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30 Mar 2016 14:06 #47067 by JonX
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Me again.

For anyone interested, I have moved all my stories from www.superheroines.net/blog to a new website at:

www.superheroinestories.com

The reason for doing this?
I don't know really - I guess that it always felt a little weird having a bunch of stories on the main blog. It never felt 100% right. And so I setup a new website designed specifically for the publishing of these ideas.

I'll let you know when I update it with the latest installment in the "A New Supergirl" series.

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30 Mar 2016 22:12 #47081 by Thoth
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I have to say the Chapter I'm most looking forward to is definitely Day 2.
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08 Apr 2016 02:08 #47199 by Caylane
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Just a heads up that a new story was posted. Day 32!

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14 Apr 2016 08:28 #47302 by Caylane
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Also gona bring it to Jon's attention, not sure if he reads this. The comments dont seem to work.

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14 Apr 2016 14:01 #47304 by JonX
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Hey! Comments on SuperheroineStories.com don't work?
Hmm.
Should do because I have everything turned on.
I'll look into it.

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14 Apr 2016 14:07 #47305 by fats
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I've posted a comment to check if it's working, and it's fine.

if you need any help let me know.

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14 Apr 2016 18:15 #47312 by Caylane
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Strange, I dont see any of them. Let alone mine

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31 Jan 2017 12:46 #52327 by JonX
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Hey all, I wanted to let you know that I uploaded a new chapter at SuperheroineStories.com - its Day 25.

It does contain adult content, so be warned.

But it also explores James's fascination with Jodie's strength, and the power dynamic that exists between the two of them, and what happens when James experiences Supergirl's raw strength first-hand.

Hope you enjoy!
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31 Jan 2017 16:57 #52328 by Caylane
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Happy late birthday to me~ cant wait for more!!!

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31 Jan 2017 20:32 #52334 by JonX
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Thanks!

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01 Feb 2017 20:13 #52345 by Sarge395
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Feel like a long teasing with this story. Ping pong back and forth. Enjoyable so don't get me wrong. Those awesome boots would be a weakness for me if she was mine. Ok now out of fantasyland and back to reality. Hope to see some videos soon.

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02 Feb 2017 07:38 #52350 by veggicidal
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I always enjoy your work!

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13 Jul 2017 16:16 #55231 by JonX
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Hey guys,

For anyone interested, I just published Day 13 on superheroinestories.com .

On Day 13, Jodie 'comes out' to James and tells him her secret - that she is the new Supergirl.

I hope you like it. I've got a million half-written chapters here. Its just hard to finish them as I come up with a new 'Day' pretty quickly and want to scribble it down. Oh well!

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13 Jul 2017 17:07 - 13 Jul 2017 22:00 #55233 by circes_cup
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I liked it! My favorite part was their lover's banter, how he feigns a lack of interest even though he is head-over-heels. I also like the way her search for a more honest relationship backfired -- that revealing the secret of her power only lead him to be more guarded and a bit emasculated. I don't remember offhand which chapter comes after this (since you don't go in order), but I'm curious to see whether he can handle that emasculation or not.

All those great inter-personal dynamics create a great framework for demonstrating how hot she is, and how hot their passion is for each other. Fun read!
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13 Jul 2017 21:57 #55241 by luchodemeyer
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Brilliant!
The best description of a throatlift I ever read, I you really manage to describe the psychologie of each of the character!
I would have like to write this myself
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14 Jul 2017 04:23 #55246 by Caylane
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Fantastic JonX! Really hope to see more from you more frequently!
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14 Jul 2017 06:37 #55247 by JonX
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Hey man, thanks! You mean the one from Day 25 superheroinestories.com/2017/01/31/a-new-supergirl-day-25/

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14 Jul 2017 18:35 #55254 by DanDud88
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Jon X, will u be updating Superheroines.net?
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19 Aug 2017 10:33 #55888 by JonX
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Hey all,

Quick message to say that I have updated SuperheroinesStories.com with a new chapter: A New Supergirl - Day 160

So this is set about 5 months since Jodie was transformed into Supergirl, and in this chapter I wanted to describe how Jodie has progressed from a relatively shy girl into this beautiful but slightly arrogant heroine.

I really wanted to write about super breath in this chapter. I've given it a shot, but I still don't think I've nailed it and I'm REALLY happy to receive advice on how to rewrite that section to really capture how Supergirl goes from blowing cigarette gently to invoking her super breath.

I really mean it - I'm open to suggestions on how to rewrite this part.

Let me know if you enjoy it.
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19 Aug 2017 18:42 - 20 Aug 2017 04:45 #55895 by Caylane
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LOVED the use of her super breath! Quite the interesting turn in how the story played out! Cant wait for more!!!
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21 Aug 2017 00:31 #55913 by Sarge395
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Great update. She is a stunning vision of what I always loved about your site. Attitude. Lifted that first thug up without a care in the world. Showed great dominance.

Hated the cigarette but I know it has no influence on her.

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21 Aug 2017 17:34 #55922 by JonX
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Hey Caylane, Sarge, thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it.

I've actually rewritten part of the story - the super breath scene, and the final 4 paragraphs. I realised that I hadn't really explained why Supergirl was now vulnerable to attack. Plus, I know that people are really into super breath and I wanted to get across that her blowing Spider across the room was so utterly easy it was like blowing out a birthday candle.

With the cigarette stuff, they're not my thing either, but the reason I put it in there was to bring out that feeling of power that she felt over those men. Here she is, an eighteen year old girl facing down these big dudes, all full of attitude, etc, etc and she toys with them, whilst completely wiping one of them out using just her breath!

And yeah, Sarge, you like that 'without a care in the world' attitude? I think thats my favourite thing about this character. :)
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04 Oct 2019 06:32 #65194 by JonX
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Day 8 of A New Supergirl is finally here!
It is Emily's first night out as Supergirl in her Supergirl costume. She is anxious, a little scared, and feels completely out of her depth. But she has a duty as the Maid of Might, and so when called upon she has to spring into action.

superheroinestories.com/a-new-supergirl-day-8/

Hope you enjoy!

PS - Would it be possible for an Admin to move this Topic into the following forum?

Forum > Stories, Writers and Artists > Showcase your work
www.superwomenmania.com/index.php?option...&catid=44&Itemid=195
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04 Oct 2019 09:04 #65196 by Woodclaw
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JonX wrote: Day 8 of A New Supergirl is finally here!
PS - Would it be possible for an Admin to move this Topic into the following forum?

Forum > Stories, Writers and Artists > Showcase your work
www.superwomenmania.com/index.php?option...&catid=44&Itemid=195


Done.

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04 Oct 2019 09:41 #65197 by Idylls
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I have to ask, why not just make a new story? There is a big disconnect with this rewrite from the other parts. I'm not really complaining about a more timid Supergirl but I'm sure there are those who also liked the previous version. 

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