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12 Jan 2018 19:23 #58105 by erikphandel
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I have finished the last chapter of Lauren's arc erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/The-Marvel...e-Universe-720334145

Woohoo!
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18 Jan 2018 06:28 #58174 by sidd1333
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erikphandel wrote: I have finished the last chapter of Lauren's arc erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/The-Marvel...e-Universe-720334145

Woohoo!

That was nice, thanks for sharing!
Still, once again there is that paradox. When I want a heroine to be utterly invincible, as soon as she is, the story is not going to be fun any more (metaphorically, it's those eons in vacuum). Any interesting twist may come only with an obstacle, but what could it be, if I want her to be invincible? Paradox
Has there been any discussion on that? Does anyone have any ideas about coming out of this? Does "utterly invincible" mean "no plot" as soon as everyone's aware she's like that?
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18 Jan 2018 09:11 #58178 by erikphandel
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I think there is a kind of story to be told with a omnipotent heroine, as Jasmine from EnchantedErotica has shown. But it's not the kind of story I, personally, want to tell, so I chose to dial it all back after the fun is done

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18 Jan 2018 11:00 #58182 by Woodclaw
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erikphandel wrote: I think there is a kind of story to be told with a omnipotent heroine, as Jasmine from EnchantedErotica has shown. But it's not the kind of story I, personally, want to tell, so I chose to dial it all back after the fun is done


In many ways, I think that a omnipotent character lend itself better to single episode comedy, because it's so damn difficult to build tension around her.

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18 Jan 2018 17:32 #58185 by Sarge395
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Loved it. Thank you for writing and posting all of it.
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20 Apr 2018 21:40 #59217 by erikphandel
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New story is up! This one is gonna be just two chapters long erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/The-Lioness-736840973
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21 Apr 2018 01:44 #59219 by rednecko
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Enjoyed the Lioness story. I'm wondering if Victoria is the Alter ego to the Lioness in this story. Maybe, she finds a magic power that controls her more than she controls it. It's an interesting story to read.

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21 Apr 2018 15:43 #59223 by erikphandel
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rednecko wrote: Enjoyed the Lioness story. I'm wondering if Victoria is the Alter ego to the Lioness in this story. Maybe, she finds a magic power that controls her more than she controls it. It's an interesting story to read.


Nah, she isn't, but this story is going in a similar path of what you described
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22 Jun 2018 22:28 #59969 by erikphandel
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New brand new story is up!  erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/The-Magic-Costume-728877073

I know I was supposed to finish the Lioness story but inspiration works in weird ways. I'll work on that now
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23 Jun 2018 01:51 #59973 by rednecko
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Really like the Magical element for a Superheroine transformation. Love the look of the women you chose for the wearers of the costume. 
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23 Jun 2018 04:09 #59974 by www1969
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Love origin stories, and this was a great one.  Thanks!
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26 Jun 2018 16:51 #60021 by Agent00Soul
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erikphandel wrote: New brand new story is up!  erikhandel.deviantart.com/art/The-Magic-Costume-728877073

I know I was supposed to finish the Lioness story but inspiration works in weird ways. I'll work on that now


Very cool - you can't go wrong with a sexed up version of a classic Silver Age origin.
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31 Dec 2018 13:25 #62450 by erikphandel
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New chapter up!  www.deviantart.com/erikhandel/art/Discoveries-755476110

This was up two days ago and I forgot to post it here :v
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17 Feb 2019 00:08 #62891 by erikphandel
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New story up!  www.deviantart.com/erikhandel/art/Valent...First-Date-633666809

This is a (late) Valentine's Day special, hope everyone enjoys it

Yes, I'm still working on the Magic Costume storyline! This was just a little detour :v
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18 Feb 2019 16:45 #62905 by Agent00Soul
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erikphandel wrote: New chapter up!  www.deviantart.com/erikhandel/art/Discoveries-755476110

This was up two days ago and I forgot to post it here :v


This is my favorite of your stories.  Newly minted super heroines with a magical origin experimenting with their powers hits all my buttons,
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