Fems Gym: The Recruit (Brand New!!!)

23 Apr 2017 12:47 #53754 by Apollo
Apollo created the topic: Fems Gym: The Recruit (Brand New!!!)
Hello All!

This is Apollo. I've been writing for a few years, publishing on various sites. But, I'm new to SWM. I recently posted my first story here, please go read it!

www.superwomenmania.com/index.php?option...e-recruit&Itemid=228
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24 Apr 2017 00:10 #53769 by Dru1076
Dru1076 replied the topic: Fems Gym: The Recruit (Brand New!!!)
Really enjoyed your story, Apollo. Thanks for sharing it with us. I hope you continue the tale, and look forward to more.

"Stupid Reality!" - Homer J. Simpson
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24 Apr 2017 07:08 #53772 by lowerbase
lowerbase replied the topic: Fems Gym: The Recruit (Brand New!!!)
The epistolary narrative in the beginning is something that works so well with FMG, I wish there would be more stories exploring that.

I really like how authentic your characters sound and the cleverness of the descriptions in your stories.
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30 Apr 2017 00:13 #53842 by spacemonkey
spacemonkey replied the topic: Fems Gym: The Recruit (Brand New!!!)
Really enjoyed the story, Apollo. I really enjoyed the vivid imagery. Looking forward to seeing more!

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