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A work in progress...(completed)

16 Feb 2014 12:18 - 16 Feb 2014 12:19 #35542 by SCOTT R
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Thanks again for this great superchick story Dru! It will be interesting to see how Mary makes Uncle Jim cry!
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16 Feb 2014 21:07 #35543 by SCOTT R
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Grayface..."Now this, this I liked. I liked it a lot. Things I liked: "a gun Dirty Harry would've been proud to take from his holster" this is one of the best descriptions of a gun, ever! and the fact Mary worked harder at not smiling to much, very cool."


Yes I agree; Dru is an artist with words. I loved the dialog going on in this story very much. And, I also love how Mary refers to her attackers as " kung-fools." hahaha
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