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Kneel before Roz
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Btw mob girl, not the one and stealing from a thief are some of my top favorites. Awesome writing!!!
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Would love to read that story!
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One thing I got a hoot out of was her repeatedly going into her 10-20 sentence long spiels about how great she was and how she was going to destroy them with her body and all the doomed victims could respond with were one liners like " Go home and sleep it off" or " What's going on here?" HAHAHAHAHA.
Dru....... your work is always beautiful, but you really hit the mother-lode with this baby!
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Long story short I enjoyed it and hope you keep the mean super bullies coming.
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Dru1076 wrote: I would say the response I've had certainly qualifies as "enough interest" so the next part will be published in the library. I think the readers offended by this type of story know by now to avoid Roz. To thank you for encouraging me, all replies to this thread have been sent a link to a preview of Roz pt 2. Check your PM's. And anyine who wants a link but hasnt got one can drop me a line here or send me a PM. I will hook you up. And sorry Steelknight...but the cussing stays. It's part of the package with Roz.
I was actually talking about the gay slur
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steelknight3000 wrote:
Dru1076 wrote: I would say the response I've had certainly qualifies as "enough interest" so the next part will be published in the library. I think the readers offended by this type of story know by now to avoid Roz. To thank you for encouraging me, all replies to this thread have been sent a link to a preview of Roz pt 2. Check your PM's. And anyine who wants a link but hasnt got one can drop me a line here or send me a PM. I will hook you up. And sorry Steelknight...but the cussing stays. It's part of the package with Roz.
I was actually talking about the gay slur
Suprising. Thats not what i think of when someone tells me they found the f word offensive. But my reply would be the same.
Its vulgar, and its deeply offensive. Thats WHY i used it. Its character appropriate, and honestly not the worst thing about this story.
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Those who read the preview I sent out will still find a pleasant surprise at the end.
Part 2, too large for a single posting on DA, had to split in two but is available there also.
www.deviantart.com/dru1076/art/Kneel-Before-Roz-2-755679133
www.deviantart.com/dru1076/art/Kneel-Before-Roz-2-5-755680162
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Love how ridiculously huge and obscenely powerful she gets and her creative use of her strength (super breath, flexing shockwaves, super spitting, the finger flick). I like how she gains literally TONS of muscle and just crushes everything with her footsteps.
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steelknight3000 wrote: Just read the rest, great stuff.
Love how ridiculously huge and obscenely powerful she gets and her creative use of her strength (super breath, flexing shockwaves, super spitting, the finger flick). I like how she gains literally TONS of muscle and just crushes everything with her footsteps.
Thanks for the feedback, mate. Roz is having a great time with her insane powers...though nobody else is. I have six more parts in the wings near ready, and wjll be rolling them out over the next month or so. Next part is ready to go, and will be in the library on the weekend.
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Dru1076 wrote: Kneel before Roz is a story I wrote a long time ago. Its about a mean super powered bully, basically. If there's enough interest, I'll clean up and post more. But i know most SWManiacs find super powered bullies distasteful, including most of my friends. So I might just privately share it with those who actually want to read it rather than put stuff in the library most people dont want to read.
Love it, love it, love it!
Such a turn-on!
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