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Randolph and Kim
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Thanks for writing such consistantly good stories, even if they are a little gorier than I'd prefer.
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Ursa. Her time has come.
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I have to agree with you both; Kim is a selfish, gory bitch. She's SO much fun to write! I think I'm in love with her...
There'll be plenty more from her (and Randolph too, of course) in the months to come.
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sorry about the whining I just like this story
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Just what the doctor lazarus ordered! Top work.Just thought I'd post a link to a huge Keeley Hazell (the model for Kim ) picture post
Mmmmm. Keeeeeeeley....
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Having read your debut offering, I can see we like similar traits in our ubergirls. Can't wait to read Chapter 2 of Ayami.
There's a lot of folks who would say that Kim is anything BUT the "perfect supergirl", so it's great to hear that she suits some people's tastes. As for the story, well, it's a lot of fun. There's no good guys (well, none that last more than a couple of paragraphs ) so it's never dull to write and trying to see the world through Kim's superhuman, spoilt, selfish and murderous eyes is quite an entertaining way to pass the time...
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OH, MY DEAR LORD!
Hasn't the lovely Kim GROWN since Randolph's super ray smashed into her now Fabulous, Swollen SUPER CHEST....
All that Super Strength captured by Kim's almost "normal" (at that time) cleavage.
She pauses below; taking a llittle intake of cool air into her Super Powerful, Newly Enhanced Lungs before unleashing a super stream of her warm, crystal optimized; powerful breath onto tons of damaged station waggon, sending it effortlessly tumbling away from her across the highway...
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Well two BIG BUMPS actually....
Hard to believe the thread was started nine and a half years ago!
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Kim always loved to show her nubile body in her little bikini, enjoying the attention from men wherever she strolled...apart from old perv next door who seemed to have some sort of crush on her.
Then, Randolph accidentally misfired his super-ray into Kim's chest. That split-second of carelessness would change Kim and her world forever...
The word "crush" would now take on an entirely new meaning for her...was there nothing she couldn't crush between her wonderful supercharged bosoms?
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ETA Compared with reading it for the first time over 10 years ago, it somehow reads differently now to when I was a 'noob' to the genre. Awe-inspiring!
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"Yeah, right!" said Kim at the meeting with the city officials, "I can still do WHAT I want, WHEN I want. Do you really think you can stop me?" The officers looked on as one, agape as the teenage girl wrapped the solid steel bar around her super breasts over her new costume...
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Every time I see a gasoline fuel tanker passing on the road or supplying fuel in a garage forecourt, I automatically think of Kim. I even look at the size of the wheels, the steel supports of the undercarriage, the size of the cylindrical gasoline tank, and think WOW! Even after all the years since I first read that scene. Does anyone else have the same fuel tanker-studying thoughts, even obsession, or is it just me?
A great example of CF's brilliant descriptive work.
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