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Kiraling corrections

15 Mar 2020 20:11 #67178 by anonxyzus
Kiraling corrections was created by anonxyzus
While working on the next installment of Kiraling, I discovered an inconsistent use of the terms, 'unprotected sex' and 'safe sex'.

Unprotected sex is sex between a Velorian and a Terran without the use of gold, and can be very dangerous for the Terran if the Velorian isn't properly trained.

'Save sex' is sex between a Velorian and Terran, where the Velorian is wearing gold, and much safer for the Terran. The gold dampens the Velorians powers, especially strength.

I've updated the chapters with the problems.

I regret the error.
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15 Mar 2020 20:50 #67179 by Woodclaw
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anonxyzus wrote: While working on the next installment of Kiraling, I discovered an inconsistent use of the terms, 'unprotected sex' and 'safe sex'.

Unprotected sex is sex between a Velorian and a Terran without the use of gold, and can be very dangerous for the Terran if the Velorian isn't properly trained.

'Save sex' is sex between a Velorian and Terran, where the Velorian is wearing gold, and much safer for the Terran. The gold dampens the Velorians powers, especially strength.

I've updated the chapters with the problems.

I regret the error.


Done.

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