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My new story: The Phoenix Initiative
I tried to make this new story, titled "The Phoenix Initiative" quite different from Towers in several aspects. The universe set up is different, with super powers mostly focusing on (extremely enhanced) physical strength and abilities. The number of charaters and complexity of the plot lines is also significantly higher. The story will be long (probably longer than Towers when it comes to word count) and I believe that it also will be richer when it comes to plot and character development.
I hope that you will enjoy it! Please, let me know what you thought, as you did with Towers!
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Seems like she's always having trouble liaising with local law enforcement...
A little more wistful when her solitude is not being intruded on.
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Papayoya has provided some guidance, so future images should be more in line with his vision.
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Also Susan looks so lonely, I just want to give her a big hug!
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smoki07 wrote: Still no new chapter? You're re-writing ?
Chapter 5 should be up on Sunday. Hope you'll enjoy it!
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The Highlander wrote: Reading the descriptions I thought that they would be a good bit bulkier, more of an oversized bodybuilder.
Also Susan looks so lonely, I just want to give her a big hug!
Well, they are more fitness model like than oversized bodybuilders, even if the 8' height makes them impressive anyway. As for Susan... good luck if you hug her. Not sure you'd want her to hug you back!
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papayoya1 wrote:
The Highlander wrote: Reading the descriptions I thought that they would be a good bit bulkier, more of an oversized bodybuilder.
Also Susan looks so lonely, I just want to give her a big hug!
Well, they are more fitness model like than oversized bodybuilders, even if the 8' height makes them impressive anyway. As for Susan... good luck if you hug her. Not sure you'd want her to hug you back!
Well maybe not a hug than (since it would not be healthy to frighten or surprise her) but I'd like to at least sit down and talk to her to try to
bring her out of her shell a little and cheer her up.
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AuGoose wrote: Papyoya's been providing references and review for my efforts to model the lovely Phoenix girls. So in the spirit of "aid to the imagination"...
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Is the brunette one Nicole or Nathalie?
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Papayoya's been walking me through his inspirations and I've got working figures for all of the Phoenixes now.
So, a group shot of them having a bit of fun!
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AuGoose wrote: That brunette is Nicole.
Papayoya's been walking me through his inspirations and I've got working figures for all of the Phoenixes now.
So, a group shot of them having a bit of fun!
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Thank you! They look really, really great! It's amazing to see your characters come true
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That pic of Susan next to the cop was cool and scary how big they are...
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Sorry to be annonying, But his story clicked with me so I must ask,: Will we have the next chapter in the end of this september?
PS: Don't be mad at me!!!!!!!!!!
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