Awkward Lunch Date

Since the Comments are down made a comment thread about the short story i wrote.

And its pretty short, but hope people like it.

cute little short story. And you broke the drought with a nice cool mist of goodness.

Very cute.

Ah, that's the stuff.

Just the right length for it's subject. Sets a nice light mood, sticks with it, and delivers at the end.

(I'm trying not to get MORE behind on the stories!)

Thanks everyone

One of my goals in the story was to keep it as much dialogue as possible- i deliberately wanted to keep the details of the couple vague and just have it be talking until the end-hell the Lunch stuff is mainly from the title as they never specificy in the story itself what there doing.But I always like stories that acknowledge that Ubergirlness( or really any uberness) is kind of objectivly odd and silly and so are many of the tropes.

but glad for the good response. Honestly i wrote the first line of the story...surfed the web for about half an hour, and then half an hour after that published it. So it was a very quick writing process for this one-- but wanted to do a light cute story, and glad it was recived as such.

A great story! This is well written. Will there be a continuation to this story? Is it a stand alone story? Thanks

Sometimes short, sweet and poignant is just perfect. I was smiling at the end. It works.

Shadar

castor wrote: Thanks everyone

One of my goals in the story was to keep it as much dialogue as possible- i deliberately wanted to keep the details of the couple vague and just have it be talking until the end-hell the Lunch stuff is mainly from the title as they never specificy in the story itself what there doing.But I always like stories that acknowledge that Ubergirlness( or really any uberness) is kind of objectivly odd and silly and so are many of the tropes.

but glad for the good response. Honestly i wrote the first line of the story...surfed the web for about half an hour, and then half an hour after that published it. So it was a very quick writing process for this one-- but wanted to do a light cute story, and glad it was recived as such.