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Transformatrix 4000 -- Comments and Suggestions

12 Jun 2006 10:57 #5767 by conceptfan
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...and what DID Della wear?

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13 Jun 2006 00:11 #5775 by Hughster
Idaho, Alaska!!! :lol:

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13 Jun 2006 04:11 #5779 by ace191
As any former YMCA leader can tell you, she wore a "New Jersey"!

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14 Jun 2006 12:01 #5801 by ultragirl
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Maybe a little "softer" looking, though?

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15 Jun 2006 15:14 #5820 by Spulo
Maybe, but she's a good choice. That logo/photo of her at the top of the page is a bit creepy though...

Any ideas for Jill Henderson?

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21 Jun 2006 03:10 #5866 by ultragirl
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Oh! I hope I didn't kill it! I think I followed the story correctly, right?

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21 Jun 2006 17:09 #5878 by jumperprime
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Oh! I hope I didn't kill it! I think I followed the story correctly, right?


Don't worry, Ultra. Your installment was fine. the beauty of a story like this is that there is no one 'right' way to do things. Everyone's got their own take on the storyline and a pretty interesting storyline can be created, as a result

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21 Jun 2006 18:55 #5884 by ultragirl
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Yeah, but you don't want to completely alter the storyline so that it no longer makes sense. Example: It was mentioned that Denise's house was surrounded. If someone hadn't written in that it was taken care of and I wrote Denise as showing up without a soul in sight the audience would scratch their head. ?????

I just hadn't heard anything from anyone, so I was worried.

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21 Jun 2006 19:09 #5885 by Spulo
I was worried that I'd killed it (and WWDA), seeing as how mine was the last episode so far. But no, yours was great.

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22 Jun 2006 01:40 #5891 by argonaut
Hey, "Transformatrix 4000" once went for eight months without a new chapter -- and "When We Dead Awaken" for nearly fifteen -- so it's a bit early to start fretting.

Nice chapter, Ultragirl. I know you wanted to get Denise back to her family, and I'm glad you had an opportunity to do just that.

I'm going to borrow her for the next chapter, though ...

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26 Jun 2006 20:25 #5961 by angels
I think I might also drop a chapter in soon. I love where everyone has taken this... I think everyone's done a great job in keeping the characters consistant in from chapter to the next. Granted, it's easy to write Paris Hilton as an evil spoiled brat... :mrgreen:, but DeeAnn, Denise, all of them stay very true to their inclusions. It makes for a great read.

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27 Jun 2006 03:48 #5974 by argonaut
Yeah, I should get off my ass -- or rather, remain on it -- and write a new chapter myself.

I'd like to see the "secret government compound" storyline wrapped up soon, but there are so many directions the story could go afterwards.

Spulo deserves our thanks for getting the story going again, and for giving it some much-needed focus and direction. But maybe he should take a break from "T4000" so that he can get to work on his "Galaxy Quest"-inspired project!

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29 Jun 2006 15:43 #6034 by Spulo
A possible Jill Henderson? (Probably not a work-safe link...)

melissa-davis.com/lust/magazine01/index.html

Maybe not as she is there, but with glasses and a general teacherish appearance...

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05 Jul 2006 16:37 #6114 by ultragirl
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Guys, I will be out of town basically this whole month. Make sure Denise stays sweet, but has fun. ;)

(I'm sure whatever you do will be great.)

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09 Jul 2006 14:25 #6162 by Spulo

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09 Jul 2006 15:42 #6164 by argonaut

Guys, I will be out of town basically this whole month. Make sure Denise stays sweet, but has fun. ;)

(I'm sure whatever you do will be great.)


I'll be off-line myself next week (camping in the White Mountains).

I'm looking forward to reading the workshop stories when I get back -- and maybe a new chapter (or two) of "Transformatrix 4000."

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14 Jul 2006 05:59 #6245 by ultragirl
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Guess the girls got a bit of an upgrade, eh? Hehe. I hope you enjoy my latest.

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17 Jul 2006 07:22 #6263 by ultragirl
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Did scare people away again?

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17 Jul 2006 12:09 #6265 by Spulo
No, no. Next episode is up...

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