Wanted: Proofreader

After years of lurking and some test runs in some interactive stories, I finally decided to write a story of my own to submit to the story bank. Since english isn't my native language I'm not too confident in how well-written the whole thing is and I'd like to have someone, preferably a veteran wirter here, proofread my draft and give some advice.

That post was flawless.

I don't know if I would be considered a veteran writer, but I am always willing to proofread for technical errors.

goobers wrote: That post was flawless.

I don't know if I would be considered a veteran writer, but I am always willing to proofread for technical errors.

Yeah, forum posts aren't exactly my problem and maybe I'm just exagerating, but I remember some of my posts for interactive stories that could have used more proofreading. When I read these posts some time later I would often want to hit myself for making some obvious mistakes and not having an edit button to clean up my mess.

Then again it's also about the story itself that can still be revised before being submitted, so I'll gladly take in any feedback you have to offer.

Since I finished my draft, all I need are the emails from goobers and Anon and I'll send you the doc file (neither PNs nor emails via SWM allow attachements). Together with lfan it'll be three proofreaders which is enough I think.

preferably a veteran wirter here

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