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Dunnere1 wrote: Finally finished! Notthrilled with it but I hated leaving the girls hanging.
I'm kind of sad to see this one ending, but it has been a great run. Dunnere, if you want to upload a full version of your story in the Library it will be very welcome.
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Dunnere1 wrote: Finally finished! Notthrilled with it but I hated leaving the girls hanging.
It's always sad when a good story comes to an end. But a good story wouldnt be good if it didn't have an ending.
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The Maid Game just didn't catch my interest. I've always been more interested in stories about women who make their own opportunities than those who luck into power somebody else paid for or just had by birth. Good story, just not a good story for me.
Now, the original story on that blog is flat out amazing and I'm sad it lost its creator's attention. At least he brought it to a close so we got to see the end, but it would have been so awesome to have the writer fully engaged the whole time.
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Thoth wrote: I think the Maid Game could go interesting places. I'd really love to see him do a re write of his original story. As for Accidental Hero even though it does kind of wrap up I just think there is a lot left that could be played around with, the power differential between Karen and Amy, the hidden mental powers, the fact that Karen has the information to make more people like them. I just think there's a lot more I'd really like to see him explore and heck if he doesn't want to I'd be willing to give it a shot, or anybody else on this site. But I'd really rather let him do it.
I think if there's one thing we've seen it's that he can write a great story, period. Even the Maid Game, which was not my cup of tea, was still really good. I'm personally happy to see him writing whatever gets his creative juices flowing.
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