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Best story you've read
28 Aug 2009 20:22 #16566
by Sarge395
Replied by Sarge395 on topic Re: Best story you've read
I sent it to Yosh. 
If anyone sends me Chapter 5 (and Yosh's permission), I'll be happy to post more.
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Isn't there a Chapter 5 to this series?
Starts like this:
Serena was growing more and more accustomed to her new found superpowers, and was able to make it all the way from Venice Beach to her apartment in San Francisco in just about five minutes. Putting her clothes back on as she hovered above the cloud line, she scanned her building for any signs of Jennifer Benson (aka Hyperwoman). Nothing. Serena wasn't sure how to handle the situation. Would Jennifer be pissed off that someone else stole her formula? "I sure as hell would be," she reasoned. And as amazed and confident with her new powers as she was... the thought of an actual confrontation with the real Hyperwoman was enough to send chills up Serena's spine.I forgot how far I got on that. All I had to go on were the 2 chapters posted here. And I can't remember how much of the story I'd written versus how much of it was still just in my head.
If anyone has chapter 5 (I think that was the last one), could you PM it to me? Thx!
:shock: :shock: What!!! :shock: :shock: There was a Chapter 5, I've never read it. Now I hope that someone in this community have it stored on his HD.
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28 Aug 2009 21:38 #16567
by yohashuan
Replied by yohashuan on topic Re: Best story you've read
If anyone who has chapters 5 and 6 want to send them to Admin, then it's fine by me if they get posted. I'm pretty sure those are the last two.
Though I do have to say I wasn't happy with the later chapters - starting with chapter 4 - and felt the story was heading in the wrong direction. Also just felt that the story itself had some fundamental flaws that couldn't be corrected without a total overhaul, so that's why I lost steam and eventually gave up on it. If (when) I get around to doing more writing, I'll likely either start this one over from the beginning, or just lift pieces out altogether to be used as ingredients in a brand new story.
But again, that's my own personal opinion and everyone is their own worst critic, so I won't let my frustrations with the story stand in the way of having it re-posted for everyone to read. It does feel nice to see so many people putting Serena on their 'favorites' list. Thanks fellow super-pervs!
Though I do have to say I wasn't happy with the later chapters - starting with chapter 4 - and felt the story was heading in the wrong direction. Also just felt that the story itself had some fundamental flaws that couldn't be corrected without a total overhaul, so that's why I lost steam and eventually gave up on it. If (when) I get around to doing more writing, I'll likely either start this one over from the beginning, or just lift pieces out altogether to be used as ingredients in a brand new story.
But again, that's my own personal opinion and everyone is their own worst critic, so I won't let my frustrations with the story stand in the way of having it re-posted for everyone to read. It does feel nice to see so many people putting Serena on their 'favorites' list. Thanks fellow super-pervs!
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30 Aug 2009 01:19 #16578
by Woodclaw
:mrgreen: :mrgreen: What can I say? Halleluja :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
Replied by Woodclaw on topic Re: Best story you've read
I believe I have it on one of my old HD just laying around my place. It will take me a couple days to search all of them.
I sent it to Yosh.
If anyone sends me Chapter 5 (and Yosh's permission), I'll be happy to post more.
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:mrgreen: :mrgreen: What can I say? Halleluja :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
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