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Alternate Supergirl story on AU - Chip Off the Old Block

28 Dec 2010 19:20 #21164 by shadar
CHIP OFF THE OLD BLOCK
BY Shadar

An R-RATED NSFW story about Supergirl

What would happen if the Visitors (borrowed from the TV show V) were in cahoots with the Amazons and they had developed a devastating series of cyborgs based on Kryptonian technology. Could the Resistance ever hope to stop them from their plan of world domination?

CIA analyst Lynda Kent (Superman's daughter) and her partner Daryl Hind are the newest members of Earth's Resistance, and together they take on the combined weight of the Visitors and the Amazons in what will become a blockbuster of a fight. Yet this Supergirl is not like any other you've read about.


Part 1:

www.velorian.net/chip_off_block_part1.pdf

Part 2: *NEW*

www.velorian.net/chip_off_block_part2.pdf

Part 3 is underway.
The fight becomes even more desperate when the evil Anna and her daughter Lisa put on new skins that are more Kryptonian than human, both of them determined to neutralize this new Supergirl the same way they have her father.

If you enjoy R-rated Supergirl stories and you are also a fan of V, you might enjoy this. Especially if you think Amazons are very bad girls.

Shadar

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29 Dec 2010 02:32 #21168 by Random321
Great work again Shadar! I’m eagerly looking forward to reading about this epic fight.

The idea of the mind modification tech is very interesting and the way you apply it is fun – opens up all kind of possibilities.

I enjoy your descriptive action as always. I’m enjoying the Daryl/Kara relationship – she’s a little fast to open up for my tastes – but I understand. I’m also looking forward to what happens with the conflicted Amy.

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29 Dec 2010 03:49 #21169 by shadar

Great work again Shadar! I’m eagerly looking forward to reading about this epic fight.

The idea of the mind modification tech is very interesting and the way you apply it is fun – opens up all kind of possibilities.

I enjoy your descriptive action as always. I’m enjoying the Daryl/Kara relationship – she’s a little fast to open up for my tastes – but I understand. I’m also looking forward to what happens with the conflicted Amy.


She was a little fast, I agree, but the premise was that they had to pull off a newlywed couple in the view of the Visitor's scanners. She was smart enough to know that two strangers who weren't actors couldn't do that without a little 'practice'. By the time they get to Geneva, they've gotta look like they are truly in love and know their way around each other.

Of course, Lynda's older sister, Petra, the Amazon, is out to test her younger sister by throwing obstacles in her way. First Sarah and now Amy. It gets a bit convoluted with Petra and Anna being in this alliance with different goals, with Lynda is in the middle (even though she doesn't know that yet).

By the way, in this incarnation of Supergirl, there is no Kara. Just Lynda and Supergirl. Hope the post-hynotic thing with her uniform isn't too weird. I was trying to plow new ground.

Anyway, working on the fight now. Lets see how far I can amp it up.

Tks for the feedback... always appreciate hearing from you.

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31 Dec 2010 16:47 #21180 by sgfan05
Good stuff, looking forward to part three

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07 Jan 2011 15:23 #21217 by Franky
Great stuff! Thanks to hear from you Shadar... :D

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07 Jan 2011 23:36 #21219 by Sarge395
Very entertaining. Always quality writing. Good stuff!

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02 Feb 2019 18:28 - 02 Feb 2019 18:28 #62781 by Franky
I just read this nice story again (Part 1 + Part 2).
Will there be the final third part in foreseeable future?
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03 Feb 2019 04:02 #62783 by shadar

Franky wrote: I just read this nice story again (Part 1 + Part 2).
Will there be the final third part in foreseeable future?


I should dig around in my archives and see what I can find of Part 3. It's been so long I don't remember how far I got with it. 

It might be worth continuing, especially if there are interested readers. My later work doesn't seem to be hitting the mark, based on feedback (or the lack thereof). 

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03 Feb 2019 12:10 #62788 by Franky
Great to read that. I always liked your "old school" stories like this one.

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03 Feb 2019 16:43 #62792 by shadar
Good news. I found a bunch of stuff that was going to be in Part 3. I'll start sorting it out and putting it together and completing Part 3, along with some minor tweaks on Part 1 and 2 to fix some bugs. 

I seem to have acres of partially written stories like this around, mostly forgotten until someone brings them to my attention. Some require more work or are less than interesting to me, but this old Chip Off The Old Block story still appeals to me. Should have finished it earlier. 

So I'm diving in, trying to do it "old school". 

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04 Feb 2019 01:12 - 04 Feb 2019 01:15 #62797 by slim36
Found a collection of files that must have been saved from velorian.org:  Anything you'd care to re-release?  

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04 Feb 2019 04:35 #62801 by shadar

slim36 wrote: Found a collection of files that must have been saved from velorian.org:  Anything you'd care to re-release?  


Let me get the Chip story finished and out there, and then I'll look at other things. Chip is turning out to be fun to try to finish given I had some of the bits and pieces for a couple of addiitonal episodes. Filling in the holes now. 

I also think I've got everything that was on the various incarnations of the AU,so its more a matter of there being demand for particular stories or series. 

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