"ABX Part 1
by Marknew
Cosmic Energy, Genetic Therapy -- what more does a woman need?
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Far back in the history of the universe, mere moments after the Big Bang,
matter is forming from the void, spilling and flowing, clustering and
clumping, each clump exploding in bursts of energy and light, shock waves
rippling through unknown and unknowing pre-atomic particles, creating billions of new forms of matter each millisecond. New kinds of matter. New kinds of energy. Creation, extinction, absorption, combination. A becomes B becomes C becomes DEFABC, which becomes DE GA and R2D2. GA becomes GTCA, then GATACA, but then, sadly, dies. AB becomes ABX, which grows and grows."

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11 Aug 2007 14:58 #10052 by argonaut
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Have not read it yet. First I need to grab a bowl of Wheaties and a beer. :twisted:


Now there's the breakfast of champions!

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11 Aug 2007 17:49 #10053 by Sarge395
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Ok, it was a Mountain Dew and cereal. heheh.

The story had a long buildup. The main character is infused with a sentient DNA string or something like that. It draws energy and new abilities from bodily fluids and the sun. Going in a direction I don't get excited about however. She is growing to be a muscular Amazon it appears. I'll read anything from MarkNew of course but I wish she was more of a fitness model than an Amazon.

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11 Aug 2007 18:52 #10055 by derekh37
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very interesting start can't wait for the next installment!

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11 Aug 2007 22:27 #10060 by marknew742
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Part 2 is up on Brawna.org now. I assume Diana will post it in a day or two.

I've sent both parts to Admin so they will also show up on the story bank eventually.

Sorry Sarge!

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12 Aug 2007 14:50 #10062 by lfan
An instant classic!! Perhaps the greatest compliment I can pay it is it is my favorite MarkNew story ever! Def the most detailed and well-thought out one in the genre in recent memory.....

Excellent work!

ElF

Part 2 is up on Brawna.org now. I assume Diana will post it in a day or two.

I've sent both parts to Admin so they will also show up on the story bank eventually.

Sorry Sarge!

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14 Aug 2007 00:09 #10072 by Sarge395
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Marknew, you never have to say 'sorry' to me. I would read any new story by you even if it started out with a chipmunk gaining strength and terrorizing the neighborhood cats.

Part 2 is really building steam. Much more to my liking.

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15 Aug 2007 06:31 #10077 by marknew742
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Parts 3 and 4 (the conclusion ) are now posted on Brawna. They will be on DtV today or tomorrow, but won't show up here for awhile, I guess. Admin tells me he is on holiday!

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23 Aug 2007 11:35 #10112 by admin
"ABX" by Marknew now available for download from the SuperWomenMania StoryBank. Just click on the "StoryBank" link at the very top of this page!

Thanks, Mark, for letting us host the story.


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