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Any ideas for Jill Henderson?
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Oh! I hope I didn't kill it! I think I followed the story correctly, right?
Don't worry, Ultra. Your installment was fine. the beauty of a story like this is that there is no one 'right' way to do things. Everyone's got their own take on the storyline and a pretty interesting storyline can be created, as a result
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I just hadn't heard anything from anyone, so I was worried.
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Nice chapter, Ultragirl. I know you wanted to get Denise back to her family, and I'm glad you had an opportunity to do just that.
I'm going to borrow her for the next chapter, though ...
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I'd like to see the "secret government compound" storyline wrapped up soon, but there are so many directions the story could go afterwards.
Spulo deserves our thanks for getting the story going again, and for giving it some much-needed focus and direction. But maybe he should take a break from "T4000" so that he can get to work on his "Galaxy Quest"-inspired project!
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Maybe not as she is there, but with glasses and a general teacherish appearance...
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(I'm sure whatever you do will be great.)
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Guys, I will be out of town basically this whole month. Make sure Denise stays sweet, but has fun.
(I'm sure whatever you do will be great.)
I'll be off-line myself next week (camping in the White Mountains).
I'm looking forward to reading the workshop stories when I get back -- and maybe a new chapter (or two) of "Transformatrix 4000."
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Denise lost her uniform. She essentially naked.
I don't think I described Denise as wearing a cape. I wanted a Wonder Woman approach to her.
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