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Ray's Ray

13 May 2022 15:01 #74197 by conceptfan
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Afternoon all!

A brand new (written text, not audio) story is up on my website.  It's called "Ray's Ray".  Spoiler:  It's about a guy named Ray who has a ray.

evilsupergirls.com/stories/ray's ray

Please enjoy or ignore as appropriate...

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13 May 2022 19:31 #74199 by AUphoric
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I'm a fan of your new wacky, hilarious concept! Unlimited story telling possibilities at the push of a button, as Ray chooses his own adventure.

What's the worst that could happen for the world? That the evil super-gals steal Ray's ray, cross realities to gang up on humanity, and use the gizmo to make more evil henchwomen who help them conquer the rest of us.
Given the site, the question isn't whether this will happen. Only how. And how much fun it will be to read!
 
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13 May 2022 19:45 #74201 by conceptfan
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Thanks AUphoric.
Wish I'd thought of that conclusion, hehe.
Looks like just one girl is enough to give humanity a tough time for now, and I'm not convinced she's the kind to work in a team, but as Ray creates further realities, who knows what might happen...

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13 May 2022 22:02 #74204 by Monty
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Great Work Conceptfan!
There is a scene in 'Remote Out Of Control' (sorry, I cannot find the source - I think it is Part 2 of a series) where a girlfriend is turned from a frumpy, overweight, down-to-earth lass into a stunning, statuesque redhead, all just with a flick of a remote control button. It might be worth looking at for future episodes, with SuperPowered abilities thrown into the equation of course!
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14 May 2022 07:59 #74209 by Kamelmann
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Dude, what a fun and awesome concept! Beautifully written as always too, thank you so much! I can't wait to see who else gets ray'd!
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14 May 2022 10:59 - 14 May 2022 17:13 #74211 by Monty
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Ray's Ray control at work!
After Ray's colleague learns of his secret device, she leads him to the office storeroom where she demands "Ok, Transform Me!"


 
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14 May 2022 15:43 #74213 by YAGS
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Nice story, CF. I'd forgotten what a good writer you are. I need to go back and re-read some of your older stuff. A Little Bit of Fun was always a favorite of mine.

Speaking of forgotten things, I actually have the DVD of the full movie in Monty's clip. Soft core Cinemax film from the late 90s called Ultimate Attraction. Silly, but fun.
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