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started a little interactive on chyoa

28 Mar 2019 04:27 #63436 by oldHarmonyMotion
started a little interactive on chyoa was created by oldHarmonyMotion
chyoa.com/story/Jackie-of-All-Trades.20926

I wrote 9 entries so far. I have it set to moderated, so I believe anyone can contribute, but I have to ok the final entry. That is, if you're looking to contribute. If you just want to read, go ahead!
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28 Mar 2019 20:27 #63454 by mcinvictus
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Loving this story, hope you keep it going :)

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28 Mar 2019 22:42 #63457 by oldHarmonyMotion
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thanks for the feedback. i'll try to keep it up

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30 Mar 2019 06:18 #63496 by Gargamel
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I like the story a lot, exactly my cup of tea. Great how she is so dominant and brings the attitude to support it as well. Thanks :)
Will you continue it? 
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30 Mar 2019 16:22 - 04 Apr 2019 00:27 #63504 by oldHarmonyMotion
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i updated just yesterday
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06 Apr 2019 02:13 #63634 by oldHarmonyMotion
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my last post plugging this. let me know if you have any feedback. i've hardly heard any

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06 Apr 2019 02:32 #63635 by Totally Kyle
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oogber wrote: my last post plugging this. let me know if you have any feedback. i've hardly heard any


That just happens sometimes. Frankly, I don't really have any feedback to give. I think that these chapters are pretty rushed, but that might be for the best. Shorter and simpler chapters means that you can update the story faster and other people won't be intimidated away from contributing.

So yeah, my only complaint isn't really a complaint at all, more of an observation. I just don't have any feedback to give.

Carry on.
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07 Apr 2019 02:34 #63648 by aism0
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Not much of a literary critic myself.
But your writing always checks all my boxes.
Definitely following this and can't wait for new chapters!
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