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Civil War

06 Feb 2016 23:12 #46370 by Woodclaw
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It's always good to see the start of a new author, here is the welcome/comment thread for TheOne25's "Civil War" story that just went online. :)

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07 Feb 2016 08:57 #46375 by circes_cup
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Definitely enjoying this story. The writing style is very easy to read. I love how Madison's playfulness makes her sinister. But most of all, the premise is original and creative, which makes story a breath of fresh air. I am looking forward to more! Welcome, TheOne25!
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07 Feb 2016 17:03 #46376 by lfan
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A great read and a welcome addition to the library. I hope more is shortly on the way, as I cannot wait to see what Lexi and Hank uncover.

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09 Feb 2016 04:02 #46391 by Sarge395
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More Madison!

Looking forward to seeing what the other powers are aside from mandatory super strength.
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16 Mar 2016 14:36 #46800 by AuGoose
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I wanted to add I've also been enjoying this. I think I know where the next twist is headed but I'm looking forward to seeing how it plays out. I just hope it's not a total one-sided blow out. I like credible threats. :cheer:
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21 Mar 2016 21:55 - 22 Mar 2016 11:48 #46867 by Sarge395
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Easy fun read. Some excellent new developments in chapter 3.

The nano tech angle will be interesting to see. Just have never thought of that tech as being a near term reality.

I wonder how many level 3's there are.
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22 Mar 2016 10:02 #46881 by TheOne25
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I'm glad you're all enjoying it so far! I'll try to improve the quality as much as I can.

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11 Sep 2016 01:35 #50183 by circes_cup
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Just wanted check in on this story. I enjoyed the first few chapters, and from this thread it's clear that I was not alone. Hoping you might have more in the works!

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11 Sep 2016 13:51 #50186 by TheOne25
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I've been working on the next few chapters that I hope to upload soon.
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24 Sep 2016 10:22 #50410 by Woodclaw
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And for those who were waiting chapter 4 just went online :)

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26 Sep 2016 08:16 #50430 by circes_cup
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I am SO digging Madison right now -- sexy, dangerous, unpredictable and so damn powerful. I love it that she can show kindness toward Charles in one breath, but in the next breath remind him that he's expendible.

She's capable of horrific things but doesn't believe she is a monster. As people go, those are the most frightening kind. Great stuff!
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11 Feb 2017 17:07 #52477 by Woodclaw
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For all you fans of TheOne's Civil War, not only chapter 5 was posted today, but you can now find a dedicated shelf in the series library.

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12 Feb 2017 03:44 #52490 by AuGoose
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Grats! Coming along nicely :). Always kind of terrifying how fragile humans are next to ubers. The slightest collision can be like a mini-car wreck. I'm kind of reminded of the opening of Deadpool - while he's a regenerator rather than invulnerable, he pretty much prances through a shitstorm that turns a lot of the regulars into hurtling chunks of wet meat.
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18 Feb 2017 07:31 #52626 by circes_cup
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I just read Chapter 5 for the second time, and I have to say, I'm really enjoying it. Getting the backstory on Madison and Allison makes them much more accessible and adds a human element to the unfolding civil war. I'm really liking these female Evo-3's and can't wait to hear more of them.

I also really like the creativity, the fresh perspective on super-ness, and the dedication to creating a true geo-political thriller, with all the complexity that entails.

As luck would have it, Chapter 5 got posted just before a spate of other story postings: five stories in six days were submitted by me and Willow. I hope people take the time to read this Civil War chapter before it slides further down on the ticker. It's worth the read!
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18 Feb 2017 13:21 #52630 by Dru1076
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We have some really great stories going right now, and Civil War is definitely one of them. There's a lot to love about this tale, and I'm really looking forward to reading more.

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