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Spring 2016 Workshop - comments
Heh. Site records show that my story that would complete that loop is by far the least read of my works.
geekseven wrote: My only quibble here is the reveal of the bad guy, by name, meant nothing to me and I wasn't sure if it should have.
It often appears in stories of transformation along side transferal. I stand by Larry though: “Dear, that’s the least of what happened to you."
Overall, a strong workshop. I was a little taken aback by the shared obsession with breast size throughout the other stories.
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And 'grats to all the other authors who managed to put together some real good stuff. You're all winners in my book, but as I said a few times now, the big winners are those who got to read five really good takes on the theme.
I look forward to seeing what theme is put forward for the next round....
"Stupid Reality!" - Homer J. Simpson
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Kudos or DKC for the win -- but everyone else was fantastic too.